Chapter One:

A/N this is a story idea me and my friend came up with a couple years back. It stars a 3 OC characters that portray my friends and me. Some of the characters in the story act a little different and also this does not follow the story line for shit. So without further ado chapter 1

They are sitting at table and Toreb hits on Keitorin "Hey babe"

"What do you want" she asks.

"Your address "she bitch slaps him.

He falls to floor "hey babe we can work this out"

She stomps on his foot "Come on babe" she stomps on his other foot

Zakku is sitting their Laughing his ass off She turns to turn and stares him down with deadly gaze. He tries to shut up but can't help but snicker she socks him. He flies backwards onto floor

"Hey someone should dust down here." Zakku says that then starts laughing.

"What are you laughing about?" Keitorin asks him angrily.

"It doesn't matter." He replies. "And neither do you." He mutters to himself.

"What was that"! She asks angrily and raises her fist.

Iruka-sensei rushes in just in time to stop her from punching him again.

"KEITORIN! What are you doing?" He yells.

"Teaching him a lesson." She replies.

"Keitorin Sariban you should be ashamed of yourself."

"Yeah" Says Zakku.

"You too Zakku. Hey where's Toreb?"

"Down here." He says from the floor.

"What are you doing down there."

"Ummm… Taking a nap." He says that then winks at Keitorin.

"No he isn't Keitorin beat him up." Zakku says that then snickers.

Iruka sighs then says. "You three need to learn to work together or you're never going to succeed as a team".

"Then why don't we just not be a team." Replies Keitorin.

"You three were assigned together now get up and follow me."

They follow him to the training field

"Ok Iruka what are we doing here?" Asks Toreb.

"We are here to introduce you to your new sensei."

"Oh who who who?" Asks a very eager Zakku.

"Andoryu Shirubesuta." Replies Iruka.

"Who?" Asked a very confused Toreb. "I've never heard of him."

"He's a newly assigned jonin and he is going to be your sensei."

"Ok when do we get to meet him?" Asked Keitorin.

"Well he is supposed to be here by now but I'm not sure where he is."

"Is that him?" Asked Keitorin who pointed at a tall figure with dark brown hair confidently striding towards them.

"Why yes it is."

"Hello Iruka. These are my new trainees I presume?" Asked Andoryu."

"Yes, This…" He said pointing towards Toreb. "Is Toreb Kutsuya, Next to him is Zakku Uiruson, and next to him is Keitorin Sariban."

"Sup." Said Toreb.

"Hello sensei." Keitorin said kindly.

"Sup sensei." Zakku said. "Want to hear a joke?"

"No thanks. Ok it's nice to meet you all." Replied Andoryu.

"Ok Andoryu I'll leave you all to it then." Said Iruka before disappearing in a poof of smoke.

"Well then who's ready to start training?" Asked Andoryu.

"Yeah." They all said at the same time.

"Ok firstly we are going to have a little test."

"What kind of test?" Asked Keitorin.

"What kind do you expect? A beauty contest." Zakku says this than starts laughing like crazy.

"Idiot." Keitorin mutters under her breath.

"Iruka was right. You three need to learn how to work together." Andoryu says to them. "Ok time to get started."

"What are we doing first sensei?" Toreb asked then moved closer to Keitorin. "Are we working as a team?" He said this then moved even closer to Keitorin.

"Get away from me!" Keitorin said loudly to Toreb then went to punch him.

"Keitorin!" Said Andoryu then grabbed her wrist to prevent her from punching him. "That is not how we treat our comrades."

"Then make him stop hitting on me." Demanded Keitorin.

"Ok, let's move past this and get started training. Firstly we are going to have a little sparing match to test your skills as individuals."

"Ok sensei who's first?" Asked Toreb.

"Well You and Zakku."

"Awesome." Toreb and Zakku said at the same time, "Bring it on."

They move to the center of the field. "Ok on the count of three begin. One, Two, Three!"

