Wednesday, 25 July, 2012
* hey guys! srry i promised two in one day but i got busy. so here is chapter one!
CHAPTER ONE
"Hey Sarah wanna go to Bradshaw hill?" Asked Vannessa.
"you know the answer, yes of course."
we head down the road to the hill with the giant house on it. it was called bradshaw hill because that was the name of the house. The house sat loonely and darkened.
"Are you excited to finally go inside?" asked vannessa
"yes! i have been waiting for months." i said back
i have been waiting for months because i heard there was a spooky guy there. they say he is about 16 (my age).
we walked up to the creepy front door of what looked to be a tiny cottage up close. the sidewalk overcrowded by grass and weeds. just what this house needed. Before we opened the door we both took a big gulp.
"Wait!" i scream
"shhhhh! we are gonna get caught if you dont be quiet. now whats the problem this time, usually you are the first one to try something."
" i just dont know about thtis. i thought i heard sirens but maybe not. could we just make some rules first?"
" what kind of rules." she eyed me skeptically.
" like for instance no leaving each other sides. Or no touching anything unless its awesome. just kidding you can touch whatever it aint my house."
" fine i agree we needed that rule. come on lets go in its gonna get dark soon."
We both pushed on the door. nothing. we tried again both using all of out might. nothing. Thats when i noticed a red and silver plaque card on the ground next to my foot.
" oh. this says we need to pull."
so we both pulled on the door and with a squeak it popped open. we took one step in when a arem snatched me up by my throat.
*so what do you think? srry for no capitals i didnt feel like putting them in. srry the chapters are short but i wanna put suspense in each and i gotta think of more details. chapter three will be longer . i promise
