April 14, 2010 - OMG! I'll be ranting because of my stupidity! I can't believe it happened! Gah! I was actually going to delete my first story but I accidentally deleted my fanfic "The Camping" which I loved so much because it received 157 reviews to be exact, which was a first to me, and now it's all gone! VANISHED! I'm so stupid! *picks out hair* Ugh! I can't believe it and I'm so frustrated! Wah. I lost all the reviews I treasured the most. D: I wanna cry my eyes out :'((
But life goes on, I guess. So I'm still going to post the chapters, but I'm going to do it everyday or every other day or every week, like a normal fanfic *fingers cross* hoping that the 100+ reviews would come back. I really just wanna cry right now. :'((
I was so focused on editing the chapters then I accidentally deleted it! I'm so stupiidddd! Please, just kill me now. And after doing so, please continue on reading this chapter, and please leave a review. *pleads* Thanks. :)
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March 24, 2010 - Hello everyone. I'm sure most of you are familiar with this fic. Well, in my opinion, it sucks. Like totally. So, I'm going to do a lot of editing because this is my first ever fic that received a 100+ review. And right, there's no way in hell I'll delete this fanfic. Trust me, I was shock – but happy – to see that this fanfic gathered almost 147 reviews; seeing that it was badly written and all. Maybe what got you reading was the unusual plot. When I first published this fic, (in the year 2007) I strongly believe that this was the first camping fic thingy. That's why many readers got attached to it, and now, I'm gonna continue writing this wonderful fiction of mine. Even though I believe that now, it is already considered cliché.
This is already the edited version. Please do leave a review.
Please continue supporting this fanfic. It's summer vacation already so I'll be more active from now on, and expect lots of updates from me. Count on that. :D
Thank you very much for the people who reviewed this fanfiction. I won't let you down. :) And advance thanks to those who will review this fanfic. More power!
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN GAKUEN ALICE!
The Camping!
Written by Sitting in the Silence
(-KateDominique-)
:Chapter 1:
:The Beginning:
Loud footsteps rang through the almost-empty hallway of Gakuen Alice. A prestigious school for people who have magical ability which they called: Alice.
Mikan Sakura, a brunette, age: 11, was frantically running through the hallways of the said institute, "I can't believe I'm late again." She muttered with heavy breaths. She's been running from the dormitory to the elementary building for the past minute and when she was about to turn to a corner, she accidentally bumped onto someone.
"Itai!" She winced as her butt fell flat on the tiled floor, "I'm really sorry." She apologized as she stood up.
"So," a voice suddenly began, "It's strawberries today, huh?"
Mikan looked up and saw a very familiar pair of crimson-red eyes. "Natsume! You stupid pervert!" she began to rant but Natsume broke it by smirking, "And what's with all the running anyway?" he asked as he raked his raven hair.
"We're late you butthead!" she answered with her arms crossed.
"Ba-ka. You're 15 minutes early." He shot back at the innocent brunette.
Mikan gave him a suspicious look and glanced at her wristwatch once again to prove him wrong. But unfortunately, he wasn't wrong. Her wristwatch's second hand has stopped moving, "Oh, my watch is out of battery. I'll change it later." She said as she smiled, "Well, ohayo Natsume-kun." She greeted as if they weren't in a bickering situation a while ago. She then continued walking her way to their classroom.
Natsume can't help but watch the brunette in awe, as he did so he thought that she really is an idiot.
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When Mikan entered the classroom, she did what she usually does. Like greeting everyone in the classroom with her loud "Ohayo!" and then after that she would come and greet her best friend, Hotaru Imai, up close. Once Mikan is only an inch away from Hotaru, she would deliberately take out her Baka Gun and use it on her best friend.
Then Mikan would say the same thing: "Hey! What's that for?"
This time, Hotaru got tired of saying that it's for disturbing her, so this time she said, "Aren't you tired of asking the same question everyday?"
"Of course not! You're my best friend!" she answered, gleefully.
And this is the time when two popular and dashing boys would enter the room; the attention of the whole class would drift to Ruka Nogi and Natsume Hyuuga. It's always the same thing, really. And don't forget the moment when Mikan would greet Ruka and Natsume.
"Ohayo, Ruka-pyon, Natsume-kun" She would say while approaching the two.
Natsume continued walking, ignoring the hyped up brunette. That's another thing that never changes, well, not yet.
"Ohayo Mikan." The blonde would reply gladly. It wasn't usually like this, typically Ruka would ignore her as well, but that was a long time ago. Besides, a lot has happened and things have changed.
Mikan was going to rant about how impolite Natsume was, but the door burst open and came in a hyped up Narumi. Everybody in the class settled down.
"Ohayo!" he greeted. The students would greet back, or at least some of them.
"So, I have something very important to tell you." Narumi announced and the students started to whisper at each other.
"We're going to have a camping outside the academy." He said. The students lit up and more whispers started to grow. Narumi told them to stop talking for a while and listen to him. The students obeyed.
"This camping is exclusive for the 6th graders and Middle-School students only." He explained further, "which means there's no annoying kids but there'll be bossy elders."
The class 'awwed' but some are very excited even though there are sempais going with them. Some thought of their crushes, some thought of their friends.
Mikan was one of the people who thought of their friends, "Tsubasa-sempai and Misaki-sempai will be there." She muttered happily.
"And there will be three teachers as well." Narumi said before he forgets.
"Oww." The whole class said in disappointment.
"Well, we're leaving tomorrow, which means you have to pack your things starting now. Carry any clothing that would last for one week, and don't forget to have extra incase something might happen. Don't worry about your sleeping garments and other stuffs, we'll provide the necessary things. Also, just think that you're all going on a vacation." Mr. Narumi told them.
The class started to hyperventilate, "Well, run along now. Today is free day so that you'll have lots of time to prepare. We'll all meet at the school grounds tomorrow at 9 o'clock in the morning sharp. Don't be late." He said as he gave Mikan a wink, "Adieu"
All of them said yes and then they started talking about what would happen at their camping. It's a really new experience so they are all pretty much excited.
"I need to go now. I have lots of things to pack. Oh no, I might faint. I need to sleep early so that I wouldn't be late." Mikan continued to mumble things about what she's going to do.
"Mikan, don't worry, it'll be okay." Ruka said as he gave out a small smile, "You're pretty excited, huh?"
"Of course I am! Just imagine. A camping with Hotaru." She said as she started daydreaming about Hotaru and her having fun together.
"Baka." At that voice, all of the happy Hotaru-Mikan pictures shattered into tiny little pieces.
"Don't start with me Natsume-kun, I'm really happy today." She said as if she was angry but she was actually smiling.
"I'll pack now. Ja!" she said as she gave out another cheery smile and sauntered toward the door.
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Edited: April 14, 2010
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