Hello people I'm back with the next rewritten chapter and I just want to say . . .
Inuyasha on the walkie-talkie: hey stop all talking and get us out now damnit
Naruto on the walkie-talkie: yeah what did we do
Me: Inuyasha you're in there for making me upset about starting a new story yelling at me for doing a Naruto story and not one on you. Naruto you're in there for putting Sasuke in the pit I know it was you because you're the only one here with the button that can put people in
Inuyasha: wait if Naruto can put him in then he can get us out
Me: no Naruto puts them in I take them out
Inuyasha: damnit
Me: so Sasuke you can go (pulls out some button pushes it Sasuke appears next to me) and Kakashi I'm sorry but Naruto gonna has to stay with me a little longer
Sasuke: whatever (leaves walking out the living room)
Me: now I should start the story right lets get started (gets laptop and starts typing)
Disclaimer: I don't and won't own Naruto so its left at that but I do own Amitie and Raffine so I'm happy somewhat
Chapter 2 Seeing the Hokage
Talking ""
Thinking ''
Two blonde heads move through the crowds of people avoiding them and some times brushing them lightly but light enough not to be notice. Amitie moved to side to avoid running into two ladies as they walked by.'Man this is too easy its like being at the mall hmm where's Naruto'
Amitie scanned around trying to spot the blonde haired ninja her even looked up on the roof tops to find him. Something tapped her shoulder her turned Naruto was running behind her to keep up.
"Wow you really run fast Amitie!" Amitie smiled
"Thanks were you behind me this whole time?"
"No I was up ahead but came back until I could see you but you were running so fast I really didn't need to back up much."
" Hm we pretty much left the others right?"
"Yeah they'll catch up sometime soon I think."
"Right are we almost there?"
"Yeah it's up ahead you wanna race?"
"Sure."
They stopped standing next to each other.
"Ready." Amitie said
"On your mark." Naruto said
"Get set."
"GO!" they yelled together
Naruto ran off head with Amitie not too far behind. Ichiraku came into view. Amitie sped up until she was next to Naruto then went on ahead past him.
"HEY!"
Naruto ran faster and caught up with her. They stopped in front of the ramen place. Amitie smiles brightly and Naruto pouted.
"NO FAIR! How did you win?"
"Well you did say I could run fast right?"
"I should have won I'm faster than you."
"You had a head start when we started if you think about it you should've won."
Naruto blinked.
"What are you trying to say?"
"I'm saying you should have won with that head start."
"Oh!" Naruto grinned "Thanks Amitie."
Amitie smiled "No problem."
They stared at each other smiling and the same thought went through their head.
'Wow what a cute smile.'
Naruto blinked at the thought. Amitie blushed faintly and looked past him walking up. Naruto turned.
"You see the others?" he asked
"No but I see Raffine bouncing around."
"Where?" Naruto asked looking around Amitie sighed walking behind him putting her hands on the sides of his head she turned it into the right.
"There see."
Naruto blinked and saw something light purple bouncing up ahead.
"Yeah I see her."
Amitie nodded taking her hands off his head when she did her fingers brushed his hair. Even though it was a light brush she still felt how soft it was and the only thing that went through her mind was 'Ooh so soft!' out of reflex she started to pat his head marveling how soft it was.
Naruto watched as Raffine's head got closer and closer. Then Amitie began patting his head. He was enjoying it. His eyes drooped slightly but then he blinked and blushed.
"Um Amitie what is you doing?"
Amitie stopped realizing what she was doing. She blushed bright red and backed up some.
"Oh! Naruto I'm sorry I didn't mean to that! Sorry!"
She said it so quickly Naruto almost didn't understand. He nodded quickly. That's when the other came up not looking happy at being left behind. Sasuke the most he was glaring at Naruto and Amitie. Raffine open her mouth to yell at Amitie but a tap on her shoulder made her look at Kakashi. He lean over and whispered,
"Look at their face notice something?"
Raffine looked Amitie then Naruto and grinned. Kakashi saw this and straighten up and said,
"Did something happen before we showed up?"
