Disclaimer: I do not own ATLA… Im just another fan making a story…

My first fanfic.

Below is a concrete proof that I need a beta...This is actually my first draft (sory)... So please please please I need a beta...

I wanted to hear it, I wanted to hope that he would say the right thing. To make it all better, to make it so that things will be alright. To not worry, to not cry, to not scream and anguish. I hoped I wanted, that he would say the right thing to do the right thing, I wanted, I hoped!
But no, he didn't know what to say, he didn't know what to do. He said the wrong thing, he did the wrong thing. "Shut up!" I shouted and kept on shouting "Shut up! Shut up! Shut up!" He did not know what to say − he didn't made it all better, he didn't made it all right.
"Shut up! Shut up!" An echo, a rasp, a rustle of the leaves…