I got rid of my other story with Lionpaw in it, I felt it wasn't giving enough detail and wasn't a good enough story. I believe I've gotten rid of two stories already but I guess this one will have to do. PLS REVIEW AND NO FLAMES. This is the first story I've written in awhile v.v…. The allegiance will be in the 2nd chapter.
Full Review: Jasmine is an exiled and unwanted kit, her mother was murdered before her very eyes and to make things worst so was all her friends and siblings. When she runs away from her home and comes across ThunderClan, what will happen to her now? And if they find out she's the granddaughter of Scourge will they want to eliminate her as well?
PROLOGUE
A small breeze made a small kit twitch as she blinked in the cold darkness. She shivered cold enough to not worry about her rumbling stomach. The malice she had seen in the last few days made her bite her tongue bitterly. Her grandfather had been a horrifying cat, and worst of all many cats hated him even though they followed him as if they believed the same thing he had. She had been running for days now, the snow just hadn't stopped. Thoughts raced throughout her head just as the snowstorm started to get thicker. Now freezing and on the brink of death, she heaved air into her flank hoping, praying that someone would save her.
How'd you like it? I don't think it's great and all but I'm working hard. Please leave a nice review.
