Disclaimer: I don't own dark cloud

It's rated R because I'm planning a lemon in chapter 2 or 3

My Fic is an about an alternate method of curing Lin from her illness. It starts of in balance valley.

Max and Monica headed towards balance valley. Upon entering balance valley, they saw a house which they then entered. Their they saw an owl named Argos and A sick girl named Lin. Argos told Max and Monica about Lin's incurable sickness. Monica knew of a Dragon whose tears were said to have the power to heal any sickness if they were drank. The Dragon lived in the Payon Cave which was not far from Balance Valley . And so Max and Monica set out to get the dragon's tear.

They entered the Payon Cave and searched for the Dragon. As they ventured into the caves, they saw a horde of zombies and bats coming to attack them. Monica slashed the zombies while Max shot the bats with his gun.

"That's it their all dead" Max shouted when he killed the last bat. "Same here" Monica shouted. "Wow I'm tired can we rest by the spring over their?" Monica asked. "Sure, I'm tired too" Max replied.

Monica ran ahead and then tripped, Max followed and tripped as well. He landed face first in between Monica's breasts.

"I'm sorry Monica, are you hurt?" Max said as he got up "Damn it, her breasts are really big and soft" Max thought to himself "It's okay, I'm fine" Monica replied

They sat beside each other and began to talk.

"Hmmm. I really like Monica, but I wonder if she likes me too. I guess theirs no better time than now to tell her how I feel" Max thought "Monica, Through the few days that I have spent with you, I feel that I am in love with you" Max said

Monica was shocked and could not say anything. Not knowing how to express her feelings in words, she faced him an kissed. Her tongue explored his and it explained all the she felt for him. Suddenly the cave started to fall and the both of them ran deeper into the cave

End of chapter 1

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