Summary: Thrown in Blood prison for a crime he didn't commit full of rage he plans his escape but what de didn't know is that he will get help from an unlikely source
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Bijuu Talking
This a rewrite of the Original because of plot changes and to deliver a better quality
Chapter 1
Hozuki Castle (Blood Prison)
For one year he has been sitting in this cell. Because he was framed for attempting murder of the forth Raikage but when he denied having done so no one believed him like always.
He saved them from Pain and even convinced him to revive the Ones he killed and now he was thrown into Hozuki Castle in Kusagakure for a crime He didn't commit. Naruto stood before Mui the warden who had sealed of his chakra with his heavenly prison seal. Behind him was a strange box Mui strapped Naruto onto to a table that was also in the Room and began using Naruto's chakra and channelled it into the box.
Mui looked on as the box started opening spoke "Box of Ultimate bliss give me back my son". It opened but nothing happened no one came out just some dark fog then it closed. Enraged that seemingly nothing happened Mui ordered that Naruto was to be thrown into a cell for later but what he didn't know that something came from the box free something very old.
Naruto cell
In his cell Naruto lied there barely consciousness and in immense pain and soon his world had gone black and he drifted into his mindscape.
Narutos Mindscape
In Naruto's mindscape we find a man clad in full Armor walking through the sewer like mind looking for something. He felt a gigantic force of anger and hatred while searching. He looked at the memories of his unknowing host and got pissed and confused at the same time pissed because how much potential this child has was wasted with incompetent teachers. His teachers may have been strong but almost all were unfit to teach. The only one seemingly competent was an old toad who taught him something that they call Senjutsu which seems to utilize the force to enhance someones close combat fighting abilities to nearly superhuman level and also how the manipulated the elements, fascinating. The confusion came in the part of why was this child so damm naive it was like something would keep him Innocent and forgiving on purpose not even Jedi were so forgiving some of the Enemy's he had faced would be struck down immediately.
No less the Armored figure reached the Cage of the Kyuubi no Kitsune that is what this being is called. Suddenly two blood red eyes opened and it spoke "who are you mortal you're not the foolish brat I call prison, why are you here".
The in Armor clad man spoke" I am Darth Marr lord of the Sith and my reason for being here is you and your host broke my prison with what you call chakra and after searching for through his memories and experience's I decided to make him my Apprentice".
The Fox spoke"Good luck with that this child is naive beyond anything" .
Marr said then" yes I know but something isn't right I feel a another presence here who is influencing him it seems it has a similar age to you" and with that Marr focused his dark powers to pull something out and something came it was a person a man with spiky brown hair, he also possessed stern facial features he also was wearing a Headband. Marr asked "do you know this person Kyuubi" ?
The Fox started growling "Asura what the hell are you doing here you should be dead so why are you here answer me?" Asura answered "hello Kurama you remember fathers prophecy about eternal peace or destruction that will be brought by one his descendants. Naruto is the one so after witnessing his life I thought it was besser help him stay in the light so peace could finally come and so he doesn't got insane. I influenced him to stay forgiving and naive and not lash out so he could fulfill his destiny to bring Peace."
Kurama roared "you fucking idiot so you're the reason my container is an idiot and naive beyond anything and because of your meddling he got us both nearly killed Multiple times be grateful I cannot get out or I would eat you".
Asura wanted to retort but was suddenly struck with a powerful lightning bolt from the other person there but it doesn't feel like lightning chakra it felt dark and caused such immense pain he couldn't even move anymore.
He looked at the man and screamed "stop if you kill me now Naruto will stray from his path peace will never be attained that way".
Marr laughed at that and spoke "Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength. Through strength, I gain power. Through power, I gain victory. Through victory, my chains are broken. The Force shall free me".
After hid last line was spoken Marr strengthed the force of his attack even more till Asura's Presence left this mind permanently and Marr couldn't feel it anymore.
Then he turned to meets his new Apprentice smiling beneath his helmet it would be fun to train a new apprentice.
With Naruto
Naruto awoke and felt strange like something vanished from his mind and he started questioning his life. To the point every Challenge and Decision he had faced and came to the conclusion that his life was not his, he always helped others. Only to be mostly thrown away like a tool to be used then to be forgotten about like when he defeated pain saved the village and learned sage mode and he didn't become even a Chunin.
But he saved his friends right, where they his friends at all? "No not really no one knows him at all and thinking back to Hinata she loved the idea of him not himself. And every time he needs their support they let him deal with it alone".
While thinking he suddenly felt a presence that wasn't the fox he stared in the direction of the presence and saw a man in a Dark Armor. "Who are you he asked?"
Instead of answering the figure used his power to show him who he was and what he wanted. Marr asked "Do you accept and become free or not and stay a slave to others your choice".
Naruto thought back to his life again all the Adventures and fights, all the betrayals and he had enough he wanted freedom his own way with determination he stared back at Marr and nodded.
Marr spoke "very well stand up your new way now begins. Normally you would be to old to teach the ways of the sith but being in your mind means we can control time alter it to the point where one year outside would be twelve in here".
Marr used his power to make Naruto six again in his mind to train like any youngling and with that it began from the seven Lightsaber forms to force powers like push and lightning.
But one problem remained thought Marr to himself " how to make a weapon for his student this world was to primitive to build a lightsaber after thinking for a while there was only one choice he needed to craft a Force Weapon from metal and imbue it with the force that will be difficult because Marr had no knowledge how to make such a weapon. But right now he must train his Apprentice to the best of his ability, so the Sith can rise again".
Chapter end
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I want to make the story have more flesh also after discussing also with my friends I decided to chop the story down to a purely star wars Naruto cross to not overwhelm myself
But I will write a Naruto Dynasty Warriors cross
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