Hey this is my very first fanfic and piece of writing ive ever written alone that's not for school. I accept anything you have to say about my writing good or bad SO PLEASE review and tell me your thoughts!
This Chapter has been edited by the amazing RedNemi!
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"A freak of nature
Stuck in reality
I don't fit the picture
I'm not what you want me to be
Sorry..."
Natalya sang as she walked through the Faron woods. Her voice was pretty good, but no one seemed to care about that; she wasn't evil, but the Hylian's never treated her fairly because she was different. She wished she could be accepted, even if she was a freak, even if no one knew what she was—she thought she was just a Hylian with a strange appearance. Her hair was long and black and ended at her waist when it was down, but she always wore it up in a high ponytail so it ended in the middle of her back, leaving her bangs to cover her right eye, though she had grown accustomed to its presence over the years and could effectively see through it. Her skin was white, but not bright, and her eyes were strangely colored in comparison to everyone else's. (A/N: Basically her eyes/eyebrows are like Midna's from Twilight Princess, except they're a deep purple instead of red.) She was unusually tall, and a birthmark in the shape of angel wings filled her back. She believed that all life had meaning and that what lies in the inside of a person should matter more than the outside.
She wasn't completely alone, though—she lived in a cabin there in Faron Woods with a girl named Selena, and they looked after each other like they were sisters, and the Sheikah were nice when she saw them, but only Impa came to visit every once in a long while. But she still wished others would care.
It's getting late, I should start heading home or Selena'll-
Her thoughts were interrupted when she heard several screeches behind her.
Instinctively she pulled out the sword and shield that Selena gave to her when she was younger.
SLASH!
She decapitated a Bokoblin and blood spurted everywhere. Others began to surround her as they got closer.
STAB!
She stuck another straight through the heart, twisted the blade, then pulled it out while trying to defend herself from the others with her shield. She counted the enemies; there were at most ten. She went to stab another one, but a Bokoblin that had snuck up from behind bashed her arm with a club, knocking her to the ground.
Great, she thought. That's gonna leave a mark.
She looked at her arm quickly and saw blood, but decided to worry about it later instead of freaking out about it now. She dropped the shield and fought with the sword in her other hand, using different moves so as to avoid being hit again, and managed to kill the rest of the mob with the one arm.
"That's odd," she thought aloud, "the most Bokoblins I've ever seen together is five or less."
Another screech made her jump and she turned to see at least fifteen coming her way.
"What the hell!?" she exclaimed as she stabbed one in the stomach, pulled her sword out through its side and cut off another one's arm, letting it bleed to death, only to see two more come out of seemingly nowhere.
"Ok...new plan!" she said, and thought. Aha! The big tree in the middle of the woods. There were a few Bokoblins inside, she knew, but it would keep her from these ones since the only way inside the tree is to teleport, swim, or fly. Knowing Bokoblins couldn't do any of those three things, she internally thanked the Goddess and RAN! She then could have sworn she heard a very faint snap!, then there was a chiming sound and everything went quiet. She stopped, then slowly turned to see nothing there. The Bokoblins were all gone—that entire horde.
Then she heard a chuckle that echoed and sounded as though it was coming from everywhere. She looked around, then felt a presence behind her, and she turned before it got too close, seeing a man with dark brown eyes and white hair that covered the left half of his face. There was a purple diamond, the same as the purple under his eyes, behind his hair. He was dressed in diamond attire with a cloak, red on the outside and purple and yellow diamonds along the inside. He had grayish skin and two pointed ears. The pointed ears didn't really phase her but she felt as if she had seen him before, but brushed away the thought when he spoke.
"Now, what's a girl like you doing out in the open, where my master's monsters could murder you?" he asked in a creepy way that Natalya a bit, but she didn't show it, wondering whether or not it was a good time to say a smart remark.
"Just going for a simple walk, that's all. It was a little surprising to see to many monsters though," she answered. "Did you do that?" She gestured to where the Bokoblins had been just a minute ago.
"Yes, I did," he said.
"That's interesting. Now, what's a girl like you doing with such an awful master?" she asked, giving her best smile and mentally scolding herself for teasing the man for his somewhat feminine appearance when she didn't even know what his powers included, besides getting rid of monsters with just a snap of the fingers. But he was a demon...and he did save her. She was trying to decide if he was good or bad. She noticed a look of anger on his face and before she knew it there was a rapier pressed against her neck.
"I am not female, I am male, and my master is not to be spoken of in that way, do I make myself clear?" he asked.
Ok, bad, definitely BAD! she thought, simply standing there wide-eyed and nodding. The sword disappeared into a bunch of diamonds.
"Good."
"Ok, now why did you save me?" she asked. He pulled his lips up into an evil smirk. Well that can't be good...
"Well, first I must apologize for being so ill-mannered, for I haven't yet formally introduced myself. I am the soon-to-be Demon Lord of the Surface and current Lord of Arcadia. You may call me Ghirahim, though I prefer to be indulged with my full title, Lord Ghirahim, but I'm not fussy," he said.
Oh great, perfect actually...a freaking demon LORD to my rescue. This can't be good, especially with the whole soon-to-be-Demon-Lord-of-the-Surface thing, she thought.
"Now what's your name—it's only fair you tell me yours," he said.
Ok, new name, think, think, think...
"Kyra," she said after a moment. She was surprised by how quickly the name came to her.
"Kyra," he repeated. "Means 'ruler.'"
She loved the name even more now, and was proud of herself for picking a cool name she didn't even know existed.
"Yeah, now I believe I asked you a question which you haven't yet answered, quote: 'now why did you save me?' unquote," she said, kind of annoyed. His smirk grew bigger.
Goddess can he just get to the point?
"Tell me, child, do the Hylians take you as an outcast?" he asked.
Ok...random, but no harm in answering, right? She pointed her sword at his neck, stood up straight, and said, "First of all, I am not a child, I am a teenager, do I make myself clear?" She mimicked him. He lightly laughed, looked her in the eye, and said,
"Yes. Crystal." She lowered her sword and he continued, "Now, you still haven't answered MY question, quote: 'do the Hylians take you as an outcast?' unquote." He was now mimicking her, which made her smile, but the smile soon faded.
"Yes, try freak! Just another piece of trash left on the ground, too different to get a chance to be known!" She growled towards the end, "But are you or are you not going to answer my question?"
"But of course I will answer your question," he said, looking more evil by the second. She could have sworn the purple under his eyes got darker. "Your answer is..." he put a hand on her shoulder, which made her flinch a bit but she kept her ground, still angry, but calming herself. "...I thought you would make a good slave for my master." Before she had time to move he snapped his fingers and they were somewhere completely different.
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So tell me what you think! good, bad, should i continue? please reveiw!
P.S the lyrics are from the song "Strange" by Tokio Hotel ft. Kerli (I never use my own lyrics in sake of someone stealing them but once I post my songs online I will use them!)
