Deadly Favor

A/N: Hey guys! So this is a new fanfic I'm working on. It's very dark and filled with horrors, so if you like being scared or entertained, then you've come to the right place.

Summary: The incident had ruined her, made her hate who she was, made her suffer from the inside out and transformed her into something else... It was all their fault. They thought they were better than everyone. They thought they were doing her a "favor" in their eyes. But they were all going to find out just how much their little "favor" will cost them. And this time, she was not going to hold back...and she was not going to show them mercy...until they were all gone or dead...


Quote of the Chapter: "Karma comes after everyone eventually. You can't get away with screwing people over your whole life, I don't care who you are. What goes around comes around. That's how it works. Sooner or later the universe will serve you the revenge that you deserve."
― Jessica Brody, The Karma Club

Chapter 1: The Beginning of Evil


Paulina Sanchez giggled as her boyfriend Dash kissed down her neck. They had both returned to her house from a party and decided to spend it as any other teenager would. She gently pushed him away from her and walked to the bathroom.

"Hang on Dash, let me freshen up." She said turning her head to wink at him. He smirked and watched as she closed the bathroom door. With a sigh she turned on the faucet and cupped her hands to grab some water. Sighing as the refreshing cool water splashed against her perfectly tanned skin, she reached over to grab a clean white cloth. As she dabbed her face, she felt an odd sensation run through.

Ita Perfectus eris tu…a voice whispered. She looked up at her reflection and stared into her own eyes with utter confusion. She shook her head and scoffed it off as he imagination trying to spook her.

Putas tu tantus…the voice spoke once more. She grasped her stomach as she felt a sharp pain soar through her. She held back a scream and squeezed her eyes shut tightly, hoping the pain would pass by quickly.

Haec maledictio, et non affligam te…the whispered voice spoke harshly. The surging pain made her fall down on her knees. It was too much for her to handle. She opened her eyes and bit back a scream. As she looked on the ground, she saw a pool of blood, her blood. She looked down at her stomach and let out a gurgled sob. Her hands were stained with red blood.

Hoc erit tibi in maledictionem et commoveantur…the voice said beginning to lose its hushed tone. Paulina stood up on shaking legs and grasped the white porcelain sink that turned red with her blood stained hands. She stared at her stomach and slowly lifted her shirt. She whimpered as three long scratches formed, allowing her blood to seep through and slowly take her life away. She whimpered again in pain as three more long scratches formed, this time on both of her arms.

Perdis animam tuam, et vitam accipere…the voice said speaking a little louder. This time she couldn't hold it back. She let out a blood curdling scream as more and more scratches formed, all over her body and she screamed each time she felt the fire burning pain over and over again. She could hear Dash calling her name, pounding hard on the door.

"Paulina!" He shouted, "Paulina open the door!" He cried. But she couldn't move. She was frozen with pain and terror.

Abi tu per ternarium numerum, improba pretium elit…The voice spoke louder, practically screaming at her. Paulina leaned forward in pain, but something told her to look at the mirror. She slowly, still screaming and writhing in pain, brought her head up and felt her blood turn to ice at the sight. There in the mirror was a woman cloaked in black, and red piercing, haunting, eyes staring back at her brown ones. She couldn't see her face, but as she listened to her speak, she couldn't hold back the gasp of recognition of this person…this evil thing.

Quaeris quis in faciem meam...the girl said her cruel eyes never leaving Paulina's. The girl's lips curled up into a cruel smile. Paulina's eyes widened. More blood poured out of her making the bathroom a big bloody mess. On the other side of the door, Dash held back a gag as the blood seeped through the small opening of the door and the smell of metallic filled the room. His eyes widened with terror and he pounded harder, hoping to knock down the door.

"Hang on Paulina!" He cried. But Paulina couldn't hear him; all she could hear was the woman in black speaking and the screams from her own mouth.

Duo gratia salvifica speras ...the woman spoke, her voice growing colder and colder as she saw Paulina's eyes flutter close and her screaming cease. Paulina felt herself giving up, she felt the blood loss becoming too much for her, her vision began to darken and the room began to spin. She felt her tears sliding down her cheek, the pounding and cries of Dash, and the awful voice of this wicked lady in the mirror became too much for her mind.

Et facta es mihi dat corpore Tres...The lady spoke, her voice returning to the small whisper. Paulina's now lifeless body fell limply to the floor amongst the blood stained tile making a small thump and splat. She lay, her hair sprawled around her and the scratches slowly disappearing from her skin, making it seem as if nothing happened to her. The blood on the ground remained and reflected the image of the woman as she stood, towering, over Paulina's form.

Et percusserunt eam in…the woman said, her voice now a hushed whisper. Then with an evil curl of her lips, she laughed darkly and disappeared from the scene. As she did the door flung open and Dash stared in horror at the sight. He could hear the small drip drop of blood as it fell against the blood filled floor. He let out a scream as his eyes looked and stared down at Paulina. Her body pale and small from lack of blood. He stumbled backwards out of the room and ran down the hall and dialed 9-1-1. The police informed him to wait as they sent dispatchers to the scene of the evil deed.

Dash hung up and wiped away the tears. He ran a hand through his hair as he sighed sadly. He slowly walked back to his girlfriend's room and hesitantly peered in the bathroom. He paled as he looked up at the mirror. His face paled and his blood froze. The officers and police arrived at the scene and stared in shock and horror at the scene. They saw Dash rocking back and forth in a corner. As they asked him questions and talked with him, he didn't bat an eye. He stared at the mirror in the bathroom mirror and the police stared in confusion as they saw nothing on it.

For the remainder of the night Dash said nothing. He was taken down to the station to be furthered question, but he couldn't think of anything as he recalled the words on the mirror.

XxXxXxX

As the scene unfolded before her eyes she chuckled. Payback was fun, especially when she was the one doing it. Her eyes peered into the small cup of blood as she saw the look of horror on the boy's face. She felt at peace knowing she had tortured them. After all they were the ones who put her through this pain. They were the ones who caused this curse on themselves. They would all pay…

Each and every one of them. She again chuckled, knowing that no one would be able to stop her. No one would know how to anyways.

Yes, everything was working out just fine. She couldn't help but smile in satisfaction. She was so happy he showed her this power. She was happy that he showed her the joys of this.

Yes, this was something she marveled…especially since for the first time…in a long time since her incident, she was now in charge and revenge, never tasted so good.


So...what did you think? Pretty dark huh? I can't wait to hear from you guys! Please review and tell me what you think of this! I really want to hear what you all have to say!

Thanks!

'Lyssa

Author and Teenager