Yes my first fanfiction. Constructive Criticism welcome. Please Enjoy.
Disclaimer: Warriors Erin Hunter's

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Lightningsoul
Looks: Golden fur which is a tad long and sky blue eyes.
Personality: Quiet, Solitary and smart. He has a kind heart but trusts scarcely and talks little. Strong fighter, though he's only confidant when he's fighting.
Clan: ThunderClan

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I hissed, the blood pumping in my ears. I would show this ShadowClan cat no mercy.

I clawed his underbelly, he belt out a yowl of pain mixed with fury. I dodged his forepaw and jabbed him in the shoulder.

" Retreat!" I heard Blackstar call. The cat I was fighting scurried off quickly. I smirked, and starting heading back to camp.

" Okay everyone go see Leafpool, I don't want any of my warriors injured." Firestar mewed. I had not got injured so I decided I'd skip the trip to Leafpool's.

" How in StarClan's name did you come back without a scratch, Lightningsoul?" Ashfur asked me. I shrugged and licked my golden fur clean.

" Lightningsoul, Sandstorm and… how about you Whitewing. Up for a patrol?" Firestar asked. I nodded." Sure," Sandstorm mewed. " Okay." Whitewing mewed.

" Wait, Lightningsoul, before you go. Come here for a moment." Firestar ordered. I nodded and padded over. " Would you like to mentor Marigoldpaw? I know you've only been here for 4 moons, but you have certainly proved your loyalty." I nodded happily.

" Well, good. Her ceremony shall be tonight."

Lightingsoul nodded and joyfully padded over to Sandstorm and Whitewing. They exchanged odd looks.

The 3 cats headed out on their patrol.

" So you think ShadowClan will try to reclaim that piece of territory?" Whitewing asked.

" Not if they know what's good for them." Sandstorm commented. Lightningsoul's light blue eyes wandered aimlessly across the forest as the two she-cats chatted.

An unfamiliar sight caught his gaze.

A long haired chestnut brown tom with amber eyes stared unblinkingly at him. The creature sat on a long thick branch.

Lightningsoul unsheathed his claws, he snarled. Sandstrorm and Whitewing looked around in confusion,
" What's up, Lightningsoul?" Whitewing asked.

" Look, up there, on that branch." Lightningsoul replied, pointing his tail at the branch. The two she-cats raised their eyebrows. Lightningsoul wasn't sure if they did this because they didn't see the cat, or because he had spoken.

Lightningsoul spoke scarcely; hearing him speak was a rare event. Lightningsoul was a more solitary cat then others.

" Nothing is there, Lightningsoul…" Sandstorm answered.

Whitewing nodded, " Erg… maybe you got hit in the head during the battle or something… Why don't you go see Leafpool? Sandstorm and I can handle the patrol for now."

Lightningsoul wasn't sure if he should take her remark as a caring gesture or a insult. Yet whichever it was Lightningsoul nodded slowly and padded back to camp, the sight of the long haired tom strong in his mind.

Lightningsoul reached the camp. He made his way to the medicine den.

" Lightningsoul, weren't you on patrol?" Firestar asked coming to where Lightningsoul was.

" I think I'm having hallucinations… so I came to see Leafpool.." He murmured very quietly.

Firestar sighed, " Probably an injury to the head from the battle… Should've saw her earlier… anyways, carry on.." He dismissed.

Lightningsoul entered the den, Leafpool rose her head from the herbs she was mixing,

" Ahh, Lightningsoul. Your first visit to the medicine den." She commented, padding over to the golden tom.

" So, what brings you here, Lightningsoul?" Leafpool asked, wrapping her tail around her paws.

" I… erm… was having hallucinations…" He admitted, his voice barely above a whisper.

Leafpool nodded, " What was the hallucination?"

" It was a… cat… with… Brown fur and… amber eyes…" He murmured.

Leafpool nodded, " You fought in the earlier battle, am I correct?" She asked.

" Yes, " Lightningsoul answered slowly.

" Did your opponent get any blows to your head?" She asked, her eyes darting over Lightningsoul's head.

Lightningsoul shrugged, " I really do not believe he did… My head feels no pain…" He answered.

Leafpool nodded, " Interesting." She remarked, "Lightningsoul, do you know any brown cats with Amber eyes?"

Lightningsoul shifted uncomfortably and shook his head.

" Did he have a resemblance to anyone you've met before?" Leafpool questioned.

Lightningsoul thought for a moment. He sighed heavily, looking at his paws, " My… mother…" He breathed.

Lightningsoul was quite uneasy about mentioning his past.

Seven moons ago Lightningsoul was with his mother, Hidey. She looked a lot like Lightningsoul except she had shorter fur and amber eyes.

She got sick from rat poisoning and Lightningoul had tried all he could to save her, but he couldn't.

After his mother's death he blamed himself for not taking better care of her. His heart felt heavy with despair even thinking of her.

Leafpool nodded, seeming to notice the hurt in the blue-eyed tom's eyes.

" Lightningsoul, " She began, " Do you have a… brother?"

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Done first chapter! Hope you all enjoyed it!

Yours truly,
-Violetbreeze