"Yeah did something happen Amitie Naruto?"
"Um." Naruto muttered. He looked over shoulder at Amitie. Blue met green.
"Any nothing happened." Amitie said
"Oh really then why you blushing?"
Amitie looked at Naruto. Green met blue.
"Well we're waiting for answer." Kakashi said looking back between Naruto and Amitie.
Naruto and Amitie looked at them then back at each other. They stayed like that for a while with everyone watching. They both blushed and looked away. Raffine smiled evilly Kakashi eye curved up Sasuke and Sakura blinked at their reactions.
"Is there something you two aren't telling us?" Kakashi asked?
They shook their heads rapidly.
"So why are you blushing?"
"Nothing! I want some ramen now!" Naruto said
"Not until you answer my question now Naruto that an order."
Naruto lowered his head and muttered something.
"Louder Naruto!"
Naruto lifted his head revealing a deep blush on his face.
"Amitie was patting me on my head feeling my hair." Naruto said louder blushing harder. Raffine looked at Amitie. She had her back to them with a smirk Raffine walked over to her.
"Amitie is this true did you pat Naruto on his head feeling his hair." she asked excitedly. Amitie muttered something.
"What was that?"
Amitie turned glaring at Raffine.
"One thing Raffine that's all you have to say before I kill you!" she growled the last part.
"I want my ramen now sensei!" Naruto said walking inside.
Amitie followed still glaring at Raffine walking beside her twitching Sasuke and Sakura followed.
Sometime later
"Now where do we go?" Raffine asked as they walked away Ichiraku
"Well should go see the Hokage." Kakashi said
"Why?" Amitie asked?
"Because we need to find out where you to are from."
"NYC."
"Huh?"
"New York City." Raffine said glaring at Amitie. She glared back.
"Where is that?" Sakura asked?
"The United States it's like on the other side of the world."
"So two are from the other side of the world." Sasuke said they nodded.
"Hm how did you girls get here?" Kakashi asked?
"An evil elevator." said Raffine Amitie slapped her hand on her forehead a wacked Raffine up the side her head.
"What she means is we were in an elevator back where we came from. I guess it brought us here. How we don't know."
"Did you do something before you got in the elevator?"
Raffine gasped and grabbed Amitie shaking her. "Amitie doesn't you remember that fountain!"
"What fountain?"
"You don't remember doing you." Raffine smirked "Too busy thinking about running your fingers through someone hair."
Amitie and Naruto blushed. Amitie glared at Raffine.
"Raffine if you don't tell me about that fountain now I really will kill you. Right here right now!" to add on the threat Amitie hand was slowly making its way her pocket.
"The wishing fountain."
"What does the fountain have to do with this?" Raffine wanted to bang her head on wall then do the same thing to Amitie.
"God! Amitie stop act like like Naruto!"
"What's that suppose to mean Raffine!" Amitie and Naruto said together. Sasuke scoffed
"What she mean is Naruto is a idiot. Amitie is acting just like him. So she's saying you are a idiot both of you."
"SHUT UP SASUKE YOU BASTARD!" they yelled glaring at the Uchiha. Sasuke glared back.
"Amitie stop glaring at Sasuke and remember the freaking wishing fountain!" Raffine said turning Amitie to face her. Amitie took a deep breath and thought back before they came here.
Flashback
"Ooh Amitie look a fountain."
"Wonderful."
"Do you have a penny?"
"If I did I wouldn't give you."
Raffine pouted looking at Amitie with puppy eyes. Amitie twitch then sighed. Raffine smiled holding out her hand Amitie dropped a penny in her hand Raffine grabbed Amitie hand pulled her to fountain.
"Why don't you make a wish Amitie?"
"As if it would come true."
"It couldn't hurt to try?"
"Whatever."
Raffine stopped in front of the fountain silently made wish and dropped the penny in.
"Ok you go."
Amitie pulled a penny out her pocket and silently made her then dropped the penny in.
