Loren we'll it my 18 bday I expect to have a change this year in my life. Or nah. We'll before my mom died she said "18 18 Loren that when your life will change it has to" I don't know what she met by that but what ever happen I hope it good.

Time pass

It time for my party I'm ready nothing yet happen today and it almost over only thing that really happen was my dad sent me a letter from jail didn't really want to read it I mean Trent I haven't seen him since he tried to rape me and I called the police on him and I had to go to the hospital for 2 weeks because I had all those bruise on me and I had deep cuts on me. But as I'm getting dress for my party that my foster mom ( for special purposes ). She not that most responsible "mom" she allows me to do what ever so this party is going to be fun and may be a little dangerousness with the drugs. At the party was a lot of people because as my best friend Rachel invited I don't have a lot of friends I'm not the most popular person in the world.

30 mins later

I walk down the stair with a pretty blue long glittery dress with sliver high heels with light makeup on. When I get to the bottom Rachel comes and hugged me like she try to squeeze the life out of me when she let go of me she smiles at me I don't really wear dress it not my thing. I'm more of a tennis shoes person. So after a couple of mins of talking with Rachel and one of her old friends a guy tall muscle shape guy comes and ask to dance with me.

Eddie so I get to Loren party with a tux on to blind in it all black. I mingle with some of the kids their then I see Loren walk down the stairs and she goes and talk to a girl it her friend Rachel I'm sure I've been watching her 18 years I should know. I know Loren likes and dislikes from top to bottom I know as much and a little more then she could image. I walk up to her for a dance we dance we talk .

Loren: why you want to dance with me?

Eddie: because your the birthday girl

Eddie voice is so firm Loren hand is around his neck and Eddie hands is on her hipps

Loren: oh make since

Loren kiss Eddie on the cheek

Eddie: you know your really beautiful

Loren laugh in his shoulder

Eddie with a smile: what I say

Loren: you know you don't have to lie to me because it my birthday

Eddie: I'm not

Eddie look around make sure no one was looking at them Eddie grab Loren hand and they walk outside to a black charger

Eddie: hop in

Loren: what why

Eddie: I want to show you something

Loren hop in they drive up to moholand they get out and take in the view

Eddie: dance with me

Loren: but there no music

With that music come on it like a soft dark song they dance Eddie spend her around and she keep spending and the floor disappear now she was standing on fire

Eddie: don't freak out or the demons will come and get you

What is he talking about where am I who is he

Eddie: love all your questions will be answer just stay with me or you will be in trouble with out me

Loren ran and took his hand they reach a mansion

Loren: wow who place is this

Eddie: ours this is where we'll be spending of life together you might want to go get some rest my queen we have a long day tomorrow

Eddie show her around and then took her to her room