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So while I wait for answers about my story 'Always Waiting' I thought I would give you a few things to read and REVIEW.
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This is where it ends.
She watched his retreating figure; as he slowly walked away. Whether or not he was leaving for good was yet to be determined.
"Don't leave!" She screamed, her agonized voice cutting through the night air as the thick fog closed in around her, forming a wall between them. Her voice echoes around the alley, bouncing of the cold stone walls.
"Pleaseā¦don't leave me," her broken voice seems to waver, even in the echoes that bounced around her.
He turns slowly, his dark hair shining in the moonlight. His hand come up, a silent goodbye, a beg for forgiveness. He turns back around, his arm coming down to lightly rest at his side as he walks down the road.
She watched as he turns the corner, the pieces of her broken heart falling to the floor. Her sobs reverberate through her as she mindlessly runs forward, chasing the one thing that ever meant anything to her.
"No!" her heart quickens as she turns the corner, only to see that he has started running to. He is well out of her grasp. Maybe it fate trying to tell her that her dream, the life she wanted, was well out of her grasp.
Either way she knew she'd lost, there was no way she could get him back.
She cried out as her knees hit the gravel floor. Kneeling in the middle of the oppressed road she curls up in a fatal position, her pain becoming too much, her tears mixing with the dirt as her face connects with the ground.
She knew this was it, this was where it ends.
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