The Rebirth of the riders
New troubles
Note: I'm sorry I haven't updated in 2weeks I was gone camping. Sorry. Here's the next chapter. I hope you like only got 1 review.
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Eragon Pov.
As Eragon took the offence he shouted commands, bend your knees don't slouch pull your arms in. e as he welted his cousin with quick taps with Brisngr. As Eragon hit Roran with another quick tap Roran threw down his sword and swore. " Eragon. Roran said angrily I'm a beginner we all know you your one of the best sword's fighter in the land but do you have to hit me so many times.
Well a real enemy wont soften their blows so neither should I he retorted. Roran sighed what's wrong with you, for the last 2 weeks you have been here depressed kicking everyone's ass at sword fighting.
The last time you were like this is when your dog spunk died. Eragon sighed if only he could tell Roran about Murtagh and thorn and how they were captured a week ago, and how thorn is awake and refuses to tell anyone what happened till his rider was revive. Although Eragon really didn't believe that thorn and murtagh turned good he couldn't help but hope that maybe they have changed.
he and Saphira and the other Elvin magicians tried to break into thorns mind but found out that thorn and murtagh had sworn in the ancient language to each other that they will not give any value able information to anyone unless its willingly. And he isn't willingly to give anyone any valuable information right now so the only thing we can do is wait for murtagh to wake from his coma.
Eragon had the elves complaining to him each time they were done their shifts (they watched thorn in shifts 6 elvin spell castors and Saphira but when Saphira went to hunt there were 10 spell castors)
We should avenge Oromis and Glaedr by killing thorn and murtagh they say every time but Eragon had to make sure that no harm was to come to thorn unless he was to become violent.
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Just as he was about to tell Roran some excuse about how the war was tough he felt a familiar presence waiting for him to open his mind he let it in after blocking all emotions and thoughts. Yes he asked questioningly wondering why one of the elvin spell castors needed to contact him.. Sorry Shur'tugal but it seems murtagh is stirring. he felt his hatred and fear flowing through the temperedly link, he told her" I there's no need to worry I have his sword and I blocked his magic he is completely defenseless.
I'll be right there he couldn't hide his excitement and let it flow though the link he felt his disapproval before she blocked it. Eragon closed the link and told Roran he had to do something that concerns the war which wasn't a lie. He told Saphira in an excitement what had happened to murtagh and told her not to tell thorn so he doesn't try to find murtagh.
He felt a very weak probing his mind. He got angry fast who dares probes a dragon riders mind without permission. He instantly sent a firm assault on the mind without looking to see who it is he saw Roran crumple to the ground holding his head, Eragon immediately stopped the attack.
Eragon ran over to Roran he went into Roran head and shared some of the pain that he afflicted. "Roran" he shouted but it seems that the shock of the assault had put him in a temporarily coma. damn Eragon cursed he picked Roran up wondering how he was able to attempt to attack his mind he doesn't know any magic he wondered and he refused to look in his mind. He ran out of the city with Roran on his back to wear murtagh was kept.
Murtagh Pov.
There I saw the most beautiful sight ever there were six dragons all of them had there own riders flying around having fun there was a thorn with me on his back, Saphira with Eragon they were at least2-3 years old.
While the white (male) had a very small person that looked like a small boy, orange (female) had rider that was extremely huge that it was pulling the dragon down, green (male) that had a what looked like a human with a lot more agility and a yellow (female) dragon had some one who looked human that wore a giant new dragons were no older than 6months.
As I awoke I heard a faint rustling sound not opening my eyes. There was a surprisingly no pain anywhere on my body I heard some whispers coming from a unfamiliar voice speaking in a foreign language as I sat there was a shadow past over my eyes. You have awoken said a voice harshly. I opened my eyes to see who was talking to me it was an elf with green eyes and white hair.
"The mighty Shur'tugal has awoken the elf replied harshly. At first thing murtagh did was look around then it hit him he was at the Varden we made it he exclaimed. He wondered why the elf was being mean to him then he remembered the gold dragon he killed and the rider. He tried contacting thorn to tell him that there mission was a success and where he was but he couldn't locate thorn they must have blocked his link. He cursed silently the elf looked slightly amused do you actually think wed let you communicate with your dragon.
"Poor creature Galabatorix forced it to hatch for someone so pathetic" the elf spat. Murtagh couldn't take it no one insults thorn murtagh got what energy he had left and stood up he felt like he was going to throw up but he pushed that feeling away. He looked the elf in the eye "don't you ever call thorn anything other than his name you stupid son of a bitch you got that". No I dint he said with a sneer shoving murtagh back against the wall. Murtagh stood up weakly and swung his fist and it collided with the elf's jaw.
