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Tsuki no ame, RandomZombieNinja and Tanukiskies... I hope you all like this chapter better. I wrote this chapter based on the reviews I got so I hope this satisfies you all
I hope you enjoy this chapter of good luck Hinata
Just as he said that the door opened signalling everyone that the customers started entering. The females flooded in colours of white and blue (their school uniform colours)
Hinata entered the kitchen and started preparing snacks and drinks. The kitchen had marble surfaces and tiled flooring. It was fully stocked including the fridge and cupboards with ingredients and fresh produce like fruit. She put on a plain white apron and tied her midnight blue shaggy hair up in a small pony tail at the base of her head. She rolled her sleeves up to her elbows and huffed slightly before she moved swiftly picking up bowls, spoons and scales as well as ingredients for cakes around the kitchen.
Arriving back to the marble surface, she took a scale and measured the flour then sifting it into the bowl. She followed by cracking 2 eggs and adding sugar and so on. After making the batter she put it in a baking tin and putting it into the oven. While it was baking she made drinks like tea and put them on a cart.
The rolled the cart into the room and started serving the females as well as the hosts. First was Sasuke's table where the females were animatedly talking to him. His black hair was combed neatly with the hair in the back spiked upwards slightly. He had an air of confidence as well as aloofness around him which must be one of the reasons which attracted females as well as his good looks. As good looking as he was he was not talking to any of them apart from staring at them with a stoic face which made Hinata frown slightly. As Hinata arrived with the drinks Sasuke looked up slightly causing the females to stop talking and look behind them.
Hinata ever so timidly started handing them cups and filled them with tea. A slight incline of the head from Sasuke showed Hinata he was grateful. Smiling slightly she started pushing the cart away from the table thinking that maybe he wasn't so bad. A few steps later she heard the females start talking again asking question about her and asking why she was there and for how long. Still not answering Sasuke looked onwards to where Hinata was his curiosity increasing
Hinata started to walk towards Shino's table where they were partaking in a deep conversation. With Shino's face half covered he gave of a mysterious vibe which attracted some women as well as his good looks. Even if only half his face was showing you could see he was good looking with his spiky hair and pale complexion. As she got closer she found out that they were having a deep conversation about the environment and different ways on how they could help nature. He was a serious person as well as a nature fanatic which would be known by the fact that there was a small ant farm near the table. Not wanting to interrupt them, she silently placed cups on the table and poured tea for them. Shino looked at her for a second before giving her small thanks and a smile which she knew he was giving her behind his high collar.
Gaara and Shikamaru were next. She pushed the trolley towards them where Gaara was giving the girls short answers to their questions. His red hair demanded attention as he stood out from the crowd. He was similar to Sasuke with their aloof personality and confident attitude. The tattoo gave him a bad boy image as well as some of the scars which adorned his arms. Luckily none were on his face. The girls were not complaining what so ever finding that Gaara answering them was good enough. The asked many questions like what his favourite subject was and so on.
Shikamaru on the other hand was having a small nap on the other couch. His hair tied up in its pony tail showing a pineapple shape. His ear piercing gave him a cool look as most of the boys had none. As well as his cool laid back image he was also very clever topping everyone in school academically. But because he was lazy he never shows it. The girls who designated him didn't complain seeing that they found looking at Shikamaru's face entertaining. They didn't notice Hinata arriving but Gaara did. He nodded towards her and gave him a small wave back.
Hinata again got out another set of cups and placed them on the table pouring tea for them. This happened to Itachi and Tobi's table as well where she was greeted enthusiastically by the latter with a glomp.
Itachi was a character like an older brother, caring and always there for you (a/n this is the Itachi who was nice before he became evil...for people who read naruto you would already know he was good :P) he gave a brotherly aura which attracted some of the girls towards him. The addition of Tobi increased his likeness as Tobi was a childlike character. With his childish voice to his attitude, he has girls falling for his cuteness.
And after the mini struggle with trying to get Tobi when she arrived, Hinata went back to the kitchen where she got the cake out of the oven. After a few minutes when it cooled down, she iced the cake with plain white icing and put some fresh strawberries on top. She carried the cake out into the room and places it on a stand on a table in the centre of the room before walking back again.
She was wondering around the room where naruto and Kiba noticed her. With naruto calling her over, she timidly walked towards them where she gave them a small tentative smile.
