ANDREW POV

I wake up to the sound of my alarm clock. I get up and take a shower. I am wearing a navy blue suit. Today I am taking my Aptitude Test. I go to the kitchen carrying the book that I am reading. It is called Paper Towns. It is really good and I am almost done with it. I should finish it by the time I leave for school. My mom made pancakes and bacon. After I eat my breakfast I go brush my teeth. I place my finished book in my room and head out to the bus stop.

When I get on the bus, an Abnegation woman gives me her seat. "Thank you ma'am," I say politely. When I get to school, I get off if the bus and head to my locker to get my books. Today is my last day of school-unless I choose Erudite of course. All of our classes are cut in half today So that we can attend them all one last time.

I've never been the smartest person, so I doubt that I'll get Erudite as my result, but who knows.

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I am sitting in the cafeteria with my fellow Erudite. I am anxiously awaiting my turn to take the test. When the woman comes back to announce the third round of names, "From Amity, Carolin Keorber and Jacob Reiter. From Abnegation, Kathryn Spinner and Marjorie Spinner," when they get up I notice that they are identical twins. "From Candor, Chloe Craig and Marcus Eaton. From Dauntless, Natalie Woodley and Hana Teller. From Erudite, Andrew Prior and Evelyn Johnson."

I walk into the Aptitude Test room. The rooms are separated by mirrors. There is a chair in the middle of the room.

"Hi. My name is Julia. I will be administering your test today. Please sit down."

I sit ad she says.

"Okay, I'm not aloud to tell you what's going yo happen, but just stay relaxed and it will be over shortly."

Julia hands me a vial with a bluish liquid. I drink it and close my eyes.

I am in the Aptitude Test room. There are two baskets in front of me. One contains a knife and one contains cheese.

"Choose." I hear a voice say. I grab the cheese. I could never use the knife on ant creature. A dog appears. I hand it the cheese and it calms down. Then, a little girl appears. The dog runs after her. I run after the dog and jump in front of the girl. I feel the dogs teeth sinking into arm. The scene changes. I am on a bus. I stand in the aisle, not wanting to occupy any seats, next to s Candor man reading the newspaper.

"Do you know this man?" He asks, pointing to the front page. I do.

"No sir."

"You're lying."

"I really don't know that man sir. This is my stop. Goodbye."

The scene changes once again. Now I am in the Factionless sector. A man is beating a young girl. I go up to him and put myself in front of the girl. He leaves and I fend to the girls wounds. She can't be any older than 8.

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I wake up in the Aptitude Test room with Julia standing at the computer.

"Congratulations Andrew. Your result is Abnegaton. You can go back to your table now. Choose wisely tomorrow."

"Thank you." I say as I am walking our the door.

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I am walking into my apartment. I decide to help my mother with dinner. We are making pizza. As the pizza bakes, I help clean the apartment. My parents aren't suspicious because I often help around the house.

After dinner I go up to my room to think about my decision. I think that I might transfer to Abnegation since that I'd my result and, I have always admired the way that they can forget themselves so easily.

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