End of Flashback
"Do you remember now Amitie?" Raffine asked Amitie nodded slowly
"Do you remember what you wished for?" again Amitie nodded slowly Raffine smiled then said,
"Thank you kami-sama for shining the light on Amitie idiotic brain!"
"OK THAT'S IT!"
Everyone watched as Amitie tackled Raffine and they started to fight rolling all over the ground yelling insults at each other pulling the other hair. Naruto Sasuke and Sakura watched with wide eyes. Kakashi stood there watching with mild interest.
"Kakashi-sensei stop them!" Sakura said. A second later Kakashi said,
"Did you say something Sakura?"
Sakura glared at Kakashi walking up she slapped him on his back. Kakashi muttered a low ow before walking up saying as interesting this fight is. Sakura glared at him.
"I'm gonna have to make you stop." he broke them apart. Amitie and Raffine glared at each other.
"Stop glaring at each other."
"Yes Kakashi-sensei." Kakashi blinked
"Why did you call me sensei?"
"Because you are one even if you aren't ours sensei." Raffine chirped
"Are we still going to see the Hokage?" Amitie asked
"Yes we are."
Sometime later
"Um."
Everyone was standing in the Hokage office looking at the Hokage sleeping on her desk. Kakashi cleared his throat all he got out of her was a grunt she kept on sleeping. Amitie put her hand over her mouth to from laughing. Raffine bit her lip.
"Hokage-sama!"
Tsunada shot up the papers she was using as a pillow flew up and around onto the floor. Raffine and Naruto started laughing their heads off. Amitie snorted laughing but put both of her hand over her mouth. Tsunada looked at them. Everyone looked at her Raffine and Naruto stopped laughing for second then started again twice as hard. Amitie burst out laughing with them. Tsunada glared at them.
"Quiet!" she barked
Amitie and Raffine stopped at the same time. Sakura wacked Naruto and he stopped rubbing his head.
"Now tell me what's so funny?"
"Um you got some ink on the side of your face." Raffine said
"Some its covering the whole side of her face!" Naruto said
Naruto Amitie and Raffine started laughing again. Tsunada stood up and walked out the room past them on her out she wacked Naruto up side his head. Naruto rubbed his head muttering under his breath. When he pulled hand back it was black.
"What the . . ."
Everyone looked at him Raffine Sakura and Amitie laughed. Sasuke smirked Naruto frowned crossed his arms. The right side of head was black. Tsunada walked in without the ink on her face and sat at her desk and looked at Kakashi.
"What are you doing here Kakashi?" she asked
"We have visitors."
"Visitors?"
Her eyes landed on Amitie and Raffine still giggling at Naruto.
"Hokage-sama this is Amitie and Raffine." Two stopped giggling at the sound of their names being called.
"Where are they visiting from?"
"The other side of the world." Naruto said
"The other side of the world." Tsunada repeated. Amitie and Raffine nodded.
"You might have explain this to me."
Amitie and Raffine nodded. Everyone stood there waiting then Raffine and Amitie glared at each other.
"What are you waiting for Amitie?"
"You to start."
"I'm not starting."
"Well do you think I want to start?"
"Well I was thinking you would just start talking."
"Are you stupid! You know I hate explaining things first."
"You know I hate it just as much!"
"I hate it as much as I hate the colors: blue, purple, black, green, brown, yellow, and pink. You know how much I hate pink!" Sakura frowned slightly and fingered her pink hair wondering if she should dye it so Amitie wouldn't hate her. Raffine sighed and muttered something under her breath making Amitie glare at her harder she payed no attention to it the best she could. It hard to explain something with someone glaring at you.
"So do you think you can help them Hokage-sama?" Kakashi asked after Raffine finished
"I'm not sure what I can do." Tsunada sighed "Raffine you said you two made a wish before coming here right?" Raffine nodded "What did you two wish for?"
Raffine looked at Amitie. "Amitie what did you wish for?" Amitie blushed remembering what it was. Raffine smiled evilly "Amitie did you wish for what I think you wish for." Amitie glared at her "Say it out loud and see what happens Raffine I dare you."