"Hey Kaoru, how you doing buddy" Kiba shouted excitedly, his hair ruffling slightly from the movement of him waving. His smile was stretched out giving her a cheeky grin, his red tattoos scrunching upwards from the smile. Writing her answer down naruto put his arm around her shoulder reading her message. 'I'm fine. It's a bit tiring walking back and forth but its fun' the board showed. There was even a small smiley face near the bottom corner which Kiba and naruto found cute. Cooing at her they rubbed their cheeks together with hers while saying how cute she was.
Hinata being the girl/boy she was turned an impressive colour of red and started to sway a bit. Kiba noticing her swaying got back into his senses and got Naruto to stop causing Hinata to stabilise.
"Hey sorry about that Kaoru, I didn't know how easily you got embarrassed" Naruto said sheepishly while rubbing the back of his head messing his blond hair up. He had a stretched grin on his face which caused his whisker marks to move. Both Naruto and Kiba's personalities would make anyone smile which may be one of the reasons they were so popular with the girls
Blushing slightly Hinata wrote 'Its fine. We've only known each other for a day after all'. She smiled a bit towards him her head tilting to the side a bit
"Hey Kaoru, you smell really good" Kiba suddenly exclaimed while sniffing around her. She blushed again before scribbling into her board. 'That's because I was making some cake. Would you like some?' she questioned tilting her head to the side
A grin emerged on both Naruto and Kiba's face. Wrapping their arms around her, they both dragged her towards the kitchen forgetting the fact that they had customers before them
Because they were so far ahead they didn't notice Kiba and Naruto's customers talking with a slightly ominous tone.
"Look at that guy! Who does he think he is stealing our Naruto-sama's attention" whispered one girl harshly
"Did you see him!" said another. "A messy poor commoner stole our Kiba-sama, he has no right to do that!" she finished.
"And they were talking so naturally together, why would they become friends with him" the first girl continued
Another girl raised a hand. "Why don't we do something about it, we could embarrass her so she won't ever think of hanging around our Kiba or naruto." After this suggestion a few grins emerged from the females faces. "Good idea. Now here's what were going to do..."
In the kitchen with Hinata
"Ohhh Kaoru this cake tastes sooo goooood!" exclaimed both Naruto and Kiba while munching on a cake Hinata brought out.
'I'm glad you liked it' Hinata wrote while beaming towards them causing Kiba to blush slightly
'Was it me or did he suddenly look cute?' Kiba thought while covering his mouth with his left hand
"Hey Kaoru what's in this?" Naruto questioned. 'It's a Victoria sponge with butter icing and strawberries on top. Why?' she replied leaning towards him a bit
"No reason. It's just really good. Can you make me more?" naruto asked suddenly shaking her shoulders slightly which shook Hinata a bit.
Composing herself after the small shakeup, she scribbled down a short answer of yes. So grabbing her apron she got another bowl and more ingredients and started making another batch of cakes forgetting for a bit that Naruto and Kiba were watching her. The latter(s) were watching her in slight awe following her smooth movements from whisking and placing it into the oven to piping the icing onto the newly baked cake. Before they knew it, another cake was made. Cutting the pieces into 8 sections she got 2 pieces and placed them onto another place and put them in front of the 2 guys with new cutlery.
Biting into their newly acquired cake they sighed in happiness drifting into happy land. While they were fantasying about marrying the cake Hinata was making more tea and drinks as well and setting up the cake onto the cart. Getting ready to serve more snacks, she balanced the tray of cake on one hand while pushing the cart of drinks with the other.
Hinata was humming a small tune to herself not noticing the girls' huddles in the corner who were eyeing her quite evilly. So continuing to walk around the room, she didn't notice one of the girls from the huddle moving towards her. The said girl bumped violently onto her causing Hinata to trip over causing the cake to fall all over her as well as the tea scalding her arms and legs.
This cased a ruckus in the room causing a crown to form around the fallen girl who was tearing up a bit because of the hot liquid. The rest of the guys moved through the crowd towards Hinata and gently helped her up causing her to wince slightly. The girl who caused it slinked slightly away from the crown towards the huddle of girls in the corner. This action however, didn't escape the eyes of the guys who were glaring at them slightly.
Naruto and Kiba who just arrived went straight to Hinatas side and asked hurriedly multiple questions asking if she was ok. Hinata on the other hand just brushed them of slightly and limped towards the bathroom hoping she could take the scalding feeling away. This behaviour shocked some of the males because her personality wouldn't allow that kind of action which meant that it must have really hurt her. This caused the guys to clench their fist.
