Alright so a lot of people over the past year asked me what happened to this story, and to be honest I kind of lost interest in it and stopped writing it. The other day I got another question about it and came back to my old files and went through "I can do something with this now". I went back through and fixed little grammatical errors. I'll be fixing the previous chapters that were uploaded before posting the new ones which I have already started on. I'd do them now but I'm not feeling that hot. Just a quick note that in this story he still stole a Rinnegan from Madara and has his outfit as even now I still think that chakra cloak was pretty weak. Anyways, to those who liked this story here it is and I hope you'll like where it goes.
Standing on a destroyed battlefield are three people. The first is a white haired boy wearing a white Kimono top with a black collar and matching black magatama's on his chest. On the back were nine magatama's with the symbol of the Rinnegan. He wore black pants that were tucked into closed black shoes. This was Naruto Uzumaki, the former blonde had lost his hair color when gifted with the powers of the ten tails from the Sage of the six paths. He also had one Rinnegan eye replacing his right eye. It was a gamble but his body had accepted the eye.
When black Zetsu had betrayed Madara he had begun to expand as he was transforming. Naruto had taken that opportunity to flash next to the incapacitated man's head and remove one eye before he had been completely changed.
The other boy was wearing the exact same thing as Naruto. He too had one Rinnegan eye though in his left and his had six small tomoe in it. He has shoulder length black hair with bangs on either side of his face with the back being spiked up. This was Sasuke, one of the two remaining Uchiha's alive. The other being Obito.
Finally, the last person is the mother of chakra. She has very long flowing white hair with two horns sticking out of her head. She wears a long white Kimono also adorned with magatama's and the bottom being purple with some gold. She is a very pale white with red lipstick and matching fingernails. This is Kaguya Otsutsuki, the mother of the sage of the six paths.
"Damn, we've tried everything but nothing phases her." Says Naruto as he pants and stares at the woman who hasn't broken a sweat in the hours that they've been fighting. She could absorb any Jutsu thrown at her without taking damage and could travel between dimensions quickly.
"Yeah, she took on my Amaterasu and didn't get a burn mark on her. Not only that but she can change the dimension we're in on a whim. This isn't looking good." Sasuke says. He was getting tired as well. He had used his perfect Susanoo a few times along with the new Rinnegan techniques and was getting exhausted. Kaguya on the other hand had basically all the chakra in the world at her disposal.
Closing his eyes in concentration Naruto remembered earlier how they had almost sealed Madara and had an idea.
"Sasuke, I've got a plan. I'm going to use Bansho Ten'in to draw her to us. When she resists, you use your Rinnegan to teleport her between us and we seal her away." Says Naruto
"That actually sounds like a decent plan, didn't know you had it in you." Sasuke replies.
Ignoring the jab at his intelligence Naruto raises his right hand. "Bansho Ten'in"
Kaguya is immediately pulled towards him. At this time Naruto and Sasuke charged at each other with the seals on their hands ready to finish her.
When she started pulling away from them Sasuke activated the technique and forced her between the two of them. Surprisingly, it worked and they made contact with her.
Her Rinnesharingan on her forehead began to glow and her byakugan intensified as the sealing began.
"No, not again. I will not have my two sons seal me away like last time. The world of chakra ends with the two of you." She says. Using all of the strength that she could muster she opened a black portal once again and stuck her hand through.
The same appeared behind Naruto and he was grabbed by the collar and pulled in. That was the last thing that happened before Kaguya once again vanished from the face of the earth. It was over, but Kaguya had won. Naruto had been taken.
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When Naruto's eye opened he found himself in a dark area. Turning his head, he figured he must be in some sort of church, abandoned by the looks of it. Even though he knew he wasn't in danger at the moment he didn't stand up.
There was one thing on his mind. They had lost. Kaguya had thrown him God knows where in one of her crazy dimensions and got sealed away. There was no way for him to return.
