sorry about the last chapter, I'm still trying to figure this out.
luckily I found out that I can delete the chapter so I did and I'm
rewriting it. so here it is.


The next day Jade and her friends were helping her get ready for her first date with valley.
"I'm really nervorues about this." Jade said. "how come?" asked Ivy. "because what if I
hear or see something that can make me flip out? that was part of the curse Rex gave me.
if I hear something that sounds like a gunshot I could flip out and k-kill everyone." Jade said.
"that's not gonna happen because Valley decided you two would go to the park." said Kitana.
they finished getting her ready. "okay were done,"Kitana said as they gave her the mirror.
what Jade saw made her gasp with joy. "I-I look... beautiful!" she said.

meanwhile Kirby and Tuff got Valley ready for the date. "thanks for your help guys, I look
great." just then Jade knoked on his door. when they opened the door Valley droped his jaw.
Jade had red lipstick but not too much, light blue eye shadow, black eye liner, dimond earrings,
a charm bracelet and the special necklace her mother gave her. even though Tuff already left,
Kirby and Valley were speechless. "you l-look stunning." Valley finaliy said. "t-thank you." said
Jade. and so they went to the park while Valley had the picnic basket. they set up the picnic.
just than Tiff and her friends walked by. "aw you two look so cute together." said Tiff. "thanks
Tiff" Valley said. when Tiff and her friends left they began eating. by the time they were done
Valley and Jade kissed and went back home. "this was the best day of my life", Jade thought.

just than she heard a dark voice. she knew who it was: Rex. she started to back away into her
room but Rex appeared behind her and grabed her hands "hello remember me?" he said. "R-Rex
p-p-please let go." Jade said starting to tear up. she was about to scream for help but he taped
her mouth shut. "scream and I'll hurt you." he said starting to dig his claws into her hands. he
disappeared with her into the shadows. not only that but no one knew what happened because
it was nighttime and everyone was asleep.