Well I hope you liked chapter 1. I made this story because this idea was going to make my head explode if I didn't publish it and had been stuck in my head for months.

If you have any torture ideas (I'm all out) that I haven't used in this story or my first story "Captured" then please let me know. And remember to R & R please it means a lot and helps a lot but no flamers please. If you have noticed, I made major changes to this chapter and the first using your reviews and by rereading it. Enjoy!

I don't own anything but the plot.

"L-leave m-me al-one!" the terrified girl screamed as the monstrous dragon's tail sharp tail began to jab her chest just above her breasts poised for her heart.

"What's going on? All I remember is falling unconscious and now this?" she thought as the fear welled up in her.

She remembered how the cold blackness had taken over her and then she suddenly wound up on Talon IV in her Zero Suit and couldn't turn on the armor or something like it during a thunderstorm running from something but she didn't know what. Ridley? Space Pirates? Or was it something else? She had then slipped in a puddle of mud and fell down a hill. Once she had come rolling to a halt she noticed she was no longer getting wet but it was still raining. She looked up and saw the glowing yellow-green eyes of Ridley, who pinned her to the muddy ground.

"There you are my little friend. You shouldn't have run because now I have to punish you for it." he smiled evilly.

Samus had stayed silent panting and filling with fear.

"Do I scare you, Samus? Do I make your fear consume you?" he cackled.

Tears of pain and fear filled her eyes as he began to squeeze her limp body and crushed the very life out of her. Then she felt the sharp blade of his tail poking her right her heart was. And that was how she got to where she was now. She shrieked as the blade buried itself into her heart.

"Aaaaahhh!" Samus screamed as she bolted upright panting and sweating.

She realized she was no longer bound and hanging. Her Zero Suit had repaired itself and now she was laying on a bed (drenched with sweat) in a prison cell in the ship's dungeon. IN fact, she was the only prisoner there.

"Aw. Did pour Samus have a nightmare?" mocked a voice behind her, which startled her (She was still jumpy from the nightmare).

"W-what do you want?" she said fearfully.

"I would like you to help me." she yelled.

"What? How would I do that?"

"You can help me by providing entertainment to amuse me. Space pirates are quite boring to watch."

"No! Get the hell away from me!"

"You can do it semi-willingly or I can rape you again." Ridley concluded.

"I'm not even letting you torture me. I'm not sinking that low!" she growled angrily as she stood up only to fall back down due to broken bones and soreness.

"Very well. I guess I'll have to change your mind. Let the torture begin."

Ridley grabbed her and tied her to the bed using the same heat-contracting cords. He tied her from chest to waist up but left her arms and legs free. He traced her outline with a clawed hand and then through her hair.

"You have no idea how long I've wanted to do this. I've dreamt of it every night since you first destroyed me."

His tail whipped out of nowhere and slashed across her chest. She cringed in pain as the blood began to pour from the wound. Ridley then poured pyro down on her bonds. Samus gasped as the air was squeezed from her lungs as the cords got tighter and tighter. She heard a terrible *CRUNCH!* from her bones chest as the ribs broke and gave way.

"Ri- *COUGH* R-Ridley… *COUGH* p-pl-ease… *COUGH* sto- *COUGH* p… y-yo-you'll k-kil-l *COUGH* me." she coughed and wheezed as she gasped for air.

"What's that I can't hear you over all that choking and hacking." He laughed.

She screamed (well whatever a scream sounds like without any air) as the metal cords crushed her insides now that the bones had gave in completely. Ridley knew he had to cool them off a few degrees so the didn't crush her vital organs like her heart and lungs.

"That's not how you ask when you want some one to do something." he chuckled with that horrible, evil laugh of his.

"P-p-plea-se!" she screamed and whined as the cords began to crush her lungs and heart

He blew icy cold breath on the cables until they retracted slightly but still squeezed her tightly. He then pointed his razor-blade tail at her heart. Samus looked extremely scared which slightly bothered him. Had he scared her that much with that torture? Had she really thought he would kill her with those cables? No. Maybe she saw the same thing in a dream or something. But she had every right to be scared. In fact, she was even crying in pain and fear. He ignored his thoughts and jabbed her as to not kill her but just injure her. He decided he had scared her enough because he didn't want her to be scarred for life or go insane.

"I think you've had enough torture for now." He crooned still trying to tease her and go soft, "And I don't want you suffocating." He said as he untied her.

Samus kept sobbing and clutched her bloody torso (some bones had torn through the skin and the gash on her chest added to it). Ridley left and on the way out took a glimpse at the security camera, which seemed lately to always be watching them very intently. "No. Torturing her is getting to me." he thought.

"Damn that asshole!" Anthony muttered.

"If only we could get a force on that ship undetected so we could get her without Ridley knowing, because he would probably kill her before he left." Dane thought.

"Did I miss something important?" a deep rumbling voice said.