The realization that the Infinite Tsukuyomi will never be undone and that everyone will eventually turn into white Zetsu's had hit him. It wasn't supposed to have happened this way. He was the child of prophesy, the one who would bring about peace to the world, and he had failed. Everyone on the planet had lost their lives.
"Could there have been a way to avoid all of this?" He thinks to himself. The image of a pierced orange haired man in an Akatsuki cloak appeared in his mind.
"Maybe Pain had been right all along. He'd destroy a nation with his power and the rest of the world would have been too afraid of starting another war in fear of being destroyed. Even if the peace was forced at least most of the planet would still be alive.
Had I listened to Pain when he told me all of this during our battle, the world would have survived. They'd be in fear but they'd behave and that was better than what had happened" His thoughts were broken when the sound of footsteps approached him.
Finally standing up he looks at the direction the footsteps are coming from and waits to see who or what it is. When the figure stepped into the light it was revealed to be a man whose face was covered in bandages. He wore a violet full body suite with brown armor like padding on the chest and shoulders. Though what was really odd was the black wings protruding from his back.
"Who are you?" It asked Naruto. It then proceeded to form a white spear above his raised hand and was ready to attack. Naruto merely raised an eyebrow.
The man lost his patience and threw the spear his way. Naruto materialized a single Truth Seeking Ball which then expanded in front of him.
The man watched as his spear was reduced to nothing the moment it touched the strange black shield.
Before he had time to make another Naruto had appeared directly in front of him and placed his hand on the man's head. His Rinnegan began to glow and he went into his mind.
He found out that he was on another Earth. He was in a place called Kuoh to be exact. He also found out that this world had supernatural beings. There were three main factions. The Angels, The Fallen Angels, and the Devils.
The man who attacked him was a fallen angel. An angel that had fallen from grace. The three factions were at a small cease fire at the moment but war could break out at any moment. He learned that the Devils were ruled by the Four Satan's. Azazel was the governor of the Fallen angels, and that Michael was leading the Angels.
He had also learned a bit of the earth's history as well. Coincidentally during a war known as 'World War 2' the United States had dropped an atomic bomb on a country known as Japan which had caused mass destruction.
The Japanese surrendered after two places had been hit. The fear of being hit by these bombs had caused the end of the war. Naruto thought about it and it sounded a lot like Pain's philosophy.
Having learned enough he left the man's mind and knocked him out. Perhaps he could bring peace in this world before they all kill each other. Whether they liked it or not they needed to be forced into peace, not this temporary cease fire they had. If they continued this way no one would win. He knew that from experience.
He henged into some clothing he had seen normal people wear in this world which consisted of black jeans, a dark blue t shirt, and some sneakers. Heading towards the exit of the building he noticed that this place was a lot different than what he was used to. He had seen it in the man's mind but seeing it for himself was completely different.
This place was much more polluted but also more technologically advanced. The buildings were bigger than anything he'd seen before. He knew that people his age here go to school in order to get good jobs for the future. He'd have to enroll himself somewhere, but first he needed to get a place to stay.
He found a nice apartment not too far from that church near the local shopping district. He had placed the worker under a genjutsu using his new eye and the man had generously let him live there free of charge.
-One Week Later-
Naruto had found someone on this worlds black market that was able to get some identification papers for him. They were fake but they were very well made. His story was that he was that his parents had died in a car accident when he was younger and a piece of glass had impaled his right eye, hence the eyepatch.
The closest school was Kuoh Academy so that's where he had enrolled himself in. He was lucky that it had recently become a co-ed school and finally accepted men. There was a lot more women at this school than men, which Naruto suspected is the reason that they enrolled.
He also felt some sort of dark energy coming from different parts of this school which he believed to belong to devils. The energy was weak but it was there, nothing that would pose an immediate threat to him.
In the time that he's been here he's found out that this school has a serious fanboy/girl problem. Seriously not even Sasuke had it this bad. Remembering the Sharingan user brought bad memories to the white haired boy. He shook his head of those thoughts.
