Bass Flight: Beginnings

A My Little Pony Fan Fiction

Hey guys this is my first fan fiction. It is mainly positioned around my OC Bass Flight and his origins. As I am starting this I am hoping for positive feedback and would appreciate it if you would R&R. I am not the best with punctuation so be braced for unneeded punctuation.

Thanks,

Goof

The edge of PonyVille.

Twilight's POV

I sat staring at the falling stars coming from the upper atmosphere. I loved to watch the small bits of rock burn up as the fell towards the ginormous boulder of a planet we lived on. Not many other ponies watched anymore because they happened so often. As I stared into Luna's night I noticed that one of the stars was not burning the same colors as the others. Little did I know that this yellow burning... Thing, was going to change my life.

Bass flight's POV

I felt my short fur beginning to burn as I started to reenter the planet's atmosphere. I began to ponder why I had been banished by the princesses.

'I haven't done anything wrong but they had arrested a foal for being different than everypony else'.

I had to admit that I was definitely different, especially my appearance. Being a 6 year old male foal, I wasn't even fully grown yet and was still smarter than most other adult ponies. Even though I was of the Pegasi race they still seemed to shun me. My mane, tail and wings were all a Transparent gold in color, my wings being transparent golden feathers and his hair being transparent golden hair follicles. But they were not normal feathers and hair follicles, they were made of light. The light transmitted from his body and flowed the same as anypony else's hair and ruffled the same as anypony else's feathers. They didn't change color unless I became tired to witch point they would dim to a bluish color. I could retract my wings into my body when they weren't needed and make them reappear in a matter of half a second. My eyes were a golden-red and could be mistaken for a Timberwolves. This is why I thought everypony shunned and hated me, and I wished I could change so much.

Twilights POV

As the lightly yellow colored meteorite drew closer, I began to panic. I dove away from where it was going to hit. It was soon upon me and slammed into the ground roughly 5 feet from where I now laid. The meteor skid against the ground, the initial impact of the rock deafening me. All I could do was watch as the meteor continued to rip up dirt and grass until it hit a tree. I watched the tree crack and lean towards where it had been hit, worrying if it was going to fall or not. I was always curious about these meteors and drew closer to the small glowing object that was now lying in a crater. To my surprise it wasn't a rock but a small foal. The foal's short fur was ablaze in places and his mane and tail... began to change color. I watched in awe as the hair of the foal started to leak into a light aqua color, his hair seemingly transparent. I snapped into reality and ran to the foal.

"Are you ok?" I asked suddenly worried about the foal. I quickly patted out the fires spread around his body as he started to shift, only to grimace in pain. I quickly started to cradle the foal like he was my baby and teleported to the hospital.

Thank you all for reading. I have been so tied for time this all I could right today. I need to do homework and study for some more tests but trust me when I get free time I will be typing. My brother usually hogs the computer so I will have to try to kick him off more often. Tell me what you think so far about Bass Flight and don't forget to R&R. This chapter is short because I wanted to get it out as soon as possible.

Thank you all

Sincerely,

Goof