a/n: well guys i couldn't wait! hehehe so i wrote some more. thanx again to my cousin who red the first bit of it and helped me with spellin and stuff but then she had 2 go to somewhere so maybe she can read rest wen she gets back? hehehehe hint ;)

~~~~~~~~~chapter 2~~~~~~~~~~~

so cortex n the others had a cup of tee and a chat.

"OMG cortex i cant believe your machine worked" said n gin again.

"i know it's grate", said cortex, "i now have a new plan to put into action!"

"what" said tropy who was eating biscuits n still wanting a stuffed heed for his wall.

"im gonna capture lots of humans and lots of animals n chop dem up and put bits in the machine to make furries just like that one" lauged cortex. "lots of people like furies so i will sell them and be rich and take over the world."

"wow that's a fuccin great idea" said uka uka (a/n: he's really bad so he swears ok)

"but first we have to fix the machine", said tropy. "it mite have created a furry but it broke the machine so we would have to change it a bit"

"ok ok ok" said cortex grumpily and got up to go get more cake from the kitchen

"what shed we do about the raccoon girl" said n gin spraying crumbs all over uka uka

"go and get her!" corsex bellowed. "i want er for miself!"

AT THE BANDICOOT HOUSE

the raccoon lended outside and the bandicoots and aku aku catch up to her

"hey!" sed coco "do you want to come in for a talk"

"okay" said the raccoon but didnt meet cocos eyes she was too busy takin in her surroundings.

coco unlocked the door and everyone came in. crash got out some bottles of pop n then aku aku said "what is your name my child"

"i dont have a name" sed the raccoon girl and a loan tear of blood roled down her face.

"I NO, FOOL" sed crunch who came out of nowhere "I SHALL CALL YOU LACY"

lacey looked at crunch and his mussels and her humanish body kinda went all hot and sweaty.

"y lacy" she asked

"bcos of your dress" crunch laffed.

"oh, i see" lacey smiled n took a sip of her pop it tasted like wumpa. "i like the name lacey."

"good!" said crunch "maybe we can all go out surfin in a bit"

"CRUNCH" said coco in a boring voice "i don't fink that lacey should go out just yet she's only just been made and those stitches need to heal" she pointed at lacey's wrists and ankles and neck.

"PFFPFPFPFPFFFF" said crash "she'll be alright! yahoo!"

so after they finished their pop and had some strawberry n lattice sanwiches they all headed out to the sea.

BACK AT CORTEX CASSLE

cortex n the others prepaired their flying mashine and took off. brio was dangling off a wire from the blimp ready to grab lacey as she surfed on the sea. but lacey managed to dodge brio's grabby hands and avoided cortex's gun. aku aku consentrated on getting crash and coco and crunch back into the house while lacey grabbed coconuts and chucked them at brio. he fell off. "AAAAAAAGH"

"BRIO I'M CUMMING" said cortex. he leapt out of the blimp and landed in the sea and swum around getting brio who couldn't swim and was nearly drowning. tropy took advantage of all the hubbubb and jumped off the blimp and squished lacey with his clock.

"I'VE GOT YOU NOW, YOU RIDICULOUS LITTLE VERMIN" said tropy as he handcuffed lacey and took her on the blimp. inside the house coco and crash wept as they watched their new frend being taken away.

END OF CHAPTER 2. i'm really proud of this guys please r&r there is a lot more plot twists to cum!