"Ok I won't say it." she walked over to Tsunada and whispered in her ear. Tsunada face lit up and she smiled looking at Amitie. Amitie blushed faintly.
"Ok by the sound of it when you two made your wish it came true."
"Ha! Amitie and you said it wouldn't come true!"
"I didn't say it wouldn't come true I said I highly doubt it."
"It's the same thing right?"
"Whatever."
"I have question." Naruto said "Why do you always fight if your friends?"
"All friends fight Naruto." Tsunada said
"No these two always fight for like the smallest reason. Its like they fight just the fun of it."
Everyone was staring at Naruto. He blinked.
"What?"
"Naruto that's the smartest thing you ever said in your life." Sasuke said Naruto glared at him.
"Shut up Sasuke!"
"Make me dobe."
"Bastard."
"Idiot."
"Jack ass."
"Dumb ass."
"BASTARD!"
"Ok you two give it a rest your starting to sound like Amitie and Raffine." Kakashi said.
"We do not sound like that." Amitie said Raffine nodded.
"Right."
"I have a question." Raffine chirped "Where are me and Amitie gonna stay?"
"Well I think you could stay with one of us." Kakashi said scratching his head in a bored manner. Raffine smiled
"Ooh can I go with you!"
Everyone looked at her. Sakura blinked
"You want to go with Kakashi-sensei?" she asked Raffine nodded
"What's wrong with that?"
"He's a pervert because he read those books." Naruto said Amitie shrugged her shoulders.
"So what Raffine is a bigger pervert that him. She has this book case that's half way filled with those books" Kakashi eye twitched
"Half way filled." he repeated Amitie nodded
"I don't know why but her mom doesn't kill her with all those perverted books."
Raffine blushed glaring at Amitie.
"So Amitie who do you want to go with?" Kakashi asked Raffine scoffed
"You don't have to ask. Amitie going with Naruto. End of story."
"Raffine!" growled a pissed off blushing Amitie "Why did you say that!"
"Two reasons. One: I like to mess with you. Two: revenge for telling everyone I read those books!"
"I'm gonna kill you!"
"I'm right here Amitie go ahead and do it."
Amitie growled and tackled Raffine. Everyone but Tsunada sweat dropped watching them fight rolling around yelling at each other.
"Kakashi-sensei stop them!" Sakura said
"Can it wait a second longer?"
Sakura glared at him walking up and wacked him on his back. Kakashi mutter ouch walked up and pulled them apart. Amitie and Raffine glared at him.
"You two need to control your tempers and stop all this fighting. If you fight again I'm not stopping it."
"That's what you think Kakashi-sensei." Sakura said glaring at the Jonnin. Kakashi shrugged his shoulders and looked at Amitie.
"So you are staying with Naruto?" Amitie nodded blushing faintly
"I have a question." Raffine chirped "What are going to do about clothes? Amitie and me needs some clothes to wear."
Tsunada stood up and walked out a minute later came back with an envelop and gave it Raffine.
"Its just some money to you two some clothes just try not to use it all in one place."
"Ok thank you Hokage-sama!"
"Your welcome. Now go away so I can get to work."
"Your just going back sleep." Naruto said he got a hit on his head for that. Muttering under his breath as they left.
"Yay we get to go shopping!" Raffine said skipping ahead Amitie sighed and said,
"We're doomed."
Well people that's all for the rewritten chapter 2 yeah it looks the same but somethings are different so yeah . . .
Inuyasha on the walkie-talkie: can we come out now
Me: no but Naruto you've quiet for a long time so you can out
Naruto on the walkie-talkie: yay (I pull a button out and pushes it nothing happens)
Me: uh oh
Naruto: uh oh what's uh oh
Me: dead batteries
Naruto: dead batteries aw man
Me: sorry Naru-chan until I get new batteries you're stuck
Naruto: this sucks eggs
Me: review so I can get new batteries for my button and Naruto will be free and maybe Inuyasha too but you have to review
Inuyasha and Naruto: review and get us out of here please
