Ok here chapter 2: We found our gentle: sorry it might seem lame but i can't think of anything else. And if you are a susan fan please don't hurt me, no flames. I'm just testing out lucy's view nothing bad. well enjoy!.

Susan breath was becoming short as she was running to find her sister. She was wondering how her sister disappeared so fast unless she went another way, but susan didn't care unless she found lucy. But so far no luck. And to make things worst little drops of water splattered on susan's face, it started to rain. "Oh great thanks!" she shouted. She started walking through the watery street shouting her sister's name. But no answer. She was drenched to the bone, then again so was lucy. Her hair was stuck to her face and her make up was running, though for the first time she didn't care about her make-up. Her mind was only on lucy, her summer gold haired little sister.

"Lucy please answer me, where are you!" she shouted. If only she had her cellphone with her then she could call her brothers who are either in the house or running out after them. She thinks it defiantly number 2 but not too sure. Susan started to shiver as the rain was becoming harder. She managed to grab a coat in time but it wasn't water proof and had no hood either. The harder the rain got was making her lost where she was. Susan suddenly thought had an idea, what place does lucy always like to go to?. Then relization hit her. The park. Yes that must be it, lucy always ask peter to take her there on weekends. So further or do she ran to the park hoping on god's name lucy was there.

As susan reached the park, there was no lucy. "Come on lucy show me where you are" she whispered. The swings no. The small play thing no. The bench no-wait there was something on the bench. But the rain was making it blurry for susan. She move closer and signed in relife. The person on the bench was lucy. She had no jacket on, wearing only her school uniform and she looked so pale and was unconscious. Susan pulled off the coat putting it around lucy's soaking frame. She picked her up in bride style running back to the house. "Come lucy stay with us, stay with me. I need you" pleading susan to lucy who didn't wake up.

As she was nearer to home she shouted "peter, edmund help i found her!". The boys heard her rush to her side. Edmund grabbed lucy running inside the house and peter put an arm round susan helping her. Their mum was getting them new clothes and their covers to keep them warm. Edmund gave lucy to mum giving her the privacy to get lucy out of the soak clothes. When their mum helen put lucy to bed, she asked edmund to put a cold flannel on her forehead. She was running a fever. Peter helped susan to her room who kept coughing at the wetness that was still upon her.

After susan got herself ready putting on a purple dressingown on top, she decided to check on lucy. She hesitated to open the door or not. She was afraid lucy was awake and was staring at her where those blank sorrow eyes. She couldn't handle that. She could handle her innocent little sister hating her. She took a breath opening the door slowly. Inside was edmund putting the flannel back inside the bowl then putting it back on lucy''s damp forehead. Susan was so quiet edmund didn't noticed she came in. "How is she" she said quietly but enough to make edmund jump.

"God your scared me don't do that, and yes she'll be alright if we keep her warm and turn down the fever, then hopely she should wake up". Susan nodded looking at how fragile lucy looks. Her pale face sleeping peacefully. "Edmund can i take over please?". Edmund looked at his older sister face. Her make up we now gone but her hair was a mess making it a bit over her face. Though that wasn't that got edmund attention, it was her eyes. Her bright blue eyes were dull with regret and sorrow and also looking for forgiveness. He smiled nodding at her "yeah take over". She smiled slightly taking edmund place on the chair. "If you need help call us" edmund got a nod from susan before going downstairs.

Susan rub the flannel smoothly against lucy's forehead, her fever must be going down because her pale face was getting colour. Susan was out in the rain but not as long as lucy so she was lucky not to get a fever. As she watch lucy sleeping she kept thinking back at all the times she ignored lucy by hanging out with her friends, at home and at school. And the time she said the word narnia. Susan knew very well what narnia was, but it kept causing her so much pain everytime her siblings talked about it, because she knew. She knew she couldn't go back, to that world where everything was so wonderful, peaceful and also prince caspian. She really misses him. Whenever they brung it up she always walked off but she never not even once noticed their were sad eyes as she left. But at school she did.

She alway noticed lucy looking at her with eyes so young but also older, not so innocent but more wisdom, an older lucy. However the eyes showed susan how unfair and unsociable she been with her siblings. All she cared about was parties and boys, nver anything else. Not even her only sister. She moved a stranged of hair from lucy's carefree face. Her eyes started to water at a flaskback. It was 2 days ago at school around lunchtime. Susan's friends invited her to eat lunch with them and she agreed. But she did see lucy's face looking at the floor, she saw her eyes glittering trying not to cry. But she cowardly ignored it. Even though she saw she didn't do anything expect walked off. And she saw how she made her sister cry just by saying hello when they met in the hallway before she walked off. Susan never realised that one or two words could cause damage to a person. Till now.

Susan felt tears flowing down her already red cheeks. She put her head between her arms on the bed crying and hiccupping. "I'm sorry for everything i'm such a horrible sister. Your should hate me after many terrible words and thing iv'e done to you, i'm so sorry lucy i really am". Susan then felt a hand on her arm, she looked up to see lucy smiling at her. "Lucy your awake" "of course i am silly, and i heard what you said. Susan i don't hate because your my sister, i love you susan". Susan felt more tears coming down her cheeks. She grabbed lucy into a hug. "I don't deserve a sister like you, how can you forgive me for the things i've done, i'm such an awful sister". She replied crying nonstop. Lucy hugged her sister back saying it ok, i'm fine.

As susan settled down lucy smiled her bright smile again "i've found my gentle" susan looked confused on the outside but on the inside she knew what it meant and was very pleased that she also found her gentle again. So the two girls made a promise with eachother. Lucy will never talk about narnia in front of her unless susan says she can. And susan promises lucy that she will hanged around her anytime she wants. And have time to see her friends. The promise they made would never become broken because the two sisters share a bond no one can break. No even their brothers.

It had been an hour and a half since susan went into the room and had their talk, which made the boys curious to what was happening. They both walked upstairs into the bedroom to see their beloved sisters asleep. Lucy was in susan's lap with her head under her neck and susan's head laying on lucy. The brother couldn't shave seen a more beautiful site. Before walking out they kissed their sisters goodnight and made the covers higher for them. As they shutted the door behind them lucy smiled.

She got her gentle back, her sister, queen susan the gentle. And lucy was right about one thing. She couldn't of asked for anything other than this.