warning if you dont like contracters and stuf like that, you probley dont want to read this. This is a new story i'v been working on so I really hope you like it. I starts out kindda boring.

3,000 years ago people destored the internal flame in internal flam protected the world from distroing its self. You see when the world hits a point evel monster called tedas, they will come out of the groulnd and distroy the earth. The internal flam toke care of that, but insence the internal flam was distroyed, people called tedas taners flee the world destroing the beast.

Im one of then. Each one of us master in a wepon. I master in a sword called dina sword. I Ueki soma, im tall, red eyes and hair when I fight tedas. M natruly coler of my eyes are blue and my hair is brown. Im 15 years old. Right now I am traviling to village called Destain village. Im finally here, and my journy begians.

The town is really pretty. As I check into a hotel, I here gun shots. I ask the hotel man what it was. He looks up at me, it's the all wepon gun range across the streets. After taking my stuf to my room, I go check this all wepon gun range out. When I go in their is big statum. A girl is in the statum, she has two guns in hands. BOO, someone yells behind me. I turn fast and pull my sword out of the case and am ready to fight...