I'm starting to make a new story about a girl named May that moves to Tokyo from America and doesn't have many friends. I wonder how long this story is going to be?
Day of the new mew mew part 1
Protagonist Point of View
I was walking home from school when I tripped and fell. I blacked out a little, and when I woke up a boy was next to me. Yelling to six other girls. The girls I hadn't seen before. I had just moved to Tokyo and it was my second week of school. My parents were out of town and brother was in college studying to be the best student he could be in North America. I've been alone when I got home since last Friday. Walking around helps me clear my head. Being in the park is nice, all the animals and plants I never got to see in America where I used to live. When I came to school there was a boy that helped me all day...or tried to. He's the most popular boy at school and all the girls are bulling me because he's nice to me. The boy's name is Kazue. Every day I save up money to go to a cafe called "cafe mew mew." I hadn't felt good for the last few days and then I saw a group of girls with a blond haired boy helping them. I wanted to talk to them, but I couldn't move or talk. The girls were fighting a scary looking leopard that was purple and white. When the girls finished the animal off the boy noticed I witnessed everything that just went on.
"Are you okay miss?" the boy asked picking me up into his arms.
"...That cat- Is she okay?!"
"She?" I didn't realize that they didn't know that the animal they were fighting was a female.
"Put me down! That leopard is in pain! She needs help..." He set me down letting me run off thinking I wouldn't come back. When I turned around he was going into the cafe "cafe mew mew." I found the cat and helped her up. She was bleeding because of the fight. I ran back to the cafe and ran throw the doors, but no one was there. I went up stairs looking for the boy from earlier with the animal passed out in my arms. When I looked throw a open door I saw the boy...changing his shirt. I couldn't help but run throw and yell at him. And this is how I got into this situation.
"What are you doing here?! Get out!"
"No! because of you this leopard is hurt and bleeding! I stopped the blood, but she's been screaming and hurting my ears! I'm worried about her..." I stared crying and he didn't know what to do with me...crying like a little girl.
"Are you okay?"
"She isn't!....she's going to die..." I can hear her heart beat...fading with the sounds of my tears, which get louder...every second. "Give her my life!"
"What?!"
"...Kichi...that's her name..."
"I can't do that! I don't know how!"
"There's no time to waste! She needs to be happy with her family. The family she has worked so hard...to make and keep...she inspires me-"
"How can you hear her when she's in pain when she's not talking?!"
"huh? She's speaking about her family... her kids...her parents...her siblings,...and her—her—her... the one she loves. Crying to me to save her. And the one's she loves..."
"how?" a shining stone is glimmering to me.
"'May...metamorphosis—'?"
"The stone!"
"Mew Mew May...Metamorphosis..."
"What?!" I'm changing into one of those girls? What!?"
Tell me how it is and I'm making the next chapter/day right now! hope you liked it.
