Hello! This is my first fanfic!

I know there are a lot of grammar errors in this story, and I will really appreciate any of your correction about it.

This story is about HitsuKarin! Yeah, I really love this pairing, as well as IchiRuki in this anime (Bleach)!

Enjoy the reading~

Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach even though I really want to.


God's Daughter

Chapter 1
A Princess or A Prince?


The sun is shining brightly, today is another peaceful morning. All people are busy, the situation is so noisy, with people move back and forth from a place to another places, selling or buying things, working, greeting and talking to another person, no exception at the palace.

In the palace, all people are busy too. The prime minister is talking seriously to another minister, king, and the prince. Teachers and guards are also busy running and searching for a certain person that is suddenly disappeared at study time, again.

"Have you found him?" a teacher in the study room asked the guards. The guards just shook their heads to indicate 'No' answer. They are tired for running around the palace and the garden to search that person.

"WHERE IS THAT BOY?" The teacher shouted, furiously kicking the chair, veins popped up at his head.

"Sensei…" a brown hair girl said, came into the room. The guards hurriedly bowed to her and just rose when she told them to rose.

"Princess Yuzu…" the teacher greeted then sighed. He never ever taught a student that would suddenly disappeared in the middle of studying.

"Was she disappeared again?" Yuzu asked, giggled.

"Yes…" he answered then sighed again. Teaching here every day can make all teachers crazy just because one person. But suddenly his eyes widened.

"She?" he asked Yuzu. Yuzu just giggled. Then she sits down on a chair.

"I don't think you can find her when she is playing hide-and-seek. Let's study, sensei…" she said calmly.

However, the guards and the teacher are shock, they don't move, they are standing like a stone. There is just one thing in their mind. 'NO WAY! THAT PERSON IS ACTUALLY A PRINCESS ?'

Outside the study room windows, on a big, tall apple tree, a certain raven hair person just smirk seeing the teacher and guards' expression.

"I win again."


In the other room in the palace, the king and prince is discussing something important with the prime minister and the other minister.

"Well, I don't think she want to go. I mean, you know that she really hate party." The prince said boringly. Everybody just sighed. Of course they know about it and who is the prince talking about.

"But, she must go. It is rude if she don't attend the party tomorrow. Ichigo, convince her that the party isn't that bad." The king said to the prince.

"I will try. But believe me, the moment I go to her room and open the door, I will just get a letter that is written, 'I will be back two days later' from her." he said unemotionally while reading other mail.

"Honestly, I never think that a princess will act like that. Never ever I meet a lady like her." the prime minister sighed.

"She is hardly a princess." The other one added.

"I wonder if I raise a girl or a boy." The king said sadly.

No one knows that this person is a girl. At the beginning, all of them, except the one that had know her from she was a baby; think that she is a boy. She act like a boy, speak like a boy, dress like a boy. Who can tell that she is a girl? No one.

Just like Ichigo's prediction, that girl is currently running out from the palace, leaving a memo for them. She dresses like a normal citizen, going to her secret place. The forest.


She walk while watching her surroundings. She love her country, her kingdom. Her kingdom, Karakura kingdom, is an old, big kingdom. This kingdom is peaceful, no war, no fighting. They all live in peace and happy life.

However, a lot of things have change that disturb this peaceful life. It was started from the engagement of Prince Ichigo with a noble woman from Seireitei Kingdom, Kuchiki Rukia.

It is a secret to all of people that in Seireitei Kingdom, most of them –guards, nobles; whoever worked at the palace- have power. Those powers make them a strong kingdom. The one that know about that is the king, Kurosaki Isshin, and the prince, Kurosaki Ichigo.

However, she knows it. There is no secret that she doesn't know. She is the best at finding information. She also knows that her father and her brother are also having a power. That is why Ichigo can engage to Rukia.

What all people didn't know is that actually she herself has different powers. Yes, she, Kurosaki Karin, also has powers. She can control them well, making no one know about it. She never uses it in front of people, and never shows it to the other.

Just like her favorite quote, "If you want someone to keeps your secrets, never ever let anyone to knows your secrets."


I will be back next week. No one is allowed to take a decision about anything that has to do with me. If someone does it without my permission, I won't ever go back to palace anymore.

K.K

"I had told you this afternoon." Ichigo said, frowned. He went to her room this night to talk about the party but just like what he had predicted, he just found a small note in her desk.

"The teacher is also said that she disappeared again in the middle of studying." Isshin said, frowned. He has lots of headaches because of her. Yuzu is looking at them worriedly. She is worried about her. She is her twin after all.

"We should…think about what excuse we should make for her absent tomorrow." Ichigo said while scratching his head confusedly.

"I leave it to you. I want to take a rest. I have lots of problems in my head." Isshin said while going out from the living room, leaving the two siblings alone.

"Should we say she is sick?" Ichigo asked Yuzu boringly. This is a difficult thing to do, to tell a lie about her absent.

"How many times had we use that excuse?" Yuzu asked him back. Both of them just sighed. This will be a long night.

Meanwhile, Karin is now sleeping in a small cave in a dense forest far away from the palace, with a tiger guard at the outside of the cave, protecting her from danger.


How is the first chapter? Is it boring? Please tell me what mistakes have I make in this chapter. Give me your opinion, please PLEASE!

Next chapter:
Chapter 2. The Party and the Ice Prince from Seireitei Kingdom

See you soon,

Ld-G