Hey guys! I have an idea for a new story and I want to know if it sounds good or not. I'm only going to preview some sentences.
A boy with spiky black hair and chocolate eyes bolted out of bed as he looked at the alarm clock.
This boy is Alain Ketchum, the son of Delia Ketchum and the younger brother of one of the best trainers Kanto produced, Ash Satoshi Ketchum.
"We only have two minutes to get there you know. We'll use Charizard to get there faster."
Oak dropped his smile. "Why don't you find out yourself?" he said as he tossed the left ball to Alain.
The moment of truth. "Pokémon, come on out!" What came out of the PokéBall truly surprised the younger Ketchum.
