Hello people. Here is my new fanfiction. I wrote it when it rained and rain helps. So here it is. Though I feel like this one is sucks. So please review so I know what I did wrong.


The rain came down in torrents, as Kairi sat infront of her window. She sat there pondering and was sad he wasn't coming. Sora promised her he will see her today but know thats impossible. There was then a knock on the door. She opens it to find him soaked, and shivering.

"Sora, what the heck?!" Worry filled her voice as she say her friend out there in the rain.

"Oh Kairi, I wasn't going to let this rain stop me." His teeth chatter and then came several sneezes.

"Achoo! Achoo! Achoo!"

"Come inside you idiot!" She gestures him inside.

Sora lays on her couch while she fetches some medical stuff. He starts moaning that he is cold and that his head hurts. Kairi comes in and tries to hush Sora but he won't stop.

"Sora, please calm down. Your going to feel better soon."

He whines "Kairi stop acting like a mother. I don't need medicine, it's disgusting!"

Kairi decides she is going to knock him out. She puts some medicine that knocks someone out in a spoon and shoves it in his mouth. Sora stops whining for a while "Hey, Kairi what did you..." He is knocked out, snoring really loudly. "That would stop his bickering." She left him there to sleep for a while. While he sleeps Kairi goes around the house cleaning up a little. She looks towards Sora. " Aww he looks so cute when he sleeps. He tosses and turns while sleeping? That makes it even more cute!" Kairi finishes cleaning and goes towards Sora. She feels his head to maker sure he doesn't have a fever. She stays until he wakes up to her indingo eyes.

"Sora... Sora wake up sleepy head." She gently nudges him.

"Sora I checked and you don't have a fever and your perfectly fine. Its time for you to go home. Also the rain stopped while you were sleeping."

Sora starts pouting and then he puts his hands infront of him.

"Kairi I don't want to go! Please let me stay pretty please! Pretty please with a cherry on top and sprinkles?"

Kairi looks a him for a while and then she resists. Nobody can resist Sora's pouting face!

"Ok fine."

Sora smiles and hugs Kairi. He leans down and told her "This is the best cold I've ever had."

Kairi hugs him back and those two stay embraced for several minutes. Kairi wished that Sora would get a cold more often.


So please review for my fanfiction! I hope you liked it and tell me what I've done wrong okay?