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Part 2
As I walked dragging my feet and slumping my shoulders, I started to wonder where I was. It was painful, but when I thought back to a couple of days ago I remembered I ran straight to the airport, and in my solid grip was a bag full of money, my passport and clothes. Did dad know this was going to happen? I pushed the thought quickly out of my head, and remembered looking at the departure board, I flew to Port Angelos. Mainly because it had the nearest leaving time and partially because I had never heard of it so I came up with the theory that nothing goes on their as it doesn't attract attention. When I landed, I hurried nervously along the squeakily white floor attracting many curious eyes as I went, and I tripped over my own feet as I pushed my way through the rotating doors. Then I ran for about two solid hours and concluded that I didn't have any clue where I was. I was all alone and certain someone was following me. Cautiously I swivelled my head and at a glimpse I could see an elk. No harm at all I thought, but I felt the need to run away from it, so I did.
I was concentrating on my surroundings as I ran. It was very dull, that was the best way to describe it as the only bit of sky I could see through the trees was covered by splodges of fat dirty clouds. I heard a strange sound of footsteps behind me. Or was it paws or hooves? It didn't sound like the pace of a human. Paranoia kicked in. Why would an animal chase me? The sense of the unknown overruled my mind and wound me so tight I was scared to look over my shoulder. My pace doubled, I was dodging the tall, towering trees, when I heard more sets of steps behind me. More! Shit…shit, shit. I could feel their heavy panting and growls, eh growls? They were definitely chasing me, I kept going stricken by fear unable to glimpse at what was behind me. How can they run as fast as me?
In the nearby distance I could see 7 figures. My mind was imagining all of the scenarios but I didn't have the guts to turn around and face what was behind me, so I ran to them. As I got nearer I slowed down and so did whatever was behind me. Oh! I paused… I was shocked by the beauty radiating from the seven people in front of me. They were glorious, magnificent, I was staring in amazement at them. I forgot totally about what I had been running away from and focused on their unique but similar faces. They all had perfectly round eyes that were butterscotch in colour, which seemed to be weary of me. Their skins were very pale, almost too pale. They seemed to be standing in a line but separated off into pairs – excluding one. The short girl with black spiky hair looked like a children's toy that had just been wound up because she was bouncing up on down on her toes in… excitement I think? The man next to her was blonde, lean and glaring at me. Next to them was a colossal man whose biceps were pressing through his shirt, was he being vain, or was it just unavoidable? He looked like he was standing on edge, eager with anticipation, whilst the girl next to him glowered at me. She was… well perfection. The other pair looked generally concerned. She was warm looking and inviting with her heart shaped face and mounds of caramel hair and her partner was tall, stood father out than anyone else and looked confused. Then my eyes flew to him. They consumed his every detail. From his long legs, to his muscular chest, to his broad protective shoulders and his bronzed styled hair. His lips were strained with curiosity and his molten eyes were staring back at mine.
For my own good I forced my stare away from him and to the man closest to me, he looked in charge. It occurred to me, why were they lined up in the forest, were they waiting for me? Just as he was about to address me a cough of attention came form behind me. I slowly turned around and gripped my hands with expectation to see a group of half naked russet coloured boys behind me.
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