This is my first Fanfic, please review, and when reviewing give your honest opinion.

Disclaimer: i do not own bleach.


"So what ya say Taiyō, are you gonna join us or not? Infinite power and wealth or being a helpless wimp and stick with those weaklings you call friends that can't even help you?"

"The answer should be obvious to you, Santí."

"So you are joining us then? Splendid, we have a deal."

"I never said that I was joining you but here's my answer. It's…"

HOLD IT! We are too far ahead! Rewind!

Sorry 'bout that. Hello my name is Taiyō Tsume. What you read a while ago is a bit ahead in my story. I'm sixteen, so I'm a high school student. I live in a fairly large city called Karazueshin. I live with my father, who is 6'1" , my two younger twin sisters, Yui and Hime, both 4' 3", though they don't look like twins since one has red hair and the other has brown, and my fraternal twin Riza, who is 5'8". I am 6'. We've lived here all our lives so we know our way around. Riza and I attend Karashin High School. Our family owns a clinic, which is also our home, not far from the school. Oh, before I forget, we're a family of demons.

I know what you're thinking, 'It's a family of monsters', or, 'Horrible creatures from hell are on earth', well you're wrong. We look just like you humans do, except for extra little additions, for ex.: cat-/wolf-like ears. We are actually pretty common here since we are one demon family out of hundreds here in this town. Karazueshin is the only place where demons and humans live in peace. Half the city is demons.

Everyone in our family, except dad, shows or has attributes of our demon ancestors. Our dad is of the dragon-demon clan and our mother was of the wolf-demon clan. Yui and Hime have the wolf-like attributes while Riza and I have the dragon-like attributes. Having those attributes to only two people each doesn't mean that we don't also have some of the other side showing. We all have wolf ears and fangs. Yui and Riza have a little snaggle-tooth on the right side of their mouth and a strong sense of smell. Hime and I have sharpened fangs and a strong sense of hearing.

Dad has jet black hair, a raggedy beard, and brown eyes. Yui has red hair, deep brown eyes, and has the cheerfulness of death himself. Hime has milk chocolate colored hair, hazel eyes, and is like the mom of the house yet she is the sweetest thing ever. Riza has golden hair, the back is always in a bun and the front has a section always covering her right eye, blue eyes, and is a very well mannered person when she wants to be. I have silver hair, not bleached, with red tints to it, not dyed, all natural. Also I have blood-red eyes and an X-shaped scar on my right cheek. But enough with introductions, on with the story.

- "Taiyō get your ass over here now!"

"But Riza, dad's the one who made it."

"I don't give a damn! You helped make this mess with your fight with him!"

"Fine. Just don't expect squeaky clean.

Just another day in our household

"Riza, Taiyō, you guys better get ready for school." Yui said coming down stairs. "You need to get there on time today, remember there's a test today."

"Crap! Taiyō get this mess clea-. Where'd he go?" Riza yelled looking at the place Taiyō was a second ago.

"See ya later Riza." Taiyō said running out the doorway with his things leaving his twin in the dust. Riza still getting her things to go was now furious with her brother.

"See ya later Yui."

"Bye"

When I get my hands on you Taiyō you are so dead, she thought.

"You hear me Taiyō You're dead!"


It's a start, more on the way please give me tips in your reviews, thank you.