Okay, I'm already tired of waiting for a fifth review, and wanted some feedback on this, so I guess I'll have to deal with only four for now, but, seriously, if people keep alerting it without a review, I'll drop this and move on to another idea. And now, for your enjoyment (or disgust) here's chapter
Title: Proving Them Right
Pairing: KakaNaru
Warning: Male x Male luvvins (if KakaNaru wasn't clear enough for you), gorey stuff, and my insane fantasies
Disclaimer: If I owned Naruto this would be the manga, not a fan fiction
Random Trivia: Naruto original was supposed to wear boots, but sandals were used instead because Kishimoto likes drawing toes.
Chapter 1
'Kit, I believe it is time to move on." Kyuubi said softly as he sat next to his motionless young kit. Naruto just stood, staring at the village he had left behind from an overlook, the village seeming tiny from there.
"It's so small, Kyuu." the four year old murmured. He obscured his vision of the traitorous place with his hand, and quickly closed his open palm, giving him the illusion of crushing it. "Small places are easy to destroy."
The demon grinned, showing sharp teeth. "I have never been prouder of you, Kit. But we really should leave."
The child finally looked at him. "Do you have a place in mind?" he asked quietly, trusting the fox's choices completely.
"... Suna. The jinchuuriki of my general Shukaku resides there. He is hated as you were, it will be no trouble to persuade him to join us. If we are to wreak proper havoc on the village that destroyed your innocence, we will need to gather powerful followers, and train them to be loyal only to us." the demon replied, and Naruto nodded in understanding, and, with only a slight flare of Kyuubi's chakra, both were gone.
One Year Later
"Come on Cub, you can hit her harder than that!" Shukaku, in his summons form, called encouragement from the side lines of the training ground while Gaara and Yugito fought a fierce battle. Temari cheered with him.
"Don't let them look down on us females, Kitten, give him all you've got!" Nibi shouted to her own heir.
Naruto watched this in amusement. It hadn't taken long to find half of the jinchuuriki and convince them that if they joined him they would have a family, and, in a few years, revenge against the villages that betrayed them.
Gaara hadn't been hard to win over, his own uncle had tried to assassinate him the night before Naruto had arrived at Suna, and when the red head followed him through the gates of the village, his siblings followed. Naruto had fixed Shukaku's seal, getting rid of the mad priest while keeping the demon, then convinced the other boy to sign the raccoon summoning contract, giving the one-tailed demon just as much freedom as Kyuubi.
Yugito had been a bit more difficult, as she was older than the two boys, and an eighteen year old is unlikely to blindly follow the order of a four-year-old. That was, until that four year old defeated her without using the chakra of his 'father'. When she finally listened to his preposition, and agreed that she would act as their gaurdian if he did the same for her that he had done for Gaara. The seal was fixed, Nibi's contract signed, and the group moved on.
They then traveled to the land of water, and the six-tailed slug's jinchuuriki, Utakata. They intercepted him as he was running from his village. He followed them with no fight at all, and gladly signed Rokubi's summoning contract.
The other Jinchuuriki either refused outright to follow the boy, or didn't want to leave the villages they inhabited, no matter the treatment they received. The most interesting rejection was by Kirābī, who rapped his negative answer.
As they went, they also picked up people who, though they did not house a demon, were powerful in their own right. As they skirted around Naruto's original village they came across what at first seemed to be a pair of dead bodies, but when they neared Naruto found that he knew the two, if only by name. Uchiha Itachi and his younger brother Sasuke, who was Naruto's age, and both were alive.
It took all of the groups knowledge of healing to keep the two brothers alive, and Itachi finally awoke first, hallucinating and ranting about a snake man. Eventually, when Sasuke woke, he was able to speak normally. His family was massacred by a man named Orochimaru, who was one of the original sannin. It started with an atempt on Itachi's life by a man whom he considered a brother, Uchiha Shisui, though Itachi overpowered him, and killed him.
The snake sannin tried to gain the Sharigan, the Uchiha blood limit, but when he was met with resistance, he just killed the whole clan. Itachi just barely managed to get out with Sasuke, and they were running from the village because he knew that the massacre would somehow be blamed on him.
When he found out who Naruto was, he, at first, was horrified, and Sasuke cast his mind back, remembering the vague warning against one kid named Naruto Uzumaki, but his six year old mind couldn't quite get it. Itachi, on the other hand, remembered the three bodies found, and the message that the then four year old had left. Naruto, now seven, took the older brother aside and told him an abridged story of his short life in the village.
After wards the last remaining Uchihas joined Naruto's growing group.
Another powerful pair that joined was the nuke-nin Momichi Zabuza and his student Haku, who seemed to have no last name, but possessed a very powerful bloodline that was thought to be extinct due to the civil war in Kiri.
As the years passed and everything the demons knew was taught to their jinchuuriki, who in turn taught watered down versions of some of it to the others, the small, close knit band grew into an army. Whispers about a powerful force who did assassinations for fun grew into legends in all of the lands, and those who held grudges against their villages or just wanted the power it could bring them, ran from their homes, and caught up with the army, which was bestowed with the name Yuumei. Naruto cast away the name that the council had deemed him worthy of, and told his followers, which now numbered into the thousands, to just refer to him as Eien.
The Yuumei had grown so powerful that they had started taking down the towns that had treated them so badly, beginning with the small ones, and soon moving on to the hidden villages. They did it so quietly and efficiently that no one was the wiser for it, and no one survived that would spread the word. Soon the only hidden village they hadn't conquered was Konohagakure no Sato.
Eien was about to fulfill his promise.
And that is chapter one, which took me twenty tries, three false starts, and four hours to write, though it doesn't help that I was at school without my computer... Anyway, once more, five more reviews before chapter two comes out. This is now where I'll reply to reviews!
To Lady Laran: My first ever review! You are awesome! Thank you, and trust me, the rest is something you want to stick around for Q(^.^)
To WannaPlayAGame: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm really glad you like it, and will try to keep you happy with it!
To Tharrow: It'll be in an interesting way, trust me, I already have that planned, at least. But other than that... I'm kind of winging it.
To a. dancing. blue. flame15: Flame-sempai! Neko-chan! Tamako! I am ecstatic that you liked it. All of you are my insrpiration! And thank you for your help with this chapter!
To the people who didn't review: you are so mean! (sniffle)
A few notes before I depart!
Yuumei- Dark and Light, because they really can't figure out whether they're the good guys or the bad (and neither can I)... I guess it's really how you look at it
Eien- Eternal, because as the heir to the Kyuubi no Yoko, he is immortal.
Konohagakure no Sato- Village hidden in the leaves
The name Kaito, and the name of his demon was made up, borrowed from a story that Flame-sempai adopted, with her express permission.
That's all for now! Good night
