Hello fellow fanfiction-ers! I am XxWritten Thoughts of AgesxX. This is my first story and I'm so excited to be sharing this fantasy with you all. Honestly, I did not expect any reviews or feed back on this story. It was a test to see if I had the potential to do this. I got my first review in bloodplus103, so shout out to you! Thanks for giving me the confidence to carry on with the story. You Rock! Anyway, lets carry on with the story. I forgot to do this last chapter
DISCLAIMER: I do not own My Little Pony nor am I making any money on this story. All credit goes to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.
Chapter2: New data
"Ugghh," I moaned. My whole body felt like it had been a boxer's punching bag. I shook my head clear of fog and sat up. My body, it felt weird. Looking down my heart froze. Instead of hands I had hooves, black hooves fringed in long yellowish fur like a golden gala apple. Panicking, I saw a lake and ran, or galloping rather, toward it, somewhat clumsily. I approached the glass like surface. I definitely was not prepared for the transformation. My dark auburn hair changed in to a brighter color like that of a red delicious apple. My eyes were green apple green. I jokingly thought that I looked like a basket of apples after harvest. Shaking my body free of dust I could feel something move along my sides. Craning my neck, I saw that I had WINGS! Bonafied feathered and shit wings! I stretched them out taking notice of my large wingspan. I saw a flash of color on my flank and noticed that it was an apple tree bearing apples. It had wind marks and on the wind were apples. 'Strange. Must be something specific to the equines in this dimension.' My mind then slipped these words into my head. 'Field Breeze'. They felt right. Like a name feels right. Field Breeze.
"Move out of the way!" I looked up just in time to see a blue blur crash headfirst into me, causing us both to tumble.
"Ughh, fix your landing! Sheesh!" I groaned out shaking the daze ,once again, from my head. Wanting to inspect the talking blue blur, I look over to find a small sky blue Pegasus with rainbow mane and tail with a matching rainbow bolt on either flank. 'What a strange pony' she shook her head and looked at me with the strangest cocky fuchsia eyes.
"I told you to move." She looked sideways at me. "Hey, I have never seen you around here before. What's your name?" she started to hover around me appraising what she saw.
"Field Breeze" I wanted to say Jasper, but Field Breeze is what escaped from my equine lips. "May I know the name of the blue blur that attacked me?" She didn't give me a name, just continued to blabber on.
"Wow. You sure are a big pony, aren't you? Oops, not a fat joke. Wings huh? So you're a Pegasus too? You got really shiny hooves. What do you do to take care of them? Where you from, anyway?" her wide eyes bore in to mine
"Umm… I believe I asked you a question first 'little blue bullet'" I was hoping to drive attention from myself backing slowly away from the Pegasus slowly.
"Oh, my bad, hehehe. I'm Rainbow Dash, the fastest, bestest, all around most awesome flyer in Ponyville," She pirouetted in mid air and does a little muscle man pose. She lands in front of me and I see just how big I am. I am a full head taller than the mare. "Now, back to my question. Where exactly are you from?" she turned her head and looked at me through one eye.
"Trust me when I say, you wouldn't believe me if I told you. What's this 'Ponyville' you spoke of?" I said, directing attention the current situation. She pointed her hoof (so weird not to say finger) down a dirt road, where, at the end, I could see a tiny town filled with colorful building looking kind of like a little girls play house.
"That's Ponyville. It's where my friends and I live. Hey you want to meet them?" It sounded like a good idea. I needed to collect data on the dimension anyway. What better way to do it than to talk to the local populace? I nodded and her face lit up "cool lets go!" She opened her wings and gave a powerful downward thrust, lifting her pony body off the ground. Continuing the beating of her wings, she flew higher and higher before leveling out. Looking around her, she noticed I wasn't with her. Spotting me on the ground she dropped to hover in front of me. My mouth was still agape. "Hello, are you going to fly or not?" I blushed, turned my head to the ground and pawed it. She touched the ground and looked at me. "Well, are you?"
"I can't fly Rainbow Dash." I said sheepishly, looking in her disbelieving eyes.
"Yes you can! You are a full grown Pegasai mare. It'll come naturally. Come on just try."
"… Okay… if you say so." I opened my massive wings and Rainbow's eyes bugged almost comically in her head
"Wow. You have one hell of a wing span. You must me a powerful flyer." Taking a downward thrust I feel my hooves lift of the ground. My eyes stay shut as I keep flapping, feeling myself lift higher into the sky. I level out and peek through one eye. Oh. My. Lord. The view from above the clouds was now my favorite sight in any world. There were grass lands and trees for as far as I could see. There was a tall cliff in the background that seemed to have a castle built into the cliff face. The water from the lake and the river that flowed into it shimmered in the light of the sun which if I flapped a little higher I swear I could touch. To my left was a dark forest with a creepy fog rolling out from between the trees. It gave me shivers. To my right was Ponyville, which seeing it from this angle, was not a tiny town but a sprawling metropolis with traveling multicolored dots which I presumed to be other ponies. I felt a breeze next to me and saw Rainbow Dash arrive next to me
"I was right about those wings. You could almost rival me. Almost. You ready to meet my friends, Field Breeze?" I nodded eagerly and we flew to the city, thoroughly enjoying the feel of the wing in my mane tail and under my wings.