"Rundas, Ghor, Gandrayda! I didn't expect you to be here." Anthony said.

"I heard there was trouble with Samus so I came here. Your cloaking tech has bugs to. Any smart, skilled tracker could find you. Luckily the Pirates aren't." Ghor replied.

"Who's the beautiful young lady crying on the screen?" Rundas asked.

"You don't recognize her?"

"Never met her."

"You must have never seen her without armor then."

"Wait, what? That's Samus?" Gandrayda asked.

"Yep." Anthony answered.

"She's stuck in a dungeon though. How did the pirates get her" Ghor asked.

Anthony and Dane showed them the video recordings they took and told them how it happened.

"Sir, Ridley is back!" said a soldier monitoring the cell.

"Lets see what he has in store for Samus this time…"

"Answer is still no, I'm not submitting myself to you." Samus said.

"I wasn't even going to ask. I was going to entertain myself because I'm bored, and watching you suffer is just so much fun." Ridley chuckled.

"I hate you disgusting freak!" she coldly replied.

"I know you do. That makes it even more fun."

"I'm not entertaining you."

"I know you wont so I'm going to get it out of more torture."

"Go ahead. It's not like I have a choice anyway."

"Your right you don't." he said snatching her up in his fist, "I did my home work. I now all of the human pressure points and weak spots." He smirked picking up the cords.

"You really like those don't you." she said drily.

"Yes. Yes I do. Actually, I love using them on you. Let's start with the basics."

He tied them around her knees, elbows, and torso. Then he tied her arms and legs to the bed and began heating them up. Samus winced at the pain as he body was being stretched out. Then the bonds around her limbs began to crush the bones and joints while the other crushed her chest and squeezed the oxygen out of her body. Her breathing got heavy and she gasped for air. Ridley then tied her up from her waist to her shoulders. And continued to heat the bonds. She couldn't get enough air to her brain and started to black out.

"No blacking out. I'm going to keep you awake the whole time." Ridley joked as he punched her in the gut.

Samus groaned in pain as she felt like he was ripping her apart. The punch felt like she was hit by a freight train. Ridley's tail was on her again. Threatening to pierce her heart. He thrusted it into her but didn't go for her heart but instead move over about two inches. Samus screamed in agony as the tail pierced her chest and her ribs (the ones that weren't already broken) gave in to the ropes crushing her weak and defenseless body.

"I found the fear you showed earlier strange coming from someone so brave, courageous, and fearless," Ridley smiled, "Then I found myself craving that look of fear on your face. Now I can't get enough of it."

"I n-not afrai-d of you…" she whispered through the pain.

"Oh come on, we both know that's not true. Tell the truth Sammy. Do I scare you? Do I fill you fear?" he teased

He looked into her deep blue-green eyes and could the fear in them, "Lets see how much of that delicious fear we can get."

She whimpered as he increased her agony by covering her arms and legs with the metal ropes and breathed fire on them. Samus was crying out in pain as her whole body from shoulder to toe was smashed by extreme force. Ridley was smiling. He was very, very happy as he saw tears of the hurt he was causing her stream down her cheek. "He was right," Samus thought, "I am afraid of him, and he's doing a good job of scaring me too. Look at him, enjoying my suffering so much…"

"I'm going to torment your very soul, Samus. Oh dear, the cords are cooling. Lets make them tighter."

45 minutes later he got bored of watching. So he tore the bonds off Samus and picked up a metal pole on the ground. Samus was very fearful now. Instead of beating her, he jammed it into the wall. He did the same with three more poles and then used the metal cords to bind her to the wall.

"W-w-what are you g-going to do to me?" Samus fearfully asked.

"Just beat on you a bit."

"I hope you burn in h-" she was interrupted by a punch to the face.

"Now where are your manners."

He used his tail like whip and smashed her upper body with it's hard, scale-armored surface. The rough, sharp scales tore through the thin Zero Suit and Samus's delicate skin allowing blood to flow freely. Ridley continued to use scare tactics to build up the fear in Samus until Ridley was satisfied and decided to leave an extremely terrified and badly injured Samus alone in a cold, dark, dirty cell. Leaving her to cry herself to sleep.

"That was just cruel." Rundas said.

"That maybe, but," Dane said, "We still need figure out how to get her out of there instead of watching him torment her."

"I know but how?" Anthony agreed.

"I have an idea." said a new voice.

"Ah,Adam, welcome! I assume you haven't seen the condition of your little friend yet have you?"

"No," Adam replied, "I haven't seen how she is doing yet. I came as soon as I was contacted and told about it."

"So what's the plan because I think her hope has officially run out."

So how was the chapter? I'm working on chapter 3 now. Remember to read and review. Really, I'm serious I've only gotten 3 total reviews so far. They mean a lot. :-) I brought in Adam and Rundas, Gohr, and Gandrayda for good measure, too.