This is my first fan fiction, so please be kind. I really just hated how the midseason finale ended so here is my version.
Michonne
"Hey Michonne do you think you could come to Atlanta with us to get Beth?" Rick said as he looked over the walls to make sure that they were safe for his kids.
I was a bit puzzled until I realized Tryeese was a pacifist; he would be much more help babysitting than at Alanta. "Sure Rick. And why don't we also tie up Gabriel? I don't think we trust him. " I say, I didn't want anything to happen to those Carl and Judith, so tying him up would eliminate that danger.
Rick looked thoughtful for a moment, until he replied "Good idea, one less thing to worry about while we are gone."So we continue fortifying the walls so that they could be safe. "All right in about 15 minutes we are heading out." He started informing people. Then I realize I probably should go and sharpen my sword.
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In the car Rick is talking about how we should conquer them and so far it is the best strategy. "Everyone listen up. " and pulls out a piece of paper that he starts to write "okay so this is them we need to ….." I could see the genius of the idea, though I think if it was Tryeese here then we would have a different story.
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Maggie
Everyone else had left so I'm left with dumb and dumber, I try and fix a temporary shelter for Eugene but if he didn't wake up soon I doubt he ever would. I glance at Abraham while shielding my eyes, damn Georgia heat! Still not moving, I walk to him grabbing a bottle of water for him. "Get over yourself" I tell him, I am so tired of his shit. After all he was the one who dragged us from the group "We have all lost someone." I say that while thinking of my daddy and Beth, "So what if he was lying get up and move on. That is the only way we can survive out here. Now drink." I thrust the bottle of water at his face hoping that I had finally gotten through to his thick skull. Looks like I did because he takes the bottle from my hand and starts to drink.
"His plan was the only reason I am here. Now to find out it was fake along… but I will survive." He said the last few words with more force than the others.
I look around and find that the rest of the group is coming towards me, with water. It even looks like Tara has a….yoyo. wow I never that that even such a small object like that could make me so happy.
Glenn walks up to me and brushes his hand on my shoulder in a comforting manner. "We should go back" he said "I mean there is nothing for us here, so why don't we go back?" I look at him and nod, "There is nothing for us here" I echo.
I am sorry if they seem out of character, Please review I really could use some tips.
