This is my first fanfiction, please review! Thanks for reading
Disclaimer: I don't own, make Four Brothers etc the only characters I own is the ones I made up!
Note This is after Jack got shot a couple of times but he survived (of course!) And Victor Sweet is dead!
Don't Take Him Away From Me..
It has been a couple of weeks since Jack got shot, he is still at the hospital slowly recovering.
Bobby walked into the room at the hospital where Jack is staying after that horrendous shoot out outside the Mercer home. He noticed straight away there was someone sitting there next to him, hand in hand. It wasn't just someone, it was her.
"Ty?" Bobby whispered and startled the girl.
"Oh... Hey Bobby," She said as she stood up to greet him with a kiss on the cheek. "How are you?"
"Getting there… As long as Jack recovers…" He said softly. "It's nice to see a new/old face around this joint. We thought we'll never see you again"
"That's what Jerry said," Tyiona cracked a half-smile but then looked down. "It was hard.. Anyways Jerry filled me in about what had happened. I wish i didn't leave Detroit. I wish I was there to say good-bye to Evelyn or be at her funeral--"
"It's alright" Bobby interrupted her. "How is he doing? Wait how long have you been here?"
"He hasn't woken up yet, so he doesn't know I'm here. The doctors gave him something, I don't know, pain killers or something. I hope he gets better soon, I mean 6 bullet wounds. Fuck, I'm surprised he's still alive" Tyiona informed Bobby. "I got back today, it's been so long just thought I visit. What a surprise… Everything is so different…" she paused for a bit. "I think I'd better go, he wouldn't want to wake up and see the first person is me…"
"Don't be stupid" Bobby stated. "Where are you staying?"
Tyiona grinned. "Same old Bobby, I feel the insults coming soon." She playfully punched Bobby on the right shoulder. "I'm staying at Holiday Inn. I don't know how long for. My band and I are taking a break for the moment, till I go back that is."
"Oh yea, little Ty has made it big" Bobby winked. "Look, you don't need to stay at some snobby 5 star hotel. There's a room left in the old new furnished Mercer home. Bloody took ages..."
Something
inside her wanted to be at the Mercer home again but there was a tiny
part where she was reluctant to. All she ever thought about when she
was away was Jack and all she ever wanted was to re-connect with him,
to have him back the way they used to be.
She looked at where Jack
was lying once more and all those old memories good and bad started
flowing back to reality.
Flashback
Jack and Tyiona were both striving to become well known rock-stars. Tyiona was kinda different with her taste in music, and her vocals could change from Rock to R&B. Jack loved the crowd and attention he receives when he performs. He was very wild in and out. Compared to Tyona, she had a shy yet aggressive personality. She's disconnected from the world when she's on stage.
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Jack had finished his gig for the night and helped his band mates packed up before heading to the bar (The club books wannabe rock bands, to help them be discovered by any potential record deals).
"I'll just have a beer for now, thanks Dave" he ordered from Dave the bartender, as he sat on the stool near Tyona, whom he hasn't met yet. She turned on her right side where Jack was sitting and commented, "You were great out there, you and your band."
Jack replied with a smirk and stated, "Yeah, the ladies love me."
Tyona tilted her head backwards, laughing out loud and nearly falling off the stool. She'd had more than her fair share of drinks. Her laughter seemed to embarrass Jack, which he had taken as an insult. She had noticed that and tried to cover her tracks by holding her head and groaning, "Argh, my head. I think I drank too much… I'm sorry for laughing; I'm a bit tipsy…"
"Just a bit ey?" Jack asked before having a sip of his cold, mouth watering, frothing beer.
She smiled and said "Yep, just a bit" with her fingers gesturing the amount. She quickly cupped her mouth, trying to seal the laughter that was about to be explode, without any luck she went into a fit of giggles. "Oh fuck, shit oops" She straightened herself out and realized what an ass she had been. "I'm sorry" with that she placed her hand on his top lip and erased the froth off. "That was kinda funny," She smiled reluctantly.
Jack had just realized what she was laughing at and was relieved she wasn't some crazy psycho fan. "I'm Jack, what's your name?" He asked her with interest.
She was annoyed that he hadn't noticed her on stage before. "I'm Tyiona" she sneered.
He had a shock look on his face. "Tyiona? Really? You look really different on stage!" He said with disbelief.
"Yeah with all the make-up and shit, gotta play the part for the songs I'm singing" She stated.
Out of nowhere, a fully made-up girl who looked like a doll grabbed Tyiona, "Hey you ready? Everything's packed, no thanks to you. The others want to go clubbing, you know techno" with that she did a sample of raving.
Tyiona was rubbing her temples, looking frustrated. "Shit, Malty do you gotta do that now? Blurring my eyes with your 'gangster' move"
Malty didn't listen she was too busy focusing on Jack. Batting her eyelashes flirtatiously at him, which resulted him to look at Tyiona and had the 'I told you so. The-ladies-love-me' look.
"You're cute" Tyiona said to Jack meaning his personality. "You too as well huh?" Jack replied meaning she was in love with him as well. Before Malty dragged Tyiona away she quickly added, "It was nice to meet you Jack, nice to talk to someone on the same level as me" with that she winked.
The two girls stumbled through the crowds, while Jack was still looking at her until she exited the club. His band mate Chris interrupted his thoughts, "Hey man, who was that?" Lifting his eyebrow at Jack. "It was Tyiona" He answered back. "WHOA, no way!" Chris said in disbelief. "She looks so hot in person, I mean without all the funkt up make-up" "Yeah…" Jack trailed off, not listening to a word Chris had said, and re-collected his thoughts of the night.
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From the writer;
Okay, this is my first time doing a fan fiction or whatever it's called. I hope you girls/guys liked it! I am definitely obsessed with Garrett, that's why the story will mainly be around him, more about him. I can't hide it, I want him LOL I suck at grammar, so bear with me if some lines don't make sense. Also there is too many talking or too many he said she said kinda thing… I can't help it!
Email/message me about what you think of it so far, what should happen in it, etc.
Also please let me know what are good rock songs I can use to make Jack sing them (LOL) and also for Tyiona!
Hope to hear from youse soon :D
Oh and what should I name Jack's band? And Tyiona's band? They are both in different groups! Message me!
