Hello every one! Ok this is my first chapter story.
YAY ME!
Before you ask, yes I have got teB360's permission to use her character Brae from her story the new girl in the wammy house. Check it out it's a really good story.
Any who I should probably get this over and done with,
DISCLAIMER: Kakashisdancergirl does not own death note which means she does not own any of the characters that come with it. Kakashisdancergirl wishes to inform you that if she did own death note Light would be obsessed with power rangers, L would have lived to be 10000,00000,000, Mello would have made Matt take several hypno sessions to stop him smoking and Misa Armane would be DEAD!
Oh and also teB360 owns Brae not me, Tchaikovsky owns 'Tchaikovsky's 1812 overture' and some guy owns 'V for Vendetta
Chapter 1: the classical music prodigy
Rhythm stood in the middle of the entrance hall to her new school: Wammy's. She had just finished talking to Roger and had decided she thoroughly disliked the man. He gave of the kinda vibe he'd rather die a horribly painful death then spend his life running an orphanage.
Roger had told her to stay put while he went to get someone to show her around. Rhythm hadn't minded, the less time she had to spend in the company of that man the better. She just wished the tour guide would hurry up already. She was suffering jet lag and all she really wanted to do was sleep.
Looking around to make sure her tour guide wasn't any near here, Rhythm took out her iPod and placed the cord for her big boof earphones into the socket before taking said earphones from around her neck and placing them over her head and pressing play. Instantly the soothing music started off and she closed her eyes. The tension in the music started to build up and up as her heart beat increased with it until finally it brook out into the piece that particular composition was famous for.
It took all of Rhythm's self control not to sway to the beautiful music emanating from her earphones.
Brae stood at the top of the stair case and looked down at the girl she was supposed to show around with a confused look on her face.
The girl she was supposed to escort was supposedly incredibly talented when it came to classical music. Yet the girl that stood below her didn't look anything like a classical music prodigy. The girl wore a long black hoodie that looked a couple of sizes too big, she had long dark brown hair that reached the middle of her back and fell in and around her face, and a blood red t-shirt with an evil kitty in the middle. The girl was also wearing a tartan skirt that ended mid-thigh and long black boots that finished just before her knees. All and all the girl looked like she should be listening to punk rock not classical! To finish her look off the girl also had large boof earphones and carried a black case that looked like it was supposed to carry a small guitar.
How odd.
Brae started to walk down the stairs anyway. Maybe Roger got his facts wrong or his music mixed up or something.
Rhythm opened her eyes when she felt someone staring at her. There, at the bottom of the stairway was a girl with shoulder length brown hair and probably about her age, slowly making her way towards Rhythm. The thing that Rhythm found most peculiar however was the fact that the girl was dressed as a boy.
Rhythm quickly paused her music and pushed the headphones off her head and back around her neck.
"Hey, I'm Brae," the girl said, speaking in a voice that, Rhythm could tell, was deeper than her usual voice, and holding out a hand for Rhythm to shake.
"Hi I'm Rhythm," she replied taking the other girls outstretched hand. "It's nice to meet you."
Rhythm saw Brae's face brake out into a smile when she heard Rhythm speak.
"I can't believe it," Brae said, as Rhythm got a confused look on her face. "You're from Australia aren't you?"
"Yes, I am," Rhythm said smiling as well.
"Me too," Brae said. "Shall we begin the tour?"
The two girls headed up the stair case, Rhythm following Brae, chattering about how different Australia was from England.
"Hey what were you listening to before?" Brae asked curiosity clear in her voice.
"Tchaikovsky's 1812 overture," Rhythm replied, as if that were a completely normal thing to be listening to. Rhythm must have seen the confusion on Brae's face though because she giggled.
"Have you ever seen the movie 'V for Vendetta'?" Rhythm asked. Brae nodded her head briefly, wondering what the hell 'V for Vendetta' had to with anything.
"It's the music that's played when V blows up that statue and again when Evie blows up parliament," Rhythm explained with a smile.
"Oh, that," Brae said. I guess she really is a classical music prodigy. "Sweet."
When they reached the next floor, Brae 'officially' started the tour.
"Okay, that's the history department," she said, pointing to one side of the hall. "And that's the English department," she explained, pointing to the other side of the hall.
The tour continued on like that for what seemed like forever, when they finally stopped outside the maths department.
"Okay any questions?" Brae asked leaning against the wall.
"Yes, actually, I have three!" Brae stood, waiting for the questions. "First: ah where are the girls' dorms, second: do you have a music room, and third: why are you dressed as a boy?"
"Uh well, you see, um. I'm dressed as a boy because," brae stuttered wondering if she should tell the new girl her secret. Rhythm waited patiently for the answer to her question while Brae had an inner conversation with herself. Finally Brae decided she should warn the new comer about the psycho bitch that went by the name Nalia. "I dressed as a boy because the roommate I was supposed to have freaking attacked me. So now I'm dressed as a boy so I can live with my two best guy buddies Matt and Mello!"
Rhythm quirked an eyebrow. "Fair enough," she said, hey if the girl was attacked who was she to judge.
"Okay, follow me to the dorms!" Brae exclaimed as they both headed back downstairs and to a completely different wing of the orphanage. The two stopped in front of two large sets of stairs.
"Okay that one leads to the boys' dorms," Brae said pointing to one of the two sets. "And that one leads to the girls' dorms."
The headed up the stairs and to the girls dorms where Brae then proceeded to show Rhythm to her new dorm.
"Okay so this is the room you will be sharing with Gypsy," Brae said, producing a key from her jeans pocket and opened the door before handing the key to Rhythm.
Rhythm entered the room first and stood just inside the door, her mouth agape. Half the room was decorated in a way Rhythm imagined an actual gypsy caravan would be decorated. Brae entered the room and stood next to Rhythm, her reaction somewhat similar to the other girls.
Brae's eyebrows disappeared underneath her eyebrows and she let out a low whistle. "I knew the girl was into that kinda thing but I think this is going a bit overboard," Brae stated.
Both the girls backed out of the room slowly and Rhythm took the key Brae had given her and relocked the door before pocketing the small metal object.
"Okay," Brae said. "I know I said I'd show you the music room, and I will, but let's get lunch first,"
The two girls worked back out of the building and went to get some food to settle their stomachs.
So, what do you think did my attempt EPIC FAIL or was it okay
Is it boring and is there anything I can do to make it better?
Mello: Yeah delete it!
Me: Is it really that bad?
Mello: Of course, that and the fact that I don't like this Rhythm person.
Rhythm: BURN IN HELL!
Me:*whimpers in the corner because Rhythm and Mello get into a punch up* review please
