Hello, my lovelies!

So this is the new and improved first chapter.

I know some of you who wanted to know why the feud started and instead of throwing it in the middle of the story and take the easy way out, I instead wanted to make it complicated on myself like the smart person I am.

This is slightly based off Romeo and Juliet. (if you haven't noticed)

Disclaimer: I don't own R+J or Divergent

There's this community, bordered off from most towns. There are three types of people who know about it: those who live there, those who live near it and those who've been lost and stumbled upon it. But it's an oasis to the people who live in it. There's a great school system and nice houses.

And an infamous feud that's been going on for a century.

Everyone in the town has heard of it but by now in 2014, most people think it's old news, stored in the back of their brain until something jars the memory and suddenly they remember this feud and it's all they think about.

It started in 1898, with Marielle Thomas and two boys: Rochester Eaton and Michael Prior. It was something so cliché and so simple. A fight for love. One wins the girl and the other wallows in despair and holds the grudge against the other until it gets passed down from generation to generation.

If you thought that was how it went, you got half right.

The grudge was passed down from generation to generation but no one really won the girl.

These two guys fought for her love relentlessly. She was showered in gifts, and compliments and took both of them for granted and soon enough she was caught.

Rochester found out and told the Michael who then kicked her out of the car when dropping her off. As she turned around and got hit by a car.

Frankly, the car wasn't going that fast but the metal bar attached to it hit her hard enough to kill her on the spot.

Rochester blamed Michael and he blamed Rochester. They both attended the funeral and the feud was born.

It slowly got passed down to every generations, tales of the others inconvenience to their true love and eventually it died down until it picked up again with Marcus Eaton and Andrew Prior. Blood relatives of the past feud.

It came down to Natalie Prior, the town beauty. She was beautiful and smart with luscious blond locks. She fell head over heels for Andrew while Marcus fell head over heels for her, and thus the feud began again.

Natalie dated Andrew and Marcus was heartbroken over her. He tried everything to break them up but their love was too strong. Until it almost wasn't.

Marcus had been planning it for months. He set it up perfectly, pushing him into another girl while he was drunk at the same time that she rounded the corner with drinks. She left him for months.

Andrew immediately suspected Marcus and soon enough Andrew was pushed to the edge. They got into this major fistfight which Marcus easily won due to his muscle. Andrew was hospitalized and after a week Natalie came in, crying and apologizing. She stayed everyday after that in his room and after a lot of healing and apologies and understanding talks, they got back together.

Andrew got a restraining order against Marcus that was temporary while healing. Marcus eventually apologized but Andrew was angry and knew he didn't really mean it. The feud still went on and once both of them had children, it still carried on.

Tobias and Caleb the oldest of the two families naturally hated each other, even without knowing about the feud. Their personalities just clashed. Tobias was athletic and bold while Caleb was reserved and shy, surrounded with books. Even if they were kid books.

They easily got into fights and Caleb used words and Tobias occasionally used violence, not in a hurtful way but enough to scare him.

When Tris was born she was born into the same grade as both Tobias and Caleb, and Caleb was overly protective of her. He was always shoving books in her hands and teaching her new words while all she wanted to do was talk to other people that were not related to her.

In fourth grade, Caleb was eventually moved into an advanced class leaving Tris alone with strangers. And Tobias, who now went by Four.

Tris soon enough met Christina, Marlene, and Shauna. While the other girls went on and on about their crushes Tris sat and listened watching the boys and focused on work.

Tobias was introduced to Tris on a dare from Zeke. He dared Tobias to talk to Tris, who never really talked to anyone and had such a stoic face on that the boys believed she was paralyzed. The only thing that they gave her recognition for was in gym. She would crush everyone at dodgeball and get everyone out at baseball. She would always get picked first and the guys respected her for that. Then again, the guys were also scared of her.

"Hi, I'm Four," he said introducing himself. Tris finished the item that she was drawing and then turned to face him. She gave him a look before turning back to get her friends attention. They quickly gathered around her and then faced him. "Hi, I'm Four," he repeated.

"Tris," she said as stoic as ever. "You do realize we've met before, right?"

"Not officially," he responded sheepishly. "But I guess we've met."

Tris quickly rolled her eyes and said "Obviously"

Tobias returned to his group of friends' bright red. They were laughing at his failed attempt to really have a real conversation. Zeke was teasing him until Tris walked over and sat down right next to Tobias on the chair.

"Sup," she greeted. Quickly, she pulled her hair into a ponytail then faced Tobias. "What?" she asked the group of friends.

"Why are you here?" Uriah questioned her.

"What do you mean?"

"Like why are you on this side of the room. Don't you have dolls to play with?"

Tris narrowed her eyes and stood up and stepped toward Uriah. She looked around the room for the teacher who had stepped out to make copies of paper. Then she slapped him. Not hard, but enough to shock him.

"What was that for?" Uriah shrieked just as Zeke, Tobias, and Will yelled "That was awesome!"

Tris smiled and stuck out her hand, "Tris Prior, nice to meet you." She started to walk away when she turned around and looked at him "And for the record, I don't play with dolls"

Tobias followed her out during recess to the picnic table that she usually sat at with her friends. He brought the guys including Uriah, out to see them. The girls (excluding Tris) had smiled and openly invited them to sit with them.

"Sorry by the way," Tris apologized.

"Nah, it was cool. Kinda awesome actually," Uriah replied

Tobias settled next to Tris and eventually they became one massive group of friends.

Tris and Tobias started to hang out after school until his dad Marcus had stopped them. He found them on the swing set and yelled at Tobias and slapped Tris. It wasn't until Andrew Prior had found them and took Tris home that Tris understood not to ever talk to him again.

She still sat with Tobias and their friends but on opposite sides of the table, never talking, never looking at each other, and never making contact of any kind.

Caleb and Tobias still fought and it was becoming more and more physical. By high school their fights were an expected event, every other Friday in the back of the school in the parking lot.

This is where the real story begins.

In the back of school, in the parking lot.

I hope you guys like the new updated chapters so far.

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