This school would drool over two third years. One wears a white long-sleeved, button-down shirt (short sleeves for spring/summer) with a black ribbon on her shirt collar worn under a black shoulder cape and a matching button-down corset, a magenta skirt with white accents, and brown dress shoes over white crew-length socks. She's the most popular and desired girl in school. Rias Gremory.
The other is a beautiful young woman with a voluptuous figure around the same age as Rias with very long black hair and violet eyes. Her hair is usually tied in a long ponytail, reaching all the way down to her legs with two strands sticking out from the top and sloping backwards, with an orange ribbon keeping it in place. She wears the same outfit as rias only difference being the black knee high socks. She's the second most popular girl in school Akeno Himejima.
Naruto could see why people would find them desirable but not to the point that he'd throw away his dignity for it. Speaking of the two, as always they're heading his way as they head to class.
Making 'eye' contact with both he nods and continues on his way.
"Ara, Ara, it looks like Uzumaki-san has no interest in us." Says Akeno as she and Rias watch him disappear into the crowd.
"Indeed, he greets us but that's it. After that he basically ignores us." Rias replies. The fact that he was so dismissive to them was the only interesting thing about the boy. She had tried to sense if he had a sacred gear or any magical reserves, but he had none. He was an ordinary human who just seemed uninterested.
"I don't know whether to feel insulted by that or amazed." Says Akeno smiling.
"Hmmm." Rias says as she walks away. She'd ponder about it later.
Little did they know that Naruto had just lowered his power to the point where almost no one would be able to sense him. The control over his chakra provided by the Rinnegan allowed him to do that.
During his classes his thoughts would wander. "How could I bring peace to the factions. Obviously my belief that everyone would get along was proven incorrect. But I don't have the weapon that Pain wanted to create either."
Throughout the whole week he hadn't come any closer to solving the problem. When he went home he sensed that there was someone insanely powerful in his apartment. Opening the door, he noticed young girl with long black hair down to her hips and gray eyes. Her ears differ from a normal human's as they have pointed tips. She is dressed in a gothic Lolita dress. Sitting on his couch with a blank expression on her face.
This was not what he expected. "Uh, can I help you with something?"
"You're the source of the power I felt." She says. Her voice gave away nothing as well.
"Ok then just ignore my question." He said to himself silently. "Who are you?" Naruto asked
"Ophis." She was quite the talkative one.
"Ok Ophis, what do you want?" He tries again.
"I need your help."
"I'm going to need a little more information than that." Naruto replies. Seriously this girl needed to speak a little more.
"A beast has invaded my home. I'm putting a group together to help me get rid of it. I want you to join my group." She says
"I'd have to see this beast so I know what I'm getting myself into."
The next thing he knew he was surrounded in black, then he was in some sort of empty area with all sorts of colors around.
They were standing on ground but looking down you wouldn't see anything. He also noticed that there were three other people there.
The first was a young looking man dressed in black armor with a cape. He had long brown hair that goes to his hips with many bangs covering his right eye. He's the descendent of the original Beelzebub. Shalba Beelzebub.
Next to him was a man wearing the clothes of a noble. His clothes were black with dark red belts and motifs. He also wore a cape. His hair was tied up into a small ponytail. He's the descendent of the original Asmodeus. Creuserey Asmodeus
Finally, there was a young man with short green hair and had expensive clothing on. He looked similar to one of the Satan's he had seen in the Fallen Angels memories. This is Diodora Astaroth. Either they hadn't sensed them arrive yet which he doubted, or they just didn't care. Except the green haired one, he had looked.
Ophis merely pointed in a direction which his eyes followed. He saw a giant red Western Style dragon with a horn on it's nose. The dragon was easily as big as the ten tails maybe even a little bigger.
"That's the nuisance that's taken up residency in my home." Seeing the dragon and feeling the power it radiated Naruto remembered that Madara had been able to seal the ten tails into himself along with a tree. Who's to say Naruto couldn't seal the Great Red into himself?
