This is my first fanfic so please give constructive criticism


It was 5:00 A.M. when my ghost sense woke me up. I wasn't in the mood to deal with a ghost right now but I knew had to send the ghost back to the ghost zone. The ghost that woke me up was the box ghost really not this clone again I thought. Isn't it a bit early for this, I said. I am the box ghost it is never to early to terrorize humans, the box ghost cried. You do know that everyone is still asleep it is Saturday for pete's sakes, I said. What I thought it was Friday no wonder no one is out yet, the box ghost said. I'll just send you back to the ghost zone then, I said. I grabbed the fenton thermos and sucked the box ghost inside it. Well that's done now, I said. I knew that I wouldn't be able to fall asleep again so I called Sam. She answered saying you know it is 5:00 in the morning right. I said, yeah I know I was just calling to see if my girlfriend wanted to go on a date tonight. Me and Sam have been dating for the past few months ever since the world found out Danny Fenton is Danny Phantom. Oh uh sure, Sam said. Great I know the perfect place pick you up at about 6:00 P.M., I said. Okay see you then, Sam said. This is going to be the best date ever, I said to myself. The reason I asked Sam out on a date is because I am going to propose to her. Being Danny Phantom has it's perks ever since the world found out I have been getting interviewed and getting paid to stop ghosts even though it is my parents job to get rid of ghosts but they are cool with it as long as half the money goes to them to pay bills. I have saved up enough money to buy an engagement ring. Half way through dinner I am going to propose to Sam.


Okay what do you think