Here is my first chapter. Do you think you can send me a couple of reveiws? I realize I only updated yesterday.

The young tom slinked stealthly through the tall grass. He sighed, stood straight, and gave a loud yowl. Then he let out a short, humorless laugh.

To any other cat, I would look crazy, he thought moodily,except there no other cats.

Just then the scent of a young she-cat drifted over to him. His eyes widened and he let out a snarl. He stopped almost immeditly, hadn't he just been wishing for company?

Still he was wary as he followed the scent of the she-cat over a hill and to an oak. He crept around the base of the oak. He shot up in the air when he heard her voice.

"Who-who are you?"

He looked up at her and felt a bit dazed. She was beautiful.

When he hesitated she stopped trembling and when she spoke her voice had a little more force.

"Didn't you hear me? I said, who. Are. You?"

"I-I-I'm Hawk", he stuttered.

She eyed him scornfully. "I obviously have nothing to fear from you."

That was the last straw. "Now wait just a minute, this is my territory."

"I never said it was anybody elses." She muttered.

He bared his teeth a little in frustration at this. She was impossible!

"I mean seriously, who would this peice of Starclan forsaken land?" She said, the corner of her mouth twitching slightly.

"What's Starclan?" He asked, cocking his head in confusion at her strange language.

"I don't know. My mother would use it sometimes" Her voice was husky and Hawk knew he shouldn't push but he couldn' resist asking the question that spilled out of his mouth.

"What happened to your mother?"

She seemed to freeze. She stared at him and seemed to be breaking down right in front of him. Hawk regreted asking her.

"I don't know!", but the guilt in her eyes told him she was lying.

She jumped down from the impossibly high branch but miss judged the impact and landed hard, jolting her left shoulder. She burst into tears (I know cats can't cry), Hawk wasn't sure if it was from physical or mental pain. He had an idea that she had gone through worse pain, up close you just noticed a faint scar running up the entire length of her black belly fur.

He shuddered, how had she survived? A wound like that could kill.

She noticed his gaze and narrowed her eyes. This was obviously another forbiddin topic.

"Here, let me help." Hawk said, trying to help.

She seemed relived that he had let iit go and nodded stiffly.

"That's a nice thank you", He muttered. To his suprise, she laughed.

"Sorry." She said, smiling at him. Hawk was immideitly stunned once again.

"The bone is fractured, I'm going to put it back in it's place." Hawk told her.

"And thats going to hurt, isn't it?" She said with a sigh.

"No, actully it'll feel a lot better than it is now."

The she-cat gritted her teeth and looked away as Hawk popped it back in its place.

"I'm done", he told her. She let out a sigh of relif.

"Thanks!" She said, looking amazed.

He shrugged sadly. "You have to know these thing's if you live alone."

A look of sympathy crossed over her face. "I can stay with you as long as I'm here. If you want." She added quickly.

"Thanks", Hawk purred. "You've never told me your name."

She looked startled. "No, I haven't." She dipped her head. "I'm Night."

I hope you liked it! By the way, Hawk is pure black with amber eyes. Night is black but the tip of her tail is white, she has blue eyes. I get the feeling it's a bit rushed even though it took me, like, an hour to type... Don't you just love Hawk's love at first sight thing!