Chapter 2

Thinking too hard gives you a headache

Disclaimer: Ok you know I'm not Masashi Kishimoto so you also know I don't own Naruto.

"Ok go to hell" talking

'But the devil doesn't want me there' Thinking

"Ok why is that" Kyubbi or other Great Spirit talking

'Because he is afraid I'll take over the place' Kyubbi or other Great Spirit thinking

[Ok I don't think that is true but it's funny to put in there] Writer talking to reader

Ok guys I hate waiting how about you huh so let's get this over with and tell the story.

Oh by the way I'm holding a vote should the Kyubbi be a boy or a girl?

If a girl should she be in Naruto's harem?

Last one who should I put in the harem other than Kyubbi (if she gets enough votes for girl and to be in it) and Sakura.

Here are the choices:

Temari

Haku

Hinata

Tayuya

Sasume

Yugito

Ten-Ten

Ino

If I forgot someone let me know

Cast your votes

One more thing I hate the little line maker thing and it hates me so I will put change paragraph to let you know I have moved on from that scene

"I love Ichiraku!" Naruto yelled as he downed his 4th bowl. "Naruto slow down your going to choke if you eat that fast!" a very shocked Ino proclaimed.

"I'm sorry Ino-Chan I just love ramen." Naruto stated as he finished his 5th bowl and moved on to his 6th . "I think she is more worried about her purse and how much money will be in it when you're done Naruto." Said Sasuke as he tried not to show how hard he was laughing at Ino's little problem. "I don't think he should be eating so fast myself Sasuke." Kakashi finally said. "Please Naruto slow down your going to choke." Ino finally yelled out at Naruto who had just finished his 10th bowl of ramen. [Wow doesn't she sound concerned. If wanted this will be the start of their relationship if not I can make her like him as a brother sister kind of deal instead.] "Ino are you actually worried about Naruto?" Sasuke asked with a slight hint of sarcasm dripping from his voice. "Ummm NO! I just don't want him to die and the third hokage blame me for it." She quietly said with a blush that would make Hinata say damn. Kakashi never one to let a joke pass him by quickly added in a little teasing of his own. "Well Ino I think your face betrays your mouth because I've only seen Hinata blush that hard over Naruto." [Oh my god will Naruto finally understand that Hinata is madly in love with him? Will he finally ask her to date him?] "What does this have to do with Hinata-Chan and why does she blush over me?" Naruto asked his sensei and his new brother. [OH MY GOD how dense can he be good lord I really need to work with him] "Ummm never mind that Naruto it is not important." Sasuke said to his very very dense little brother. "Ok guys I have to go back to the flower shop or my mom is going to yell at me, I paid for the ramen you ate Naruto I'll see you later ok." Ino said her face still redder than a fucking apple. [Hey look at me I'm Tayuya I cuss every other word awesome.]

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"Hey N Naruto-Kun." Stuttered a very nervous Hinata. "Hi Hinata-Chan how are you today?" Naruto yelled in his normal spastic tone. "I-I'm f-fine N-Naruto-Kun."

Hinata somehow managed to stutter out despite the fact she was about to faint from the closeness between them. "Hey Hinata you got really red are you feeling ok?" a totally clueless Naruto asked. "Y-Yes I'm fine Naruto-Kun it is just a little hot out here today." Hinata lied hoping he would fall for it. [God Hinata must stop stuttering it is annoying trying to type her stutter in every freaking time she talks]

"Ok if you say so Hinata-Chan." Naruto said getting suspicious because it was only 50 degrees outside that day. So he got an idea and did a little experiment. Naruto took 1 step closer to Hinata and watched her reaction.[Oh my god he got smart in like 2 seconds that is amazing] "N-N-Naruto-Kun what are you d-doing?" Hinata stuttered out her face getting redder by the second. "Nothing just doing an experiment say Hinata did your face get redder or am I just seeing things?" Naruto asked with an I so caught you tone. "N-N-N-No I am just to hot like I said it is too hot out here." Hinata lied again. "Hinata how can it be to hot out here it is only 50 degrees?" Naruto asked taking another step towards her. "Ummm N-N-Naruto-Kun aren't you getting a little close?" Hinata asked as her body temp jumped like 10 degrees. "Hmmm I don't know am I?" Naruto asked as he completely closed the gap between them with one final step. "Sasuke, Kakashi-sensei what do you think am I too close to her?" Naruto asked the other to males present for the conversation. Now to say Sasuke and Kakashi were shocked by how fast Naruto had caught on to Hinata's feelings would be the understatement of the century, they were downright floored. "Naruto what are you doing?" Sasuke asked to which Kakashi simply nodded. "Oh nothing Sasuke just seeing why Hinata blushes around me so much, see I think she likes me." Naruto stated with an you know I already knew kind of tone. "Naruto-Kun how did you know that!?" Hinata asked very quickly her face returning to its normal color. "It is as plain as the nose on my face Hina-Chan you always stutter when you talk to me but not anyone else, you also follow me around constantly, then finally you try so hard not to but every time my face gets within two feet of yours and you register I'm there you blush so hard you look like you might pass out. "Do you feel the same way for her Naruto?" a voice only Hinata and Kakashi knew right away. "Well I have to think about it a little but I really think she is a great friend and I could return her feelings." Naruto stated as he turned to face the owner of the voice he paled the moment he saw who it was.

Oh my god cliffhanger I'm so mean aren't I well enjoy and remember to review and cast your votes.