Hi there. This one deserves an explanation. If you're reading my story 'Wonderwall II', you might have noticed that at the end of chapter 7 I asked for opinions on the next one. Action or smut. Chapter 8 turned out to be action.

Rigel100 requested the smut option. I'm very, very grateful for their constant reviews and encouragement - so I wrote the smut option anyway : ) Thank you Rigel! I hope this one doesn't disappoint.

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A really fun shower / alternate chapter 8

Jane smiled. She wasn't ready to say goodnight. Something deep inside whispered there was more for her, much more. Gently caressing Miri's back she suggested, "Come upstairs, sleep with me. Hot shower, then bed." The seductive tone in her voice was unmistakable.

Miri kissed her before answering. "Sounds great." She lazily reached for her panties but realized they would never hide the large sex toy. She grinned as she touched the slick cock between her legs. "Let me take this out first."

"Leave it in," Jane smiled mischievously, "it's gonna be a really fun shower!" She handed Miri a white cotton bathrobe while she haphazardly threw on her own clothes. "It's extremely late, we're not going to run into anyone."

Sure enough, as soon as they stepped into the hallway... "Shepard! What are you doing up so late?" Like a lovesick puppy Samantha Traynor stared at the Commander. "Errr... your shirt is inside out. And your belt is undone."

"Oh! Eh, well..."

Noticing Miranda Samantha's jaw dropped. She'd never seen the woman so... disorganized. Her black hair was completely messed up with a few strands stuck to her forehead. Tightly holding the bathrobe she was obviously hiding something.

Samantha gasped - and felt a spike of heat. Is she wearing anything at all under that robe? Seeing Miri's bare feet her eyes widened. Naked. She's naked.

For a few seconds it was dead silent as she eyed the duo up and down.

"So. Miranda and I got... we've got a meeting. Bye Traynor."

Before Samantha could blink they'd bolted to the metal doors leading to - the showers? They have a meeting in the showers? What the...?

Imagining the two women naked and wet in the shower she shivered. That is so hot! ... does Liara know about this?

What would she see if she opened the door? Perhaps Miranda was injured and Shepard was helping her? That must be it. Jane is just helping her. Perhaps I can help too. Feeling a bit guilty she placed her finger on the door-button. And pressed it.

Nothing happened. However, pressing her ear against the door she did hear Miranda laughing out loud with Jane whispering something. Didn't sound like Miranda was injured. Didn't sound like a meeting either.

"Edi - please open the door. I eh... I need a shower."

"I apologize Samantha. Commander Shepard has instructed me that no-one is allowed to enter for the next 120 minutes. No one."

"But... but..." A loud noise came from inside, like someone hitting their elbow against the wall. Besides the constant noise of splashing water she heard Jane's laughter turn into a loud, guttural moan.

Oh my God! Are they really...?

"Samantha."

She could picture it. Soaking wet from the hot water Jane Shepard and Miranda Lawson trembled in each other's arms, hungrily kissing while their hands explored their eager, naked bodies. Jane would-

"Sa-mantha!"

"Eh... yes, Edi?"

"Please respect their privacy."

"...Yes. Of course."

Edi's reprimand stung her more than she expected. Blushing lightly she backed away from the shower door, trying in vain to ignore the excited, extremely sexual moans coming from inside.


Shepard shed her clothes, casually throwing them in the corner. She growled, "Of course we have to run into Samantha! Does that woman know my every move?"

"I think she likes you." Miranda smiled. She turned on the hot shower and dropped her robe.

"I know. And I like her too. But she's so... nosy."

Grinning, Miri took a bar of soap. The hot water felt wonderful on her shoulders, her head. "Mmm... come here. Let me soap your back." She tenderly kissed Jane's neck, touched the gorgeous auburn hair. "Never thought I'd be taking a shower with you, Commander."

Jane moaned hungrily in approval, appreciating the gentle lips on her wet skin. She curved her back, pressing her behind against Miri's groin. "Oh!" Looking over her shoulder she marveled at the sight - the sex toy appeared to be a part of Miranda, same beautiful skin tone. The thick shaft felt warm, promising. With a happy sigh she nudged it between her legs.

Miranda rubbed the soap over Jane's slim waist. "So eager Commander! Let me clean your back first."

Jane had other plans. Noticing her heart pound in her chest she became aware of a needy, empty feeling in her core. She wanted it. Badly. "I'm not waiting - I want your dick." Angling her ass she reached between her legs and rubbed the cock over her swollen pussy. Rolling her hips, her fingertips expertly guided the large tip, sliding it in her greedy cunt. "Yessss... oh yes! Here we go Lawson!"

She placed her hands up against the wall and rocked, passionately fucking the head of Miri's massive cock. Over and over it almost slipped out before she thrust down again, taking it in her excited heat. "Feels good... shit that feels good..." She glanced backwards, "how's that for you?"

Miranda groaned. The toy worked exactly as it should - feeling the velvety flesh of Jane's sex made her dizzy with pleasure. "Amazing. Your pussy... so tight... so fucking tight!" Wishing to focus on Shepard she barely moved.