"If Ophis and her group are able to weaken it enough, theoretically I should be able to seal it into myself. It would be like making myself a dual Jinchuuriki. It could help me bring peace." He thinks.
The others had finally finished their conversation and had headed over to them.
"Ophis who is this?" Asked the brown hair rudely.
"Silence Shalba." Is all Ophis replied.
"I'm Naruto Uzumaki."
"So Uzumaki. Will you join my Khaos Brigade?" She asks once more.
He thought about it for a split second. If this group of hers really managed to weaken the dragon that much he could seal it into himself. That along with his power with the Rinnegan would be a great asset in bringing peace. "Yeah, I'm in."
Nodding she turned to address the others. "Shalba, Creuserey, this is Naruto Uzumaki. He along with Diodora are the newest members of the Khaos Brigade."
The one known as Shalba frowned. "I can't sense a thing from him. I refuse to work alongside someone as weak as him." With that he raised his hand up and shot a blast of yellow energy at him.
Naruto had then materialized a truth seeking ball which expanded in front of him safely shielding him.
Seeing that, that didn't work Shalba took to the air and began to form hundreds of small energy balls in the area with the intention of making it rain on him. Naruto removed his eyepatch and displayed his Rinnegan. The others thought nothing of it but as Shalba was about to attack he froze. Not only him, but he had seen Creuserey getting ready to attack so he too was frozen.
"What did you do to me? you swine" Snarled Shalba
Naruto didn't bother replying as he floated up in front of the old Satan and proceeded to stab him multiple times with a kunai before the invisible force dropped the Satan to the ground knocking him out. He would've killed him but it looked like Ophis was using him.
He released Creuserey but had a TSB ready in case he tried something.
He looked around and couldn't find Ophis. He addressed the only other person in this place.
"Where's Ophis?" He questioned
"She left soon after Shalba started attacking you. She said she'd be right back to take us back. I'm impressed, I thought you were weak as well but you handled him without much effort. Before I forget, my name is Diodora Astaroth." He says extending a hand.
Naruto took it and shook. He couldn't help but notice that something was off about the guy. He looked decent but he reeked of foul energy, different from the typical devil energy he's encountered.
"Naruto Uzumaki." They spoke for a little while, Diodora had told him about the old Satan faction and explained to him how devil pieces worked in more detail seeing as he had some. He told him about the devil faction a bit and how he was sick of how it was. Naruto had been right, he was a little twisted but he was alright, I mean, he ripped an eyeball out of someone's head and is using it. So who was he to judge?
Ophis returned and told Diodora to return. She held a tear in space open enough for him to leave. Though before he did he handed a small card to Naruto and spoke.
"That's a magical card that will link you to me, sort of like a phone. Should you need anything just send some energy into the card and it'll connect you to me."
"Thanks I appreciate it." Naruto said looking at the card with some sort of symbol on it.
"Now then, your first mission will be given to you soon. I will call you once again within the week to meet your partner so you can sort out who's going to fight who. I would have you do it now but she's out on a mission right now."
Naruto nods and puts his eyepatch back on. She opens a tear once more and he walks through it and finds himself back in his apartment. This was good, now he knew what he would need to do to bring about peace. He needed to seal great red into himself.
Ok so that was chapter one of the rewrite. I hope you guys liked it, I've added how he got affiliated with the Khaos Brigade, in the last version he just adopted Nagato's ideals with basically no reason as to why. I'm planning on having him be pretty good friends with Diodora in this story, of course I'll make him a little less evil than he truly is though. Just a little bit. Here I made it so that his failure and the death of everyone proved that they couldn't live in peace like he wanted. This story will start earlier than the last and I will show how he and Katerea meet and how they get closer. If you have any suggestions that would make this story better don't hesitate to let me know, you never know they might be used.
So things are still relatively the same as I stated earlier I went back and fixed little errors I could find. I feel like I'm a much better writer now and will be able to do a better job. Anyways like always if you have any suggestions or comments leave them in a review or PM me. Later.
