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All was quiet at the Maximal ship. Then, the ringing of the ship's alarms shattered the silence...
"PREDACON ATTACK!", Rhinox shouted into his comm. Megatron, Scorponok, Terrorsaur, Waspinator, and Tarantulas had sneak-attacked the base, early in the morning, when the Maximals did not expect an attack. Rhinox and Dinobot, however, had been at the stations at the time while the others were on a scouting mission. He shouted again, "Primal! We're under attack! Do you read me?!"
Optimus was just checking a small rat specimen when the call came in. "Heh. Look, it's my relat-". Rattrap was cut off from making a joke when, after a short burst of static, Optimus's comm blazed with the sound of Rhinox's voice.
"PREDACON ATTACK! Primal! We're under attack! Do you read me?!"
"I read you loud and clear. The rest of us are coming!"
Cheetor ran over. "What the slag is happening?", he asked in a panicked voice. Rattrap shook Cheetor, yelling in his face, "Rhinox is under attack by the Preds! Oh whatarewegonnadooooo?!"
Optimus pulled Rattrap off of Cheetor. "It's all right, Rattrap", he said calmly; suddenly his voice darkened, "But, I have a feeling that they're up to something bad."
An hour later, they finally reached their ship. It was in bad shape. Worst of all, Rhinox was absent. Optimus inspected the damage, transformed into robot mode, and said, "Alright. Our first priority is to search for Rhinox. Our second is to repair the ship. Hey where's Cheetor?" He was answered by a call from the other side of the ship.
"Seems like our awesome security system caught a little bug!", Cheetor announced, walking around the corner with Waspinator tied up in yellow coil. "Well?", asked Cheetor, "What should we do with him? Put him in our "Maximal Torture Chamber?" Rattrap eyed him curiously. "But we don't HAVE a torture chamber!", he said. Cheetor winked at him, saying, "Ah, but he doesn't know that, does he?" Waspinator had just woken up from being knocked out, but what Cheetor had just said made him fall unconscious again.
The Maximals went up into the ship. Once they were onboard, Cheetor threatened Waspinator. Waspinator qiuckly broke, saying that they had kidnapped Rhinox so that the Predacons could use his spark energy to power a huge doom-cannon that they had recently found damaged, but had repaired. "No...", was all Optimus could say. Suddenly, a severely injured Dinobot came stumbling into the room. "It's true! I saw the Predacons take him!", he yelled in Optimus's face. Then Dinobot collapsed. Cheetor summed it all up in one sentence.
"This is bad. Really bad."
