Chap1 The Capture
It all happened when the car came.
A certain snake by the name of Rattlesnake Jake was making an attempt to cross the road, in an attempt to find something that would give him an idea on how to go about killing his so-called 'brother' Rango. He didn't even notice the car until it was right ontop of him he was so lost in his thoughts.
SKREEEEEEEE BUMP
When he woke up, he was in alot of pain.
"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!" He yelled.
He then noticed his back was broken from landing on it after the car knocked him into the air. His hat was gone and his gattling-gun tail was broken as well. At least he wasn't dead, but he was still mad as hell.
He then said "Great! Now what do I do if ANOTHER one of those things come! And WHERE is my gun and hat?"
He lay there for 10 minutes, not able to move. Then a tall shadow approached him.
He looked up and saw a creature that was as tall as a cactus and stood on two legs. It had long black fur growing out of its head, but no where else. It wore glasses on it's face and had deep blue eyes. It also had little brown dots on its face. It wore clothes like most people he knew did, but it was unlike anything he had ever seen someone where before. It's fur-less skin was a pale peach color, and it wore a sad expression on it's face.
"Poor thing." it said. "I think I can help you, but I don't know if you'll make it getting hit by a car and all." It then proceeded in an attempt to pick him up.
"No way in hell are you going to eat me you freak of nature! I got things to do with my life, and I ain't going to be eaten like this! It is just a plain disgrace!"
Unfortunately, all 'it' heard was a deep hiss.
"Shhhhh. Don't worry, I'm not going to eat you." It said, somehow reading his mind. "I am a doctor and I think you need some help. Now come here and I will get you somewhere where I can help you out."
'A doctor?' he thought. 'This thing is a doctor?'
He then proceeded to say, "I don't need no help you damn fool! I can take care of myself!"
'It' heard another hiss and then said "Whoa there little buddy... You need some medical attention and I don't think you'd like getting ran over again."
It then continued to reach it's hand toward him.
He showed his fangs to try and get his point across. Without his gun, he couldn't do much else.
"I don't think you can bite me since you can't move, but just to be safe I'll put this metal sheet underneath you." It grabbed something in a bag across it's back and then pulled out something metal. It slid the metal 'thing' underneath him, and then slowly picked him up with it.
'Great. Now where am I going?'
He was high up in the sky, and could see alot of things he hadn't noticed before. Such as the a black replica of the thing that had hit him next to the road.
It continued to walk towards the black machine and then opened a door that was on the back of the thing. Inside was a glass box with an opening at the top. It pulled him inside the machine and placed him in the glass box, then put a plastic sheet on top of him. He couldn't get out, even though he couldn't move,he still started to panic. He had been captured by some unknown giant!
"Now I am heading back to the highway for a sec, be good and stay put."
Kit had never seen anything like it before, a beautiful rattler in the middle of the road, back broken and tail cut off. The poor thing had probably been crossing the road to find something to eat. It was a miracle it was alive, but a miracle nonetheless. She certainly hoped she could fix it up and let it go on it's merry way, but she needed to head back home to Florida soon. She guessed she could take it with her till it healed, and bring it home to Texas when she came back next year. She doubted it would like that, but Cassie would at least have some company.
She then walked back to the road to see if see could find it's tail so she could sew it back on.
All she found was a small piece on metal that looked like a tiny little gun and a hat.
"...A hat? And a gun? Well it may be his. Might as well take it."
She then walked back to the car.
Jake was hollering and yelling about his current situation.
"WHERE AM I? WHAT IS THIS THING I AM IN? WHERE DID THAT CREATURE GO? WHY DID IT LOCK ME UP?"
He considered yelling for help, but then decided not too because asking for help was un-manly in his opinion.
The thing then returned, with his hat.
"Is this yours Mr. Snake? I found it in the road so if it's yours here you go." It then put the hat beside him. At least he had his hat. But what about his gun? He needed that if he wanted to break free.
"Alright Mr. Snake, let's get going to my hotel room. That way I can give you something to help with the pain your probably feeling."
"How many times do I have to tell you? I DON'T NEED ANYONE'S HELP DAMMIT! And quit callin' me 'mister'! I go by Rattlesnake Jake an' that's it!"
"Well if your so bored your pissed off about it, I could tell you a little bit about myself. Just so we get to know each other." It said putting a metal key in a lock behind a wheel in the front of the machine. It then went and twisted the key and the machine came to life.
"I don't WANT to get to know you! Let me go you damn fool!" He spat, freaked out by the loud humming sound coming from the black machine.
"Alright then! I'll get started! Jeez, you sure are tempremental..."
"Sigh... Whatever..."
As it turned the wheel, the machine began to move.
"Holy shit!"
"Going crazy back there are ya? Well if you want to I guess I can move you up front so you can see where we're going. Plus, you can hear me better!"
The machine stopped as the creature stepped on something. Then it reached back and carefully grabbed his glass box and moved into a leather chair in front of the machine.
"Alright , let's get started. First off my name is Kit Bremming, I am a veteranarian, which is a doctor for animals of course, and I am from A place called Orlando, Florida. I usually come here every year on vacation, but I just can't keep away from the desert in case some critter needs help, like yourself. So I basically work all the time if I really had to say it..."
And on they went to the hotel room.
Well that is the frist chapter, if you want to flame go for it, just don't go hollering and cursing at me. If it's boring just say so, and if you think I shouldn't continue the story, feel free to say so. Depending if I get reviews to continue it or not, I will either continue it if you like it, or just delete it if no one likes it. Remember this is my first story, so be the best critic you can. That way I can be a better writer in time (hopefully). And also remember this is MY storyline. If you want to borrow it, just ask, but remember, it's rude to steal. Caio!
