This Feeling

All characters belong to Veronica Roth

Warning : OOC, Typo


It's noon. Time for lunch. Today is the day after the ranking were announced and Edward loses an eye.

Actually, I didn't stab Edward's eye. But Drew did. He was so scared to get kicked from Dauntless because he's in the lowest three position on the rank. So Drew immediately stuck a butter knife into Edward the rank one's eye without thinking. Jeez, what do the others think about this? Of course they accuse me. What does Tris think of me? Will she hate me more?

I walked aimlessly in a hall that I don't know. I let my feet guided me, then I stopped when I saw a blonde girl sitting on the floor while hugging her legs. She looked small and fragile from the outside, and I know from the beginning that she is Tris, the stiff girl from Abnegation that I secretly love.

"Tris?" I called in doubt, and Tris stood. She gave me a suspicious look and I could see there was a little fear there.

"Tris... I want to talk," I looked down at the floor, pondering my decision to tell her my feelings that I hide since on the train, after I decided to choose Dauntless. I like Tris from the beginning, and my feeling for her grows when I see how brave she is for a stiff from Abnegation. What a fool I am, trying to tell her joke with words that Tris considered not a joke. She hates me.

"You better do it soon. I have many affairs," Tris said, I looked straight into her eyes.

Alright. This is it. Now or never.

"I know you think that I'm a coward.. I admit that I'm a coward sometimes, but not always," I said quietly.

"Well, you're a coward. Moreover your decision to stab Edward. Ranking 2 is not enough for you, huh?" Tris fake a laugh.

"It's not me! It was Drew! Gosh, Tris. Let me finish my words first," I said, she look surprised when I mentioned Drew.

"Tris.. I want you to know something. I've never liked a girl before, I was so focused on my goal to be the best Dauntless. So I don't have time to think about a girlfriend. But, you know what? I think I love you. From the first time I saw you on the train, I like you" I continued, and saw Tris looked in disbelief.

"You? Like me? I mean really, the strong Peter likes the stiff?" Tris asked and I nodded.

"You.." Tris punches my stomach, "Are," and punches my waist, "A bastard," and punches my cheek.

I felt blood running from the corner of my lips, but I'm too shocked to move. It doesn't hurt. But why is she doing this? I knew she will reject me. But why does she make me bruises?

And then Tris do something that startled me. She reached up and put her hands around my neck. She.. She hugged me. And she cried.

"You're an idiot. Why don't you just say? I also had the same feelings," she cried.

It took 1 full minute to catch those words, and I breathed a sigh of relief. Tris? Tris likes me too?

"What? Repeat it," I begged, Tris releasing her arms and looked at me with her teary eyes.

"Which one? You are a bastard?" Tris smiled mischievously as she wiped tears from her eyes with the back of her hand.

"Don't play with me," I said, smiling so wide that I can feel my corner of my lips hurts.

"Don't smile like that, you idiot. I love you," Tris put her small hand on my cheek and pulled my face closer to her, and she kissed my corner lips that bleeding because of her fist.


FIN / to be continued? you choose. leave a review! xoxo

A/N : this is my first Divergent fict and my first fanfiction using english. I'm sorry if my grammars are bad, etc. like I said, this is my first time. But I will really appreciate it if you leave a review:)