I know I said I was gonna update at 10 reveiws, but I was struck with genius!

As they watched, the girl lifted the up her sword and then, to the entire crowd's astonishment, it burst into flames! "Holmes!" Waston cried, " is that possible?" " No! No. That is impossible for what I know." Holmes said.

The girl gave a cry and slashed around with a fast rythm, as if she was listening to a fast-beat song. In a heart beat the creatures were gone.

" Good, my little golden rose." A boys voice called out. She reached toward her ears and move a strange looking device from them. This is when Waston took a good look at her. He notice she was wearing a very short* skirt that was of golden color. Her clothes were strange to him. Her shirt was a similar color to her skirt but a little darker. In fact, her hair was also a golden color, and by George!**, Waston thought, she even has gold color eyes!

She smirked and turned around and looked at the young man. He just smiled wickedly. "Long time, no see, my golden rose." He said, "I'm not you rose." she said meanly. " Well not now, but when you finally except my propos-" Before he could say the rest, he was slashed by her fire sword. But unfortunally, for her, he dodge the blow." My, my what a bad temper" "I will never marry you! You are my enemy, part of the people who destroyed my mother's throne!" She slashed again, this time hitting straight on the mark. With a cry of surprise and pain, he went flying away to somewhere else.

She sighed and lifted up her hand, pointed to the space in front of her and said, "Portal open!" a glowing golden color ball came from her palm and a portal, as she called it, opened. she walked through, never to be seen again. Or so they thought.

Well that was a little longer and quicker then i thought it would be.

i hope you enjoyed (:

* short back then was knee high

** By George= a reference to king George