Hello everybody! :) I'm back, once again, with a new rewritten chapter! Are you guys excited? Yeah you are! Ok before we get to the fun a few things

1.) the first chapters are very similar to the original but they will be different stories!

2.) It was was my birthday a week ago so I'm really happy and that means a lot of these things -!- yay!

3.) Still don't own YYH trust me ya'll would know

4.) STILL ALMOST M RATED-ISH IDK STILL NOT GOOD AT DECIDING BUT WHATEVER! IF YOU ARE SENSITIVE TO THIS TYPE OF MATERIAL PLEASE DON"T HATE ME THIS IS FAIR WARNING AND IN ALL CAPS WHICH MAKES IT LOOK IMPORTANT

5.) I'm writing this at 2 AM... Lets see how this works out...

Hiei's POV
I knew I was awake but I didn't open my eyes in fear that I would shatter the feeling of warmth and safety I felt. There was a slight weight on my waist and odd scents surrounded me. Nothing like the trees and forest I was usually surrounded by. I should be worried and some part of me was... But I felt something comforting about where I was. That thought jolted me out of whatever half asleep daze I was in and I forced my eyes open. I slowly became aware of my surroundings. I was being held against something nice and warm. I was comfortable which was not good. I was a thief, a criminal, I wasn't supposed to get comfortable, if I got comfortable I ended up dead. I raised my head slowly to look at the thing, or more appropriately person, I was sleeping against. I was incredibly confused to see the detective and even more confused as to why if felt so comfortably perfect. I closed my eyes again. I was still tired and against my better judgment I has decided to start trusting Yusuke back at Maize castle. I let out a small, comfortable sigh and allowed myself the comfort of Yusuke holding me. I didn't see the harm in acting like one of the humans in that stupid love 'movie' Yusuke made me watch on the little black box he called a TV since no one was around to see it. I slowly began falling back asleep when I felt the arm on my waist tighten and Yusuke nuzzled into my hair. I felt my face heat up a little but I ignored it and fell back asleep.

Yusuke's POV
I opened my eyes slowly and in my half asleep state I couldn't seem to wrap my head around why I was holding Hiei. The memories of yesterday flashed through my mind and I cringed at the memory of Keiko kissing that other boy. Probably someone from her college. I sighed Kuwabara went off to medical school and Kurama joined an exchange program and went to college in America. Koenma was still fighting with his dad so I didn't have any connections in spirit world at the moment. I don't know if I have felt this lonely since before Keiko. I had no friends and my mom was on a drinking binge. Hiei snuggled against me "hmnmhmm... Yu-suke...' He mumbled in his sleep. 'I'm not completely alone...' I thought to myself smiling. I reached up to his hair and ran my fingers through it gently. It was surprisingly soft. I was hurting after Keiko but... Hiei... Hiei was... I wouldn't have been able to describe it in words even if my life depended on it. I had no urge to move and no where to be any time soon so I just sat there and played with Hiei's hair.

Hiei's POV
My eyes fluttered open and I looked at Yusuke. He was awake and playing with my hair and he hadn't noticed I was awake yet. My face heated up. "Yu-... Detective?" I asked catching myself before using his actual name. His eyes widened and he blushed. "S-sorry..." He mumbled but he didn't remove his hand from my hair. I closed my eyes and enjoyed the way it felt so natural and comfortable to be like this with Yusuke. Then I woke up fully and realized exactly what was going on. I flinched back from him and sat up and shoved him off the couch quickly.

He seemed surprised and his face was bright red. "H-Hiei?" He asked. I looked down at him to glare but I stopped cold when I saw the hurt look on his face. I growled when I felt guilt start to rise in my stomach. I sighed "Detective?" I asked and he looked up at me "sorry... You can... You can leave if you want..." I sighed and climbed off the couch kneeling between his knees. I leaned forward and put my hands by his hips on the ground. My mouth was only a few inches away from his, "Yusuke?" I asked and he looked at me blushing.

I smirked lightly at the perfect embarrassed-nervous look on his face. "Hiei..." He breathed out and my breathe hitched. I leaned in a little. He wrapped his arms around my shoulders and laid down on his back pulling me with him. He closed his eyes and I pressed my hips against his. He moaned softly and I smirked leaning down a little to close the small space between our lips. He moaned into the kiss. I used his open mouth to slip my tongue in. I hated physical contact of any kind because it brought back bad memories but I had to admit that this felt... Perfect. My eyes fluttered closed and I lost myself in the kiss. I forgot where I was and for a minute I forgot who I was. His hands found my hair and I gasped when he pulled it. His tongue danced with mine and I realized he tasted indescribably good. 'Why would Keiko ever need more than this...?' I asked myself as he wrapped his legs around my hips.

Yusuke put his hands on my chest and pushed my up a little. I raised an eyebrow as he gasped for air. He was beautiful like this. His tan skin turned red around his cheeks, his lips slightly parted, his golden-brown eyes half lidded, and his dark brown hair messy and un-gelled. While he was trying to catch his breathe I moved down and started attacking his neck. He moaned and I smirked pressing my hips against his enjoyed the loud moan he let out as well as the bulge starting to grow there. He gasped "H-Hiei... Nngg" he groaned as I bit into his collar bone. I licked at the blood coming from the small wound. He grabbed my hair and reconnected our mouths. I smirked and dominated the kiss. 'Perfect...' I thought to myself.

Just as I thought it the door slammed open and I flinched jumping off of him. I looked at the door to see his mom standing there leaning heavily on the frame. She was obviously very drunk. She stared at us for a minute before taking a drink out of the beer bottle she had in her hand. "Hiiii... Yu *hic* suke... Who's your *hic* friend?" She asked closing the door. Yusuke blushed "Hey mom... This is Hiei..."

Ok stopping this here... I think I'm going to start writing shorter chapters so I can give you guys more updates faster

Me: Ok in this chapter I didn't do much editing (I was too horrified by my own writing) but i fixed the paragraph thing and... yeah

Sorry the update took so long it's just that everytime I went through to edit this chapter this is what happened...

Me: *BLUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHH*

Me: Oh god this is humiliating

Me: What is my life coming to?

Me: Are these honestly where my life choices are leading me?

Me: God, I'm such a freak

Me: I hate myself so much right now

Me: I'm so ashamed...

Me: Oh god just kill me now...

Me: I hope to god my mom doesn't go searching for my fanfiction that I told her I was writing back when I was innocent

Me: What if the author of the YYH manga read this...?

Me: Oh dear lord...

AND IT HAPPENED EVERY TIME I TRIED TO READ IT! So that's why I didn't full on edit the beginning... It was too much

Review and stuff

Oh I'm considering writing a YuHi fairy tale kind of thing where each chapter is a new one (Like snow white or tangled and crap like that) What do you guys think? I'll probably write it anyways because I'm excited but tell me what you think PLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE? ... I'll love you forever :)