Author's Note:

I believe in constructive criticism BUT there is such a thing as crossing the line especially if you're going to be excessively critical about a fanfic that is only ONE CHAPTER long so far… everything is never explained in the first chapter. As for the reviewer who wants to know why Wolverine/Logan is even with Storm… well incase you forgot HE IS part of the teachers at the school and is part of the X-Men. So, naturally if Professor Xavier asks him to accompany Storm he basically has no choice but to comply ESPECIALLY since Scott/Cyclops is presumed dead. And I wouldn't consider him explaining himself to Lexi, but he is a badass and naturally gets defensive. A badass wouldn't just stand there and let someone tell them they smell and look like an animal without replying with something other than "Yeah whatever." Also, Logan wouldn't necessarily know everything about Lexi unless Professor Xavier informed him of the duo-mutation. If you remember from the movies, Professor Xavier leaves out many small details until the appropriate time. And yes, Magneto is living in an underground location which is not really all that unordinary if you consider the fact he located himself inside of cave which was covered in complete metal in the first movie. Then he lived in the woods surrounded by followers living out of tents. Also, the purpose of a fortune cookie is to tell you your fortune, Lexi does not say anything about anyone's fortune. If you lived in complete and utter isolation you would probably occupy your time by reading, thinking and meditating, therefore becoming an expert in matters often questioned by others. SO like I have said before I do believe in constructive criticism BUT I also believe in "If you have nothing nice to say, then don't say anything at all," because, basically is it really all that fair to rip apart one chapter? Since when does a good story answer all the reader's burning questions in a first chapter that is less than 1300 words?

ALSO to the little reviewer who is ranting about this being a so called "Mary Sue"… you can stuff it because I am doing this for absolute fun! I am in no way trying to write a freaking novel here so BACK THE EFF OFF! GOD you little mary sue people write the nastiest reviews… incase you have forgotten this is a place for FANS to WRITE THEIR OWN FICS. Leave them ALONE if you don't like the damn story THAN DO NOT READ IT! PS .. omg it is SO AMAZING how you have my entire story figured out gasp How EVER did you know that I was going to make her the most powerful and that Logan would want her! NOT! She can't be the most powerful because of the fact that A- you can't really be the most powerful if your main power is to morph into animals… unlike Jean Grey and Professor X that can use telekinesis and read thoughts and control minds OR like Magneto that can basically manipulate the most used material on EARTH.. now THAT is powerful! And there is no way in hell I would make Logan want her like that because that would be WRONG considering she is like 18 and PS I don't even like Warren that much so that would be useless.. SO like I said before BACK OFF and stop acting like you're the Ebert and Ropert of fanfics! Until you can write like your Stephan King, you can take your mary sues and SHOVE THEM UP YOUR ASS… if every story would be original they wouldn't play off ideas that have already been established.. DUH. It's pathetic people like you that remind me of WHY I stopped coming here… you really need to stop being so nasty cuz you are not doing anyone ANY favors.

A word of the wise to future reviewers: if you feel like this is a mary sue or a terrible story than don't fing review and just click the X-button on the top right hand corner of the page and go away.. like I said this is for fun so really… stop trying to be so hypocritical.. if you write a nasty review I will bash you back because its unnecessary to bash a story that IS ONE CHAPTER LONG

Good-day :)