This is a test to see how to divide my story into chapters, if you have any tips then email me, I will leave my email later on in this paragraph. Also if you wanna keep reading this story look up the tile again and you'll find the other part. I am uploading chapter 1 or whatever I'm doing right now just to see how this you read this fanfic of mine, I would like to say that most of these character I have our mine I created. Although I might add in someone like Frieza, maybe even the story will be similar to the dbz story. I am working on villains but have most of the heroes done. I would like some names and suggestions of some villains of what they look like, you can even send me art of the person you made at my EMAIL:Nicksdbzseries . If I include your character I will give you full credit before the chapter for whatever when I introduce them. But for now any character I include from the orginal dbz series is all owned by makers of dbz. For now I hope you enjoy chapter 1!
CHAPTER 1:NICK THE PURE SAYIAN
Deep into the galactic universe there was system of Medium Classes star that was orbited by 4 other planets. These planets had one of most vicious fighters species that was ever known to live beside a God. These vicious races were known as the sayians. Everyone knew that sayians were lived to eradicate the universe and take Control of it. They were born to fights even as like 2 yr olds. There were ruthless and had no heart and showed no sign of "Love" or "Careness." But there was an odd sayian who went my the name of Nick. Nick was oddly different from the others. He didn't like to kill, for example half of his missions to do under kings of sayiand by the name of Raptor was most of the time was to clean the Palace Raptor lived in or trained. Although yet Nick was one of the best fighters of all the sayians. He would sit on his front porch of his house and would like to sit and watch all the wildlife, and he would make plants grow and bloom by using his Ki. His ki was pure and unlike most sayians there Ki would kill the plants. He has a partner who doesn't really kill as well. His name is Jeremy. Him and Nick train all the time together going at each other all out. They would train until they couldn't move. Nick had dreams and visions all the time of his family dying or Raptor killing people. He hated raptor.
Nick awoke in his bed, after having a bad dream about raptor. He sat up in his bed, a nice smooth blue bed cover and a black blanket and pillow. He looked up into the the sunrise, the beam of light from the sun shot through his window revealing all the light blue painted walls of his house. Nick got up and walked across his room to his closet. He opened it and most of his closet contained trainimg gear and clothes. He put on his regular blue tank top with black Gi pants. Nick had his own gi custom created. His was of course blue and quickly ran downstairs to join his mother and father for breakfast.
"Hey guys what's up!" Nick called out
"Oh nothing son, we just have a plan for today" his father replied.
"Well..what's the plan!"
"Todays the day, the day we strike back at Raptor and get our revenge for what he has done!"
"W-what? B-but!" Nick stuttered. He couldn't quite comprehend on what he has heard so far.
"You have told us how much you have bad visions of Raptor and how much you hate him."
"Yeah but why no just leave find somewhere to train so if he finds us we will be ready cause raptor doesn't train. And we are not strong enough!
"Honey, he need to be gone so we can set the sayians free, think about it, if-"
"But I don't want to think about it! Nick said interrupting his mother.
"Just listen, me, you father, and Jeremy can all defeat him. so what do you say?"
"I-I...I guess so!" Nick finally answered. He got a little smirk and couldn't wait to see Raptors face as he suffers. Nick could feel his sayian feels that he rarely gets.
Later on that day Nick walked to Jeremy's house and told him about the plan. "I think we could defeat Raptor if we tried. Jeremy said.
"Yeah but I have seen what Raptor can do!" Nick said trying to convince Jeremy not to agree.
"Dont worry Nick, he isn't strong enough. Nick looked at him blankly. For the rest of the day he could comprehend everything, so it was now time, the four of up and walked to Raptor palace...
Will Raptor be defeated, will the four have enough power to defeat there ruthless, betrayful kings of all sayians. Find out in the next chapter of The Untold Adventures of Nick. Hope you guys enjoyed Chapter one
