hey guys, i did a redo on ch1 and i need feedback if it's better then the first first chapter. everything belongs to nexon and stuffs, whatever let's get on with the story.
SKY! WAKE UP!
so that's me. Sky Basson. 10 years old. so I'm supposed to go to maple elementary at 8:30, and i look at my "slightly" dented alarm clock. 8:20! I'm going to be late for school! AGAIN! so i rush down to my bathroom putting my shirt on, and brush my spiky blond hair. i feel like it's cursed to never be fully brushed! so i wash my blue eyes and put on my blue pants. blue. i like that color. meh. whatever. i ran down stairs jumping off the last few steps, and had milk and cookies. my favorite! wait, did i forget something? i thought. i slowly turned around to see my mom's hands on her hips.
"SKY! how dare you sleep in!" she said. "what the heck happened to your alarm clock!"
i start to remember that day i was angry about who knows what and threw my alarm clock at my wall. i got grounded for that.
"uhhhhh..." i stuttered. "forgot to set it?"
well i guess that cooled her off. i started for the door.
"bye Mom!"
"Sky?" she said in a quiet voice.
"yea?"
"be careful."
"ok." i smiled and left.
part 2
and so i walked peacefully towards my stop.
wait, did i forget something AGAIN! i remembered i was late and i ran but before you could say "WTF" my bus left. i sighed. I'm going to have to walk AGAIN. nothing can be worse than this!
or so i thought.
"hmmm..."
while i was walking a huge dragon appeared. it was read and had 3 horns in it's head, one on it's left,right and middle which was longest. it was huge. i was surprised, but not startled. i took out my gleaming great legendary sword and slayed the monster taking off it's head. nothing hurt, flawless. while i was polishing my blade, people crowded me and cheered. they wanted me mayor of maple island! i laughed. of course. then i had a feast fit for a king.
that was when i hit my head on the school wall.
"oh, hey Leo."
"hey sky. where were you? i didn't see you on bus."
"i missed it..." i sighed.
"that... are you sure that was your bus?"
"yea, i saw it leave."
"sky."
"huh?"
"that wasn't the right bus."
i rubbed the bump on my head.
"aww come ON!"
school sucks.
really sucks.
you know why?
It's hard!
so i was chilin' out on school one day until the tests came in... and i got... the usual.
i got about 4 50%-, out of 5 tests.
the other test was a 60.
my mom's going to kill me!
again!
It didn't help that Nico came in EXACTLY on time to see my grades.
let me pause right here. Nico is the bully of this school. he's also the jerk that nobody likes, or at least for me. he's also 10. he has back hair with the style of hair just like me, besides the hair on back of his neck. you could resemble him to a dumb gangster without those pimp tattoos and weapons.
"haha, sky! i didn't even have to guess- failed again?"
Nico walked away with him and his stupid goon/friends laughing. it made me sick. i never wanted to see those purple eyes and gangster clothes again. right when i felt like i was going to beat the mushroom out of him, Leo, my best friend, came in.
let me pause in here again. Leo is my best friend, and he's basically the only decent guy in this school. he has green eyes and black hair, longer in the back but in a guy kind of way.
"don't worry sky, he's just an idiot."
that made me feel better. at least there was one decent person in this school.
however, in gym, i got pounded. this was the last straw. luckily i saw a snail outside, peacefully eating grass.
"take this snail throw!" (you need to be skilled to throw a snail?) Nico screamed like it actually hurt. funny, i didn't put any of my ability points on strength, eh?
"Basson, detention."
ugggg! this is the hundredth time!
as everyone else got sweet freedom, i got the "detention room of death."
bored, i decided to read notes, but i found one in particular. it was slightly scorched, like someone wanted to get rid of it...
By the way guys i know I'm bad with caps and grammar and stuff. please, in this fanfic, no commenting about caps/grammar and stuff plz i kinda know i'm bad.
