-1This will be the last Madison related story for me…I think. I'm pretty sure any way. You don't need to have read Halfling or Beginnings, but it might help.
The pure light was pulling me in, but I wasn't ready. I was only sixteen, my seventeenth birthday was only three months away! My parents needed me as much as I needed them, and I was just granted eternity with them. Why couldn't my heart have stopped after the change was complete?
Now I looked behind me into the darkness and saw a black liquid. Below was the faint image of a pale red head child bleeding to death with her seventeen year old father grieving over her body. I was about to call out to him, to tell him I was fine, but a strong yet gentle hand rested on my shoulders, pulling me to my eternal home inside the Holy light.
"They cannot hear you. Don't worry about them, my child," boomed the man behind me. Tears streamed down my white cheeks.
"Will I ever see them again?" I whispered. Embarrassed at crying over the damned in front of the Creator, I whipped my tears away.
"Their future actions will determine their fates. I'm afraid only time will tell. For now they all flirt with the line between Heaven and Hell." He led me inside the Holy Gates, but before we had gone too far I turned back again for one more glimpse of my father.
"I'll put in a good word for all of you. I love you, and will do everything I can to see you again. I promise."
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