Hey, it's my first Bleach fan fiction also my first HitsuKarin fic
This fic inspired from an old manga which owned by my auntie. It was so good, brought tears and such. It's titled 20 Years but I forgot its mangaka, gomen. The story was about an 18th years old girl who had been fallen in love with a radio broadcaster guy who a year older than herself and had a kind personality. Short story they were dating, had promised to get married when the guy turning 20. But since the were dating, the girl forgot that she was third year high school student and had final exam nearly, she forgot to study, always sneaking out to meet his boyfriend until they went from Tokyo and spend a night together at Yokohama without the family of girl's knowledge. In Yokohama, the guy showed the girl a huge ferris wheel which located at middle Yokohama city from hotel's big window which they checked in. The morning after the back to Tokyo, her father who knew whereabout his only daughter raged out and slapped her as he told her strictly that the girl wouldn't go anywhere until the exam was over. But being thick head, the girl ran away after she got email from his boyfriend who wanted to meet at nearly park. Instead of happy because he could meet his girlfriend, the guy gave her nothing but a sad/hurt face. Wasting no times, he told her that he won't meet the girl after this and he wouldn't see her face again. As he went, the girl who has just recovered from her shock fell down and broke to tears.
Am I babbling too much? Well, if you want to know the story just ask me and I would be pleasant to PM you :)
Of course I'll make difference on this story instead of taking the whole version from the manga, like the character personality, hobby, etc. Toshiro will not being the kind hearted and caring prince charming or Karin will not being the mellow, naive feminine girl. Just see what will happen on my version okay?
Like other authors, I'd appreciate reviews you left after read this story. And since I'm not native English speaker, please be able to understand my bad grammar.
And now enjoy the first chapter...
Chapter One - Promise
Karin's POV
What the hell Yuzu doing?! These past five days she couldn't stop listening to radio every night and with volumed up! Neither of oya-jii or Ichi-nii protested about my twin's new hobby. Yuzu even brought the radio from her room to kitchen while she prepared dinner and I watched soccer league on TV. I asked Ichi-nii once to let me spending the night watching final World Cup at his apartment since he had sleepover back home at the moment, but he told me that his apartment was under renovation.
"Uoowh Yuzu darling, this broadcast is so good, they even played my favorite song back when I and your Mother were still dating!" Kurosaki Isshin, my idiotic dad seemed overjoyed as he swirling around kitchen.
Yuzu smiled widely and her eyes got even wider. "I knew you'll like this broadcast," she replied as Ichi-nii extend his bowl to be filled by Yuzu's homemade chicken curry.
"They even had quiz at the end of broadcast, but I win nothing despite I listened to them every night!" Yuzu pouted like a third years old kid. I rather interested on this one because they gave some money and prize for the winner. Maybe I'd like to join the quiz after this.
Dinner wasn't last long and I was being silent instead yelled to Ichi-nii who stole my apple or punched oya-jii who being too loud as he sang a song with Yuzu. I went straight to my room where I could lied my back to bed and playing my smartphone. Fad, I listened to radio via my phone. A soft yet husky voice was heard, saying that quiz would be announced right after one song played.
I listened to Masayume Chasing by BoA as I waited for the quiz. I wasn't exited though, but who knows? Maybe I would be the winner on my first time joining radio broadcast.
Five minutes later, the soft husky voice was back. I don't know, but I thought his voice was so mesmerizing and reach into my deep heart. I've never heard a voice like his, it was possible he had the most beautiful voice in the world. It made me wondering, if the voice was beautiful, what about his looking?
"Now the question for today's quiz. Where Borobudur Temple is located? We will wait for minutes before choose announced the winner at the end of broadcast," said the broadcaster, making me stirred up and back to reality.
He questioned where Borobudur Temple is located? Jeez, that's really an easy question. As I send the answer via text message, the door of my room opened like there was a storm. "Karin-chan! Please help me, where's the locate of Borobudur Temple?!" Yuzu asked with just one breath and she held her phone so tight. Too bad, I've sent the answer before her. Lmao.
"Indonesia. Good luck Yu," I answered while held my laughter.
"You have said it for hundred times but your cheering never bring me winning!" she said rapidly, her stare was on screen phone. "I'm going back to living room~" and she was gone without closed the door. What a bad habit of Yuzu whenever she got over excited.
But before I closed it, Ichi-nii came and give me his sweet smile. "Yo, wanna take a walk with me?"
I smiled widely and nod. Been a while since my last walk with Ichi-nii, and since he asked me first, I accepted his offering with pleasure.
I grabbed my sweater before went out. Along the way, we talked about anything. School, final world cup which winned by Germany (I made a bet with Ichi-nii and I lost because I held over Argentine and he held over Germany), etcetera. We took detour to Karakura High School where Ichi-nii graduated 3 years ago and then he treated me ice cream. Even though he was college student, he was damn rich bastard because he got part time job as photographer and he was famous enough on his campus.
We went home after brought snacks at mini market near our house. I just walked in to living room when I heard Yuzu screaming my name as she ran down the stairs. She got teary eyes and without a second, I was hugged by her. What the hell happened to my twin?!
"Karin-chan! Let Otou-san hug you tooooo~" But before he could touch me, I launched a kick to his beard face which sent him flying to the wall.
"Ichigo, please help me from your sister, embrace your pitiful Otou—" Before he could finished his line, Ichi-nii dropped a fist to his jaw, made him suffer more. I wanted to laugh but Yuzu were crying on my hand.
After finished her sob, she let go of me and wipe off her tears. And now my turn to asked her. "What happened that made you cry like a girl who had losing her favorite teddy bear?"
Yuzu took a deep breath and said, "Karin-chan why didn't you say that you join tonight's quiz about that Borobudur Temple thing?!"
How could I forgot the quiz that I answered an hour ago?
"Uhn, how do you know that I participated too?" I asked while lead Yuzu to the couch on living room and Ichi-nii back with a glass of water for Yuzu.
But Yuzu only sat for a second because she stood up and screamed right in front my face. "YOU WIN THE QUIZ KARIN-CHAN!"
— to be continued —
Haha, cliff hanger :p I want to make you curious about what prize Karin would get. How she and Toshiro will going out or you have another question? Then, stay tune, but before you leave, please left reviews. I accepted critics which build my writing style or your thought about this chapter, should I continue it? Jk jk, ofc I'll continue :)
Until next installment xx — stoicfacade