Be fore the elf could do anything a strong but firm voice said stop. Froe! What is the meaning of this I told you no harm was to come to him. Just because he worked for Galabatorix doesn't mean he's evil. Eragon walked into the room with a man that looked strangely familiar on his back. He walked over to one of the empty beds and set a man that looked like he was unconscious down on the bed.
Eragon stared at him with so much concern that murtagh figured it was probably was a family member or some one really close to him. You are dismissed froe take Roran with you and watch him till he recovers you could leave now the elf grumbled but walked out with Roran. Murtagh head started spinning, he swayed a little before stumbling into his bed Eragon walked over to him and said murtagh he said not mean but not nicely murtagh. "Before you past out do you remember what you said to me". Murtagh smiled of coarse mighty shade slayer I said playfully. And I quote "Eragon we did it Eragon our true names have been changed our oaths are broken we come to join you if you would have us." he said in the ancient language.
Eragon smiled for the first time in week well you rest here I'll be back in a couple hours he walked out for a minute then came back with some soup. When I get back I want to here your story of how you changed your true name, and if the leader of the Varden decides that you can be trusted to join than you'll be put into my care than you can have your sword back and see thorn. Murtagh smiled at Eragon "I have to tell the Varden some useful information do you think it's possible for me to come to see the leader if I swear I won't do anything that will destroy your chances of overthrowing the king". Eragon hesitated.
Please Eragon it will be worth it I know everyone will want to know what I have to say. Tell me murtagh what you want to say then I'll decide whether to bring you to the leader. "No if I tell you would use it right away and leave me here, let me go", ok Eragon replied but it better be worth it. "Trust me it's worth it" and together they left walking side by side.
Saphira Pov.
There he was his scales a blood red color he was strongly built and the more she thought about it the more she wanted to mate with thorn. Not knowing what came over her she touched snouts with thorn. She saw shock run over his face what are you doing he asked her well we are the last of our race and if were to revive it then we might as well get to know each other better. She swore if thorn scales could get any redder with shock and embarrassment then he would. So thorn who are your parents? well my father was the Ohen the strong one of the strongest dragons know. And my mother was the great Jasmine the queen of the wild dragon he replied hesitantly. "So were you given a lot of freedom as you grew up in the empire"? When thorn remained silent she apologized I'm sorry thorn she said it's alright I'm fine it's just the stuff I've been through. But she couldn't help but notice the sadness in his voice.
Saphira I am getting hungry can you get something for me his voice echoed in her head. Sure thorn she replied kindly I was going to hunt later today but I can do it now. What do you want? Well umm it really doesn't mater a deer or two please. Okay but I need to get the other 4 spell castors. She reached out with her mind found the spell castors she also saw through Eragon's mind that him and murtagh were walking through the forest on the way to Nasuada's Office chamber.
As Saphira was looking for deer she extended her mind and she felt the faint presents of at least 5000 she used all her strength and looked into a mind that wasn't guarded and tried to figure out if it was friend or foe. Then she saw the information she wanted and found out he was part of Galabatorix men preparing to attack the city of Feinster. She saw the army in the distance there must have been a lot of magicians cause she sensed a lot of guarded minds almost 50 magicians in this one because she could feel there minds well hidden.
I must warn the Varden she thought franticallyAnd they were only a day away from the city! As Saphira turned around she flew with all her speed as soon as she was in reach with Eragon she yelled Eragon!! The empire is attacking and there only a day away from here!! As she raced back she heard the bells signaling the enemy was attacking as she flew over thorn he askedwhat happened and when Saphira told him he cursed and took off to attack the enemy.
Thorn Saphira cried no!" I will not let them get here so they can kill murtagh while he's in a coma" he said harshly. "But thorn she said desperetly he's awake and before she could stop herself she told him everything getting in his path he couldn't run away. But he didn't listen and flew over her. the elves were to busy getting ready to defend Eragon they didn't noticed Thorn flying away right in to the enemy when they did he was far away by the time the would use magic it would kill them by the distance thorn was at. Saphira dint know what to do go save the only male dragon she could mate with or go help Eragonget ready for the war. It should have been obvious but she couldn't decide then she made up her mind and tool off in the direction she thought was right
Saphira left and dint tell Eragon you still don't know what's in the sac you know what color the dragons are and I think you can guess 2/4 riders are find out what's in the saddle next chapter.
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