Jane was stunning. Her coppertoned skin shone with wetness as the hot water cascaded down her shoulders, her back. Arms spread high above her head, palms flat against the wall she was taking her pleasure, impaling herself, sliding her aroused pussy up and down the large dick. Her incredibly slim waist moved like magic, causing her ass to slowly, beautifully gyrate. Sexy little moans filled the shower room as she intently, deliberately fucked herself.

"Oh... oh..."

Drinking in the sight a red-hot mist clouded Miranda's brain. A warm throbbing ignited her groin, sped up her breathing. For an amazing minute she just stood there, watching. Letting Jane have her way with her.

Un-be-lievable...

Filled with love and affection she rubbed soap all over Jane's stunning curves. Such a slender waist, such a gorgeous ass. Reaching out, she playfully twirled her fingers through the woman's wet hair. When she finally spoke, her voice was hoarse, raspy. "I love this... Gods you're beautiful."

"Ngghhh... Come on - enough staring. Grab me, fuck me. Why don't you fuck me?"

"Yes. Oh yes." Letting go of the soap Miri planted her hands on Jane's hips and started thrusting, matching her friend's rhythm. The squirming body felt amazing in her hands. She loved the feeling of Jane's ass rocking into her.

"Ohhhh..." Moaning with joy she tightened her grip on the slim waist, driving her cock deeper. The incredible sensation of her shaft opening up Jane's tight, hot sex caused her to gasp for air. "Jane! Oh my goodness... it really feels like I'm inside of you. I'm really fucking you. I love feeling your pussy - so soft and wet!"

Jane glanced over her shoulder. Perhaps she shouldn't have. The scorching hot display nearly made her come. Soaking wet from the hot water Miranda Lawson's alabaster skin glistened in the warm light. Her perfect tits swayed lightly with her sexual movement. Eyes glazed over with lust her face was distorted in a mask of intense pleasure. "You are fucking me Lawson. I don't want you to stop."

Bucking more wildly now she felt the massive cock splitting her open, driving to the very depths of her. "Oh! So big! You're so big!" Feeling that gorgeous thickness filling her up shot sparks of excitement up her cunt. She wished this could last forever. "My pussy... you make me feel so good... so fucking good..."

Moving in perfect harmony they took their pleasure, worshipping their wet, excited bodies in a celebration of primal lust.

Planting her hands on Jane's behind Miranda lovingly massaged the proud orbs, enjoying the supple flesh under her fingertips. Feeling beautifully wicked she pulled the asscheeks apart, fully exposing her friend's pink sex. "Damn!" So. Hot.

Barely believing her eyes she gasped. Her thick cock pumped in and out, gloriously spreading the inner lips of Jane's pussy. Swollen, willing, the hot cunt glistened with water dripping down. "Wow. I love it! Wow!"

Knowing she would never forget the sight she marveled at the situation. How on earth did I get so lucky? Groaning with joy she tightened her hold on Jane's ass and thrust even faster, stronger, enjoying the wet sounds of her cock sliding in and out and the blunt slapping noise as her hips collided with Jane's behind.

"Yes! Miri... fuck me! Fuck me!" Screaming out her pleasure Jane felt her legs tremble, felt her inner walls flutter around the massive pumping dick. This was rougher then she'd expected but she loved it. Miranda's powerful grip on her ass caused her to moan with joy. "Fuck me! I love it! My pussy... please oh please fuck me!"

Miranda felt her orgasm, wet, powerful, growling beneath the surface. She wanted to wait - fucking Jane was just too good. This had started in her room, quite a while ago and still she wasn't satisfied.

How much sex can we have in one night?

"I'm getting close..." she growled, "I don't want to come yet. I'm having waaay too much fun. Turn around. Let me see your eyes."

Feeling Miranda pull out Jane groaned with needy frustration. Turning around she hissed with want, making eye contact. "You got me so hot! I'm so fucking horny!"

She lifted her leg. Pulled Miranda snug. "Grab my thigh. Bit higher, yes, like that. Now let me..." Aiming the thick shaft at her pussy she used it to part her folds. Feeling fantastically obscene she dragged the large cockhead up and down through her wide open slit. They both watched, eyes glued as she played with her pink inner lips before slipping it in. "Yes!" Throwing both hands around Miranda's neck she pressed their bodies together in the most intimate way imaginable.

Almost taking her foot of the ground Jane allowed her weight to drive the massive cock back inside. "Hmmph!" Balancing on her toes she rolled her hips - feeling it twist and screw deep inside made her cry out with pleasure, "Oh! Oh fuck!" She sensed her inner walls kissing the thick invader, coating it with wetness.

Miranda's eyes rolled backwards. Holding Jane's leg up and sideways - the woman was wide open for her. She pressed Jane's back against the steel wall. It took her only a split second to resume thrusting, fucking into that marvelous, willing body. "Shit that feels good. Your cunt... so good!"

"Oh... oh..." Moaning in the fabulous tempo Jane stared lovingly in her eyes. "All y-yours Lawson."

The inviting words aroused her even more. "Oh Jane..." Cupping Shepard's ass she used biotics to fully lift her friend of the ground, pressing her back against the solid wall.

In the same motion Jane circled her legs around Miri's waist, clinging to her friend. Completely opening herself, completely surrendering control. "Oh I like that - hold me just like that, hold me. Now shove it in! Go ahead - shove it in!" Crying out her pleasure she felt the thick shaft sliding into her heated sex. Miranda's strong hands kneaded her ass, explored her crack, lifting her with ease. Trapped between the powerful, tall body and the solid wall she had no choice but to get fucked. Exactly what she wanted.

She purred in Miri's ear, a low, sultry sound. "I love your big cock. My pussy... my pussy's so full. I'm yours. I'm all yours. Do whatever you want with me."

Something inside Miranda snapped. Feeling all of Shepard's weight, holding that wet naked body was too good to be true. Thrilled beyond belief she plunged forward, wantonly fucking into her. "Oh shit... oh shit..." Listening to Jane's needy whimpers she felt her thick shaft sliding into her friend, "Nice... nice and t-tight. I love feeling you."

Glancing down Miri saw her large ivory shaft pistoning in and out of the gorgeous pink cunt. "Damn!"

"There we go..." Jane whimpered hungrily, "open me up! Fuck me Miri. Fuck me!" She bit her lower lip while staring deep into Miranda's brown gems. "Like that - oh yes! I'm so full! You're so deep inside of me!"

Miranda held her stare while using Jane's own weight to drive the final thick inch inside.

"Hmph!" Jane grunted. The feeling of the massive shaft buried deep inside, completely filling her was incredible. Her sex pulsed, clenching with joy, shooting raw lust into her brain. "Lawson! Oh... oh fuck!"

The water streamed down on them as they passionately gazed deep into each others eyes. Time stood still, their interwoven, soaking wet bodies twisting and squirming, yearning for more pleasure.

Miri could sense all of the tension Jane was carrying and she was determined to release it. Tightening her hold on the firm ass she lifted Jane - and let her sink back down, basically screwing the shorter, lighter woman up and down her large, throbbing cock. "I'm going to do you. I'm going to do you good. I - love - this!" She felt Jane's legs tremble around her waist.

Shepard mewled. She could barely believe it. Pinned between the wall and Miranda she was completely helpless, open. Miri rammed into her, using her trapped body for her pleasure, fucking her like a wild animal. Jane loved it. With the hot water raining down, both her ass and her pussy stimulated she felt a massive fire roar deep inside. "Gods! Miri! Give me that big fat cock! Do it! Ooohhh..." Sensing the hyper-sensitive nerves of her sex scream with joy she knew it would be soon. "Don't you dare stop! Almost there... I'm almost there!"

Panting in tight little bursts Miranda felt her climax building, "Me too. I want to c-come in your pussy. Can I come inside of you?"

"Of course. I w-want it. Fill me up."

Grateful as hell Miranda kissed her, a needy, longing kiss. Feeling Shep's nails clawing at her back she harshly bit her lip. "Come with me."

Jane tensed, Miri heard her suck in her breath before screaming out. "Aaaargh! Oh my God... Miri!"

Holding her tightly Miranda loved the wicked shocks pulsing through her friend, loved the way Jane's heat spasmed around her excited dick. She came.

"Shepard! I'm... coming.. I'm fucking c-coming!" She whimpered next to Jane's ear as she released. Thick spurts of wetness flew from her twitching cock, squirting deep into Jane's pussy. "Fuck! Oh fuck!"

Jane gasped. Feeling the sticky juices flooding her sex, feeling her inner walls flutter with orgasm she moaned with joy. "That's it! Give it to m-me!"

She got her wish - Miranda kept spouting, shooting more and more come inside of her. Way too much, Jane felt it oozing from her slit, leaking down her ass. "Damn! Oh!" Thrilled beyond belief she kept bucking, driving her soaked cunt up and down, aching for another orgasm. "Miri... I... again! Oh Gods!"

Screaming out loud, desperately clinging to her friend, her mind erupted with pure, raw sex. "Aaargh! Oh! Oh fuck!"

Miri couldn't believe she had some left. But the scorching thought of coming deep inside Jane drew it out of her. "Shep-ard! Damn! Ohhhh..."

Twitching with pleasure they clung to each other, blown away by the shocking intensity of their climax.

"Oh... my... goodness..." Miranda finally panted, shivering with aftershocks.

"Mmm..." Humming with satisfaction Jane swayed in Miri's hands. Her pussy glowed with happiness, treasuring the lovely fullness deep inside. "Damn that thing is big. No, don't put me down yet. Not sure I can stand." Knowing Miranda could easily hold her she squirmed, enjoying the warm, strong hands all over her ass. "Mmm... nice."

"I'll hold you as long as you want. Gladly." Her lips found Jane's. Intimately kissing they enjoyed each other while the hot water caressed their glorious bodies in a neverending stream of heat.