Toreb dashes forward at Zakku. But Zakku who has known Toreb for years anticipated this and threw Kunai at him. Toreb dodged them but not easily with the amount of momentum he had. When he dodged them he turned to the side, which gave Zakku the chance to strike. He rushed forward then threw a punch at Toreb, Toreb turned forward just in time to see the movement and blocked it easily. Now that they were close Zakku realized he had no chance. Toreb was far more skilled than him at taijutsu. All Zakku could do now was attempt to block the rapid strikes. Toreb threw several quick punches and Zakku got into the rhythm of it and began to feel confident. Toreb saw the look on his face and did a quick kick to Zakku's shin. Zakku was totally caught unaware and was thrown to the ground. As he fell he saw Toreb swing a punch towards his ribs and blocked it just in time to stop it. Now Toreb was in complete control. Or so he thought. He pulled his arm back to strike and as his arm came down Zakku rolled out of the way and kicked his shin. He jumped up then swung a quick strike towards Toreb ribs. Toreb parried it easily, and then swung an uppercut to Zakku's jaw. The hit connected but not very well because Zakku jumped back. Toreb aimed a kicked at Zakku's knee. Zakku jumped back more then threw a kunai towards Toreb's hand. Toreb pulled out a kunai just in time to block it. He threw it at Zakku. After he threw it he regretted it, he just realized Zakku hasn't used his knives yet and that is his primary weapon. Zakku slipped two knives out of his sleeves as he jumped towards Toreb. He parried the kunai with one knife and thrust at Toreb with his other knife. Toreb didn't react quickly enough and it scraped his hand. The fight continued like this for a few more minutes, with them both swinging back and forth occasionally hitting each other. After those few minutes Toreb got the advantage. Zakku who doesn't have an equal amount of stamina as Toreb, had started to grow tired. Zakku threw a punch, and Toreb realized that his moves were getting slower and sloppier. He countered the strike with his fist, and then stuck right after with his fist into Zakku's chest. Zakku collapsed to the ground in a tired exhausted heap.

"STOP!" Shouted Andoryu. "Good job guys. I found one problem with the fight though."

"What is it?" Asked an exhausted Toreb.

"It took you nearly 10 minutes. In that time on a mission the enemy could have had reinforcements arrive and you would have been outnumbered."

"Well we are a team so we would be working together right sensei?" Asked Keitorin.

"That's right Keitorin. Also I noticed that neither of you used any ninjutsu."

"We aren't very skilled at ninjutsu sensei." Replied Zakku.

"That's ok. You will get better and you only just got out of the academy so I didn't expect you to know many jutsu."

"What about me sensei?" Asked Keitorin who just realized that she has yet to go yet.

"Oh yes. You three go home get some rest and come back prepared tomorrow. I will test you all and your skills as a team."

"Ok sensei." They all say at once. Then they run off to their respective homes.

"Gosh Iruka was right. They are a handful." Andoryu says this then turns around to leave.

"Oh hello Andoryu. What are you doing here?" Asked a tall dark haired man.

"Oh hello Asuma, what brings you down here?" Asked Andoryu.

"I'm coming down here to meet my new students. What brings you down here?"

"My new trainees just left. So we are here for the same reason I guess."

"Who are your new students?"

"Toreb Kutsuya, Zakku Uiruson, and Keitorin Sariban."

"Oh. My new students are Shikamaru Nara, Choji Akimichi, and Ino Yamanaka."

"Well I guess I'll be seeing you around then. Bye." Andoryu says this then disappears in a poof of smoke.

The Next Morning

Where are they? Wonders Andoryu. They were supposed to be here an hour ago.

At Toreb's house

Toreb wakes up. He looks over to his clock.

"OH CRAP!" Toreb yells then jumps up with a shock. "IM AN HOUR LATE!" Toreb starts to rush around his room to get his clothes. After 5 minutes he's ready and rushing out the door. He's halfway to the training field then he runs into someone when he turns a corner

"Hey watch where you go…" Toreb starts to say then realizes who he ran into.

"S… sorry. I…it's a…all my f...f...fault." Hinata stutters.

"No it's all my fault." Toreb says than he helps her up. "So what's your name? Mines Toreb, Toreb Kutsuya."

"M…mines H...h…Hinata H…Hyuuga." She stutters shyly.

"Well Hinata it was good to meet you. I gotta go." He says this then runs off to the training field.

A/N Ok so please review and help me become a better author also no flames. If you don't like OC stories than don't read it. This is rated M for a good reason and later on you will find out what it is.