Even though they've only known the boy for a short amount of time, she easily made friends with them quickly because of her friendly personality and her effort to earnestly pay back the debt which made them somewhat respect her/him
Sasuke being the first to move said that he would find another change of clothes for her seeing as her current uniform was ruined. He found one in the closet near the back and made his way to the bathroom door.
(Now important authors note! Im going to change his last name, suggestion from a review seeing as Suzuki didn't really fit her so im going to stick with Hyuuga, I mean there's a lot of Hyuuga's in Japan right?)
Sasuke knocked on the door slightly "Hyuuga-san I've brought you a change of clothes, can you open up" he said stoically. A few seconds passed before the door opened slightly and Hinata's face popped out from the gap. She tilted her head to the side (she does that a lot doesn't she?) and pushed her hand towards him signalling for him to pass over the clothes.
He handed her the folded uniform and she gave him a small smile as thanks before going back inside the bathroom.
Flushing slightly he waited a few seconds for his face to turn back to its normal colour seeing that her smiling face was slightly cute. Arriving back to the guys he saw that they were talking to the girl who had accidentally pushed her over.
"Don't deny it Suzuka-san; we know you were the one who pushed her. And even if we didn't know there are cameras everywhere" Shino spoke calmly. Said girl started to turn pale. She looked behind her to the girls who she was talking with previously. "Don't worry; we know you were accompanied by a few other girls" Gaara spoke after
Suddenly turning angry one of the girls from the huddled crowd stomped forward and started shouting. "Why is he even here! He's a dirty commoner who doesn't deserve your attention. We have to PAY for your attention while that poor boy can talk to you freely! Are you even sure he won't take advantage over you!" while a few more girls from the huddle agreed and continued to argue, Naruto suddenly spoke up.
"Don't you DARE talk about kaoru like that" he glared at them while continuing "you have no right to talk about him like that! Do you even know him?"
"If you're going to talk badly about our colleagues you might as well leave" Itachi cut in smoothly not wanting Naruto to get violent, an angry Naruto isn't good for anyone.
Gaping slightly, the small crowd of girls screamed slightly before storming out of the club room. Tension, however was still in the air. This was broken by the sound of a door opening.
Earlier in the bathroom with Hinata-Hinata's POV
'That tea was really hot' I thought while wincing. After Uchiha-san brought me a spare change of clothes, I hobbled towards the shower hoping that the water would cool down my skin which was turning a bit red as well as removing the cake remaining in my hair.
I turned the shower on but not before removing my clothes. After I took down my trousers and my button up, I started unwinding my chest bindings.
Before you ask, yes I am a girl. My real name is Hinata Hyuuga and the reason I'm dressed as a boy is because my father, Hiashi Hyuuga, though that I would need more male characteristics because I would be succeeding him as the next president of the Hyuuga company, and seeing that I'm timid and easily shy, he thought that this experience would gain me some confidence.
So anyway after I turned the shower on, I stepped in and let the cool water sooth my arms and legs. I grabbed a bar of soap and lathered my body while the water washed it away. I then shampooed my hair and washed it out thoroughly before I stepped out of the shower.
I went to the towel rack and wrapped one around my body and grabbed another for drying my hair. Rubbing myself dry, I went to get the uniform Uchiha-san got for me. Luckily it fit e well and isn't too tight or it might show some of my figure (she's a girl of course she has a waist hahaha)
I put on the trousers (forget the underwear...let's say she had a spare?) and bound my chest once again with bandages before I buttoned up the shirt and put on my tie loosely.
I then put on the blazer and tucked my shirt in. I exited the bathroom with my hair still slightly damp. Closing the door I looked back towards the crowd which was staring at me weirdly. I started to pat around my face wondering if anything was out of place before I remembered I forgot my glassed in the bathroom. Running back in, I picked up by glassed as well as my board and pen before scribbling something out.
'Oops I forgot my glasses :P' I showed them the message before I placed my glassed back on. I ran my hand through my hair for a bit seeing if my hair was still wet but I suddenly saw a girl on the floor unconscious with a trail of blood from the nose. I tilted my head to the side but before I knew it all the females dropped in a faint
End of chapter
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Sasuke
Gaara
Shikamaru
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