Chapter 1: Part 2

Alright before we get started I would like to thank the two people that have left me reviews and the few people that saw fit to add my story to their subscription list. I really appreciate it. As for the two who were kind enough to review:

Shadowman 747-Thanks for the advice but I'm not going to scrap this story or change the title. It is what it is for a reason. Please note that what I posted previously was only about half of the first chapter. Yes I know my story probably isn't that great-that's why it's posted here. So I can improve as a writer. If I kept this story to myself I would never be able to improve. Tsukune is going to be OoC and as far as the Valkyrie thing goes I can't really go into that at the moment without spoiling the plot. If you decide to review again please give me some advice on how to make my story better not just blatant criticism. Thanks for the review and feel free to keep reading or not. If you do decide to keep reading please keep reviewing. I clearly need all the help and advice I can get.

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Now on with the story.

'Please let me make it in time' Tsukune thought as he fell to Earth. After seeing Moka being attacked by an Ork Youkai Tsukune had broken the laws of Heaven and chosen to interfere with events on Earth. Despite the consequences of being separated from his family and having to live as a human he couldn't stand by and do nothing but watch as Moka was harmed. It didn't matter that she was a Youkai and he an angel. She needed help and he was the only one available to give it. Even if he hadn't loved her he still would have made the same decision.

"Every life, every soul, every heart is of a great and precious price. You just have to be willing to pay it." His fathers words echoed in his mind as he pushed himself to fall faster. He would protect her. Always. Regardless of the cost to himself.

Meanwhile down on Earth Moka and Kokoa were in deep trouble. The Ork was moving closer and closer to the two young vampires. 'What do I do?' Moka thought trembling with fear. "Protect Kokoa. She is your responsibility Moka." Her mothers words echoed through her mind and she knew what to do. "Kokoa…" Moka said as she began to move "When I tell you to run you run and get Dad ok?" "B-but…" the trembling three year old replied "I can't leave you alone! That Ork will kill you." Moka smiled bravely for her little sister.

"When has an Ork ever been a match for a vampire?" she said with a voice full of contempt. Kokoa looked at her big sister and smiled "Right big sis. I bet you just want me to go get Dad so you can show him how strong you are right?" "Right sis. Now remember when I tell you to go you go ok?" "Got it sis!" Kokoa replied "I'm ready when you are."

"Well look what we have here" the Ork growled out with a voice like stone being crushed into dust. "Two little vampires all alone, what should I do with them?" he asked the two girls mockingly as his massive frame towered over the two tiny girls. He leered at them as he spoke "I think I'll kill you and eat you. They say vampires are the strongest of all Youkai. Killing even one is supposed to be impossible for all but the highest level demons or angels. But a child…a child shouldn't be a problem. I think I'll take the oldest first, more meat on you." He smiled wickedly as he moved to grab Moka by the throat.

"Kokoa run!" Moka cried as she dodged the Orcs clumsy attempt to grab her . It was now or never for Kokoa to make her escape while he was distracted with Moka. Luckily her plan worked perfectly. While the Ork was distracted chasing after Moka, Kokoa made her escape. 'Please hurry Kokoa' Moka thought as she again dodged the Orks powerful hands.

"Hmph" the Ork growled as he saw Kokoa run off. "No matter. She was too scrawny to eat anyway. Fighting her wouldn't have been a challenge." He laughed as he turned to Moka. "and now there isn't anyone to distract me or keep me from killing you." He lunged for her again and this time Moka wasn't as lucky. She tripped over a protruding root and saw stars as her head collided with a sharp rock nearly knocking her unconscious.

As she attempted to get groggily to her feet and run again the Ork grabbed her by the throat and lifted her off the ground. "Heh foolish little girl. Did you honestly think you could stand alone against me? All you've done is ensure your own death. I'm going to kill you and eat you then I'm going to hunt down your sister and do the same to her."

Moka shook in fear as she tried in vain to loosen the Ork's grip on her throat. The edges of her vision were slowly going black as the Ork tightened his grip and he raised his free hand to deliver the killing blow. 'Kokoa I hope your safe' was her last thought before the Ork drove his hand through her small body and threw her to the ground. She coughed up blood as she silently pleaded for someone, anyone to come save her.

As Moka watched the Ork approach to finish her she was the Ork was forced violently into an unwelcome meeting with the hard earth of the clearing when he was met with a small object seemingly falling from the sky. Namely Tsukune.

"Ow, ow…Kami that hurt more then I thought it would. Didn't think even a boulder was that hard" Moka watched in amazement as a young boy around her age climbed out of the crater made by his impact into the Ork. The boy had hair that shone like fire and eyes as blue as the sky. He was wearing ornate heavy armor that looked to be made of some pure white metal emblazoned with a roaring lion that looked like it was etched in golden flame.

"Now where did Moka go?" the strange boy asked himself as he looked around for her. "She was here just a moment ago." 'Kami someone heard me' Moka thought to herself as she weakly cried out to attract the boy's attention. Following the faint sound of her voice Tsukune paled when he saw her broken form.

'Kami…what did this beast do to her' he thought as he looked over her body, from the bruises where she had fallen to the marks on her throat, and finally the gaping would where the Ork had driven his hand through her. As he looked at her terrible wounds he knew there was only one way to save her. He had to give her his blood. Being a god his abilities to heal were nearly infinite, only a high level demon or angel could do him any lasting harm, and even then he would still heal quickly.

"Moka" he spoke softly to her as he looked at her dull green eyes "I'm going to move you a bit so I can help you ok?" Moka nodded as he gently pulled her up and took her into his arms holding her like his mother had done for him when he was sad. Moka nuzzled her face into his neck seeking to be closer to this small boy who was attempting to comfort her. "Y-You can't help me" she spoke with a voice laced with sadness "These injuries are too much for a vampire as young as I am to survive without fresh blood." Tsukune looked at her and smiled gently.

"I know" he replied. Moka wondered why he was smiling until he offered her his throat. "Take my blood Moka" Tsukune stated simply. "I-I can't do that. Your just a human it will kill you!" Tsukune looked at her with eyes full of compassion. "Moka, I am not human, I'm an angel. My blood will help you heal much faster then any human's would. Besides you'll only have to drink as much as you need to heal your worst wound which won't be much." He smiled brightly at her before gently cradling her head and pressing his throat to her lips. "Besides even if it did kill me, Moka-chans life would be an even trade in my opinion."

Moka could only sit in his arms in silence in awe of his compassion. 'Why would he be so willing to give his life for mine' she wondered as she burrowed her face further into his neck. She breathed slowly as she made her decision. "Thank you" she whispered as she sank her fangs into Tsukune's neck. "Always" Tsukune replied so softly that she was just barely able to hear.

As she sucked Tsukune's life giving blood she marveled at the taste of it as she became more aware. 'His blood…it's perfect. So rich and vibrant.' She breathed in deeply and was hit with his scent. 'He smells like…sunlight…and a warm summer breeze through a field.' She vowed then and there that she would never forget his scent or the taste of his blood. Never forget what he was doing for her.

'Whoever you are, from now on my life, and my heart is yours' she tought as she felt her wound healing and pulled back from Tsukune's throat to look him in the eyes. "What is your name?" she asked him as he held her in his warm arms. Tsukune laughed gently as he replied "My name…My true name is a sacred secret only to be voiced to my mate the day we are wed. But while I'm here on Earth you can call me Tsukune." Moka smiled and wrapped her arms around him as she hugged him tightly. "Thank you Tsukune. From now on my life and my heart is yours and yours alone." She stated looking up at him with her emerald eyes.

Tsukune smiled at her declaration and squeezed her gently. "Thank you little one, but for now don't hold yourself to that too much. You might find someone else before we get old enough to get to that point." The feeling of his arms around her caused Moka to realize the situation she was in and she jumped out of Tsukune's arms with a gentle blush covering her face.

'She's so cute when she does that' Tsukune thought to himself. 'She's just perfect in every way.' As his thought drifted along this line he turned when he heard something moving behind him. Tsukune was suddenly violently separated with the earth as the Ork grabbed him from behind and sent him flying. "Damn meddlesome boy!" The Ork cried as he once again grabbed Moka and pulled her off the ground. "Do you think you can just ignore me? I am Tokko Komiya the strongest of my kind and not even a vampire can get away with slighting me. I was just going to kill you and your sister but now I'm going to hunt down your entire family and kill them all!"

"Oh you are now are you?" At the sound of the smooth as silk voice Tsukune, Moka and Tokko turned to face the newcomer. Moka cried out with relief as she saw her father and Kokoa standing on the edge of the clearing. "Heh and who the hell are you?" Tokko asked with contempt clear in his voice. The tall silver haired vampire replied with a voice as cold as ice "I am Issen Shuzen and that's my daughter your holding. I suggest you put her down." Shuzen briefly flared his youki and Tokko began to shake with fear. 'What is this power? Is it the true power of a vampire?" He threw Moka aside and laughed as he faced Shuzen. "Ha I've always wanted to test my strength against a true vampire's. Your all so cocky thinking your stronger than the rest of us just because you were the first Youkai created. I'll show you your place!"

Tokko rushed Shuzen intending to grab him and use his strength to break his spine, but Shuzen seemed to disappear into thin air right in front of his eyes, He looked around frantically searching for the seemingly invisible vampire. He shuddered as he heard a voice whisper softly in his ear "Fool, strength is useless unless you know how to use it. Besides your far too slow to ever hope to catch me. Learn your place!"

Tokko was suddenly intimately introduced to an ancient oak tree in the forest as Shuzen delivered a devastating kick to his back sending him headfirst into the tree and knocking him unconscious.

End Flashback

"Boy" Tsukune was suddenly interrupted from his musing by the sound of the bus driver calling him. "Headed to Youkai Academy are you? Better keep your wits about you there. Not everything is as it appears." The bus driver laughed creepily as they arrived at the drop off point for the academy. "Thanks for the advice but I'm sure I'll be alright." He replied as he got off the bus. As the bus pulled away he turned to face what was to be his home for the next three years. 'I'm coming for you Moka. I do have a promise to you to keep after all' he thought as he smiled and walked toward his new home.

Alright Chapter two! Let me know what you all think. Hopefully it's better than my last one. I must say I love the world of fanfiction. Writers may do whatever they please with the worlds we work in. Regardless if it's fiction or mythology were allowed to do whatever we want to it in the name of creativity. All of us may not be able to create the worlds we write in but we can certainly shape those worlds and the character's in them. After all isn't that what fan fiction is? Taking a world and shaping it and the characters residing in it and making a little piece of it your own because you love it so much you can't help but give it your ideas and creativity